AsYa SS-The Boundaries That Separate Us Chapter 16 Updated Page 101 - Page 52

nice update..
dilshad knew zoya long time before..
asad is very possessive about his ammi..
now he is going to give zoya his ammi by marrying her..
very cute..
very emotional scenes happened..
eagerly waiting for nikaah..

Now coming to chapt 10 :
So Asad had a chat , a heart to heart chat with his mother about all the things he heard and gathered with his convo with Rashid..
And we also got to know about a past memory..where Dilshaad really knew Zoya..and Asad also met her...at that time ad was even jealous as he is now..to with the affection and love THEIR ammi' showers on Zoya.
AsYa part was light hearted and funny..kind of have a feeling..ki these are the only light moments till the visit NY and then his Chemo sessions starts..
So we have to cherish this as for those hard times also.
Lovely part..
AsYa nikaah next I guess.
Continue soonish.

Originally posted by: shonajain

firstly thankkk uuu so mch for an awsum update again sweetheart

I loved asads diary entry , how expressive he is to his diary...finally asad considering rashied as his abbu

now my two most fav persons of qubool hai
ASAD DILSHAD (ksg n shaliniji ) scenes n convos are THE BEST
I LOVED EVERY BIT OF THEIR CONVO...asad n dishad are ADORABLE

CUTEST part ASYA...MUAAAHHH
they are cute adorable charming n wat not

after ur every part I always feel that kaaash Mai yeh qh Mai dekh paati
YOUR TRULY AN AWSUM WRITER


LOVE YOU
SHONA

Aww thanks Shona! I am so so happy that you liked it. :D

QH was really awesomee...but then all hell broke loose like they say. Did you read *I am forgetting her name* post titled Chaos is inherent in all compounded things...She described it so beautifully, what went wrong and how the story should have proceeded. I love that post dude! <3


Thank you again.


And yes, KSG and Dilshad were indeed very very good...the best. I loved Asad, Zoya, Dilshad, Najma, Appi, Jeeju, Ayan & Humaira. Still do. <3 All the actors were perfect as well.

Originally posted by: Kabhibloom

Awesome. Amazing.
Loved it.
Asad's diary entry was good.
All the scenes between asya n dilshad were nice.
Continue soon.

Thank you.
Yes they are one adorable mother-son duo! <3
I will will post the next part tomorrow. :)

Originally posted by: nilusoni

awesome part

asad's diary entry is little emotional and little sweet

asad and dilshaad talk wow

asya nik jhok and antics loved it

plz pm me for next part

eagerly waiting for asya nikaah

continue soon

Thanks Nilu.
I will pm you for the next to next update, okay? Internet connection ain't that good, so.

Originally posted by: Missadorable

tat was cute ,funy nd emotional chaptr...lovd asya bickerng esp adorble thng nd mesing up hs hair was vry funny nd cute...asya part in f.b is so chweet...nw waitng fr nxt cntnue soon

Thanks Miss Adorable. I like it that you like it xP
Next update-tomorrow. :)

Originally posted by: Shubh007

Awesome & Interesting Update...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Is Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

Update Was Portrait Beautifully...⭐️

Update Next Part Soon...😃

Thank you Shubh :)

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hey Preeti..
It was a very good and thoughtful Insight into AAK's...mind , heart and his thoughts about all the changes in his life..he faced in a day..and about to face in near future..
Very Wonderful and on point also..can't ignore the fact that he used Allah Miyan* as how Zoya complains..He in a way was pleading to be given a chance to live this life for his Lovely family..
As they say..in difficult times we get to see our true relations..he also witnessed how much and many people actually loves him..
Great.
Kudos to you for this Diary thing...
But its a little request..ignore if didn't find it logical.
Keep a gap between Diary's entry and The Update..if possible..
I don't know beacuse these entries are totally diff entities..and they are not part of the update also..so was just saying.
Again leaving this off...a very good written part..

Thanks Mayur.
Yes, her effect on him is way more than he realises.
No doubt, he is very strong but he is intelligent enough to know what camcer actually means. And that man who has never depended on anyone doesn't like what future has in hold for him. Plus he can clearly see all his family members are scared and he is helpless. And then, the Abbu he has had a love-hate relationship all his life (He doesn't know if he loved to hate him, or hated loving him) comes and decides to tell him that hatred he has kept in store for his Dad all his life might not be Rashid's fault. And then, there is Zoya as well. He knows one day she would come to know of the truth, then he doesn't know how to console her. Hell he doesn't even know if he will be there by her side to console her. So yes he is at a really wek emotional point. My heart goes out to him, and all of them. And it's only the beginning.

Yeah about the diary thingy, I get what you mean to say. And you are right. But this time it's him writing his diary entry expressing all his feelings which he can't tell anyone. And besides that, he is not gonna be able to write his entries for a long time now. So I guess we can excuse it this time. It's like a part of the update, unlike the last one.

Thank you again! I am so lucky to have you as one of the ardent readers of this fiction. ^_^

Originally posted by: binuuu

nice update..
dilshad knew zoya long time before..
asad is very possessive about his ammi..
now he is going to give zoya his ammi by marrying her..
very cute..
very emotional scenes happened..
eagerly waiting for nikaah..

Yep she did...and she forgot because she had pretty traumatic experiences that certain day, so it's like the memory stayed buried deep inside somewhere, only to get back when such a strong catalyst was used.

Thank you Binu for liking this ^_^

Next update kal ko.

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Now coming to chapt 10 :
So Asad had a chat , a heart to heart chat with his mother about all the things he heard and gathered with his convo with Rashid..
And we also got to know about a past memory..where Dilshaad really knew Zoya..and Asad also met her...at that time ad was even jealous as he is now..to with the affection and love THEIR ammi' showers on Zoya.
AsYa part was light hearted and funny..kind of have a feeling..ki these are the only light moments till the visit NY and then his Chemo sessions starts..
So we have to cherish this as for those hard times also.
Lovely part..
AsYa nikaah next I guess.
Continue soonish.

Yes Asad had decided to not tell her, but hey he is a human only, a hurt man. How much can he keep to himself!

I would try include as many light moments as possible *we will see a bit of jealous Asad definitely* but then it's gonna be serious of course. Damn serious in fact. I don't wanna think of that now though! :'(

And yep @Mehak there are many fabulous OSes and stories on the forum. Check them out. Have you read Bheegi Di's Faasle? I love it the most I think. It's the first one that comes to my mind. ^_^

Btw Mayur tell me something, I am trying to keep this story as practical as possible, cutting down the dupatta romance and stuff. Is it enough? You get what I mean, right? Please let me know your honest opinion. Everyone else, you too tell me, okay?

Thanks again.

Ya after the shopping *which will be long haha* I will skip to the nikah directly.