AsYa FF Our Lives Entwined - Thread 3 - Chapter Seven To Ten - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Okay i will try making this comment long!
First of all awesome update!
Totally loved it!


'Its my good luck that I don't knock at the door.' She blurted out and he looked at her back in disbelief.

'I mean --- why are you not wearing your shirt ?' She said and controlled her giggles, changing the topic and he realized that he was not wearing his shirt still.

I totally loved this part!I loved the way she changed the topic.I could imagine this happening in the show and Asad's(KSG) reaction😆


'Easiest way to become a doctor.' She clicked proudly after typing in search bar and jumped on the couch making a serious face like doctors but was annoyed to not find any useful result.

Seriously!She searched for this!😆She has gone ttally crazzy!😆


'Only looking ! I am quite possessive about him.' Said Zoya sternly while coming out of the elevator.

Okay so Zoe's possesive about her to be husband that was great to know.If asad knew he would be really happy right?

'Why should I waste time ? I have become a doctor only to keep my eyes on him.' Zoya said while pointing towards her own eyes proudly.

Seriously!This girl can do anything😆.She became a doctor to keep an eye him.WOW!


She gave a confused look as soon as she saw the girl turning towards her. Zoya didn't take time to recognise her. She was Asad's school friend Tanveer but what was she doing here now. Zoya was not interested in meeting her after so many years while Tanveer was also shocked to see her.

Ok..Tanveer.I surprised i thought this was a Tanveer free story.But what ever reason you put her here it must be important.

One queston.No actually two!
WHY DID YOU STOP THERE AND WHEN ARE YOU UPDATING???????

Now i can't wait for the next update..

One more question.
Who do i assume as Dr.Sameer?

Seems like Dr.Sameer likes Zoya.
But he was old right?

Long enough?😆
Next time i will make it even longer!
But please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


-Me😆

Ps:This comment is for a faster update the faster your updates the longer my comments😆
Wow that rhymed😆

Lovely banner Maliha😃
Edited by delena_ - 11 years ago
-AppleOfMaEye- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

Credit -Maliha-
Okie so finally I got a banner for my story and all the credit goes to Maliha who surprised me with this when I turned sizzler. 😎 I hope you all also liked it as much as I am loving it !! Thank You so mucchh Maliha for this amazing gift 😳 Now I want you to surprise us all with an update of your SS - We Belong Together 😉 I hope you are planning to continue it sooon !! Thank You soo mucch in advance for that 😆
Love you my rofling friend with Cap R ❤️

Allah Miyan!
what's wrong with you Mr.Khan,,, sorry Mr.Khan ki Ammi,,,
this much thanx n love,,
n that thanx all on one side,, you asked me to update mae SS🤣

now i want to say you too,,, i love you witha capital L🤣🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
short update yet again🥺
bubble where r u these dayss??? 🤣 i dnt see u much in the forum😭
ok soo now the whole doctor request in the first update made sense😃
soo asad is hell of a confused guy.. i feel like beating him wiith a chappal😡
one moment he's mesmerized the next moment he's i dnt love u types🤓
zoya sees his six packs😳
Dr.Sameer asked zoya for coffee but she declined😡 i wanted her to fall in his arms❤️
how about Dr.Sameer Saigol???😳☺️
nisha the zoya clone n friend in the hospital😃
but plzzz u had to name the friend TANVEER😡
plzz for godsake name her either Zuleikha, Ghazala, Sughrah, Fazila, Shadaan, Batoola, Firdous, Firoza,Khazina, Khushbakht, Nooran anything but not TANVEER😡🤣🤣
zoya gets angry on seeing asad with tanveer..
asad stops her n bammm CLIFFY😡😡😡
anyways i love u kya karun❤️😡
CONRATULATIONS ON THREAD3!!! PARTYYY ALL NIGHT🥳 EYE TO EYE
update fast!! cuz i knw kal chutti😉

Mahuuu
Edited by maha2012 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
today am the frst to hit the like too,, and i guess the frst to read the update too🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Hmmm... Nice update... Looks like Dr. Sameer will see stars from Asad soon... 😉
Liked to know how possessive both of them are ...😊 But felt this one was again a short update... Take 2 days but give a long update plzzz... Congratulations on winning in 2 categories...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
I love how cute Zoya is. Oooh Dr Sameer likes her
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Congrats Bubble!! You deserve it!! 🥳👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18




Firstly for the new thread , nxt for becoming sizzller , next winning award which u deserve 😃😃😃

Ohh god Iqra dii has reallyy updatedd soo soon was my first reaction😆😆😆

And i should say this tym for sure u hv to make 10Threads for this FF 😉😉😉

So now cumng to the updatee it was a bit short bt whatever it was it was worth readingg😊😊😊

The flashback scene was superbbb , Asad shirtless hayeee and their convo abt the the demands was awesomee i loved itt ❤️

Nisha and Zoya's convo was aalso good ...and zoya warning nisha that u cn nly see him nt more than dat was sooo cutee of her...😆😆😆

Ohhh soo even tanveer in the FF...woww now we can see even jealousy zoya...😆😆

Updateee nxt prt veryyy soon-ishhh pretty pleaseee😭😭😭😭😭

Love

Nisha❤️

Edited by nisha150 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
It was lvly... Continue soon. . . .
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
nice update.so next update we can see jealousy zoe.

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