asya ff :change my mind(asad as rockstar) CHAPTER 4 UPDATED - Page 88

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rockstar_16

awww...so sorry sanika
par uske baad i wont get time😉
isliye update kiya
agar nahi karti toh fir tujhe update 6th feb ko milta 😆
and u r still early then shanky 😆 voh toh online tha fir bhi late ho gaya 😆

ae somu tu mujhe taunt kar rahi he chipkali😡🤣
me tha online par soo rha tha...🥱
tujhe bataya toh tha ke me seedha sopher me aata hu [ar
online pure time rehta hu.. lekin res toh kiya na itna jldi...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
unres on pg 117😆😉
dekh le tu 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome

Loved it

Keep writing

Thanks 4 the pm

Love
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Beautiful confession
Thanks for PM
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey dear somu..

this update is so wonderful..

Asad and zoya confess their feelings..

and they kissed

everyone happy..

loved their conversation.. and their point of views..

and her friend tori came.. good..

cant wait for next..

so continue soon..plz


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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey!! rocky..sorry couldnt comment on your chapter before...it was totally a hectic day for me...sorry...
now coming to the update...it was a

WOW!!!!!!!!!!
Really...it was fantastic...i was like oh my god!!! it was AMAZING!!!!!
i totally loved asad's POV

"where is zoya?" i asked. no answer. they all looked at me, worried. then at each other. "where is zoya" i said more sternly. rehan pushed aatif towards me. aatif glared at them.
"um...zoya is...is unconscious...or may be in c-coma.." aatif quitely said the last word. I was shocked. "w-what hap-happened..?" i asked barely being able to speak....
... oh poor asad...was barely able to speak wen he heard of zoya's state...

"i have to...u r not understanding...she needs me.. and i m going to be there for her always" i said sternly......
...yay!!! go asad go!!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
i walked over to zoya's room. i sat in the chair next to her bed. i held her small , soft hand. i entwined my fingers with hers.
"come on ,love. please wake up" i begged.
"remember when we were walking together ? and everytime we passed a food place, i stopped in front of it u know why becoz i m really a foody person.i didn't tell u becoz i thought u will laugh at me and say that i m such a bhukhadh.remember when i gave u that rose u were blushing and showing me your perfect edible dimples i had an sudden urge to touch them to eat them.remember when we walked, while you held the little red rose , and we talked about random things ? the little nothing things ? well i do. and i love it. i miss it. i want this whole day over again. i want to get you the flower when it blows away, and know that the car is coming my way. i want to be your superhero. i want to save your life...please wake up, love...I-I actually woh...that I-I LOVE U...yaar please...just wake up,love. i said with tears in my eyes.i was completely broken.i turn around to see the other boys standing on the door way...awww!!!...that was sooo sweet... i loved these lines...beautiful...

these lines reminded me the song ' say something '

"AWE!! ASAD thats so cute...u love my pet so much!" ayan said crying"...heheh!!! my comic king...

"you know, you guys can't just go ease dropping on people when they r having a very important conversation with someone" i said sternly...oho! asad..embarassed...

"yeah ...with someone who is asleep" rehan said...really rehan...its not time to joke...hahah!!!

"she will wake up. i know she will." i said glaring at rehan...oho!!! protective asad into action
Edited by ashrina - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
so here i go...

about intro...

so the rockstar... writes about another rock star,,,,,,

intro is good... will comment as i read...
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Posted: 11 years ago
hmm... too much attraction between them at the very first sight...

and he asked the girl tp come and live with him... just like that... in their first meeting...

so every girl have a crush on him... who wont... after he is AAK= KSG...😉

zoya being zoya.. forgot her sorrow for a moment.. and tried to discover.. it is asad...

zoya is nerves... atlast when she released...

by the sweety ,

u can me update.. chottu...
look at urs.. u right in big fonts and cover...the space...😆

i think i should follow the same too...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Are chipkali new zoya somu tu dusra ff kab update karegi...
Is janam me toh mil jayega na update...
Kitna wait karati he tu...
Ek update ke liye kya kya krna padta he aur ye rocky aaram se
holly movie dekhti he... Huh?

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