SantaClaus &Tooth Fairy-FF,Chapt 16 updated,(23/7) PG 70 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: akaswan

RES😃


First thank you for this double update

I loved to read them

So we finally see Asad

I did not knew that the old lady was Dilshad it's only now that i know that

What happen to Asad and where is the mother of his children

Continue soon please

you are welcome Dear .. and glad you liked the updates.. you didn't know it was Dilshad,, thought many would have guessed..

but now you have guessed that Naina is Asad's child.. thats great.. as for her mom, you will come to know who it is in next one or two chapters.😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Linnet


Awesome

Please update soon

Love it

Keep writing

Thanks 4 the pm

Love
Linnet
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Thanks Linnet... will try to update soon.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: --Radhika--

Fantastic chapter!

Asad was finally introduced . . . wonder why he is so rude!
They are neighbors now, sounds interesting!
Continue soon! <33 (:

Thank you Radhika.. Asad appeared rude even in the begginning of QH isn't it?.. so here also Asad is basically Akdu and rude.. and he carries a lot of baggage.. but what made him like that is different from the original QH story... and don't worry even in this story Zoya will change him.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: PreetiASYArocks

Ahan! Finally Asad Ahmed Khan is here!
I loved how you let Zoya get to know Dilshad first and then Asad!
Asad Ahmed Khan sounds familiar to her? I wonder why! Any thing related to office? 😕
Waiting for next update! 😃

hehe yea finally AAK is here.. one thing we all love in QH is Zoya - Dilshad bonding.. so i wanted to explore that.. and although this story is different from QH, i want to keep some of the aspects of QH and the basic essence of most of the characters intact even in this story also..

you guessed right.. yea its something related to office and will be explored later.😊

PS.. and i am waiting for a SS or a FF from you.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Nice story
Read all parts in a go
U explain zoya past life & present life beautifully
Now looking forward for asad life
& about naina, who is she & what relation with asad
Plz add me in ur pm list
Continue soon
Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
awesome update
loved it n zoya is world's best cook 😲😆
asad n zoya now r neighbours n started fighting 😆
zoya is really very funny she comes to his house as if she is member of their house🤣
this girls is really very weird sometimes😆
sorry for late comment😊
update soon n thanks for the update😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
hey tis is amazing n fabulous...
totally luv it...
zoya is so cute...
beautifully written...wow asad n zoya are neighbours...
n i guess he is also her boss...
do continue soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Update soon please 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
When is the next update coming? Pleaseee updateee!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: GitaIyer

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Again back to back updates. Loved it. More so, Bcoz finally asad makes an entry.
Zoya's concern and kabhi Khushi kabhi gham outlook towards shifting, I could very well identify with.
My hubby works in a transferable job. Have shifted home 3 times in the past 10 years. It looks exciting to begin with, but when the enormity of the task hits us, the excitement takes a backseat.

Hi Gita.. so sorry for my late response.. So you could relate to Zoya's feelings regarding shifting.. yea its exciting to think of shifting to a new place and make a new life but once the reality hits it no longer is exciting... Even i'm not living at my own home and till 6 years back had to shift around frequently.. even during my school and college , lived away from home and its such a nostalgic feeling whenever i visit my own home.

Zoya asking for salt, people go for sugar.😆
Asad zoya first meeting- quite salty. Don't see it becoming sweet in the near future.

Hehe yea their first meeting and the relationship is going to be salty for a while.
Zoya dilshad - it's always dilshad who sees the goodness of zoya first.
Zoya-Sara glad that zoya has a friend, who cares about her.
Naina the mystery continues..

Naina is really not a mystery.. i think everyone has guessed who she is.. but yea the story behind Naina would be interesting.. at least i hope so.. but i'm afraid some may not like it but i want to continue as i have envisioned.

Awesome kaussar.
But still the tooth fairy has eluded us. Waiting eagerly for next update. Hope it will be again a double treat.😊
Thanks Gita.. tooth fairy will come in time.. Santa and Tooth Fairy is Zoya only .. i just gave that title to indicate the nature of Zoya and what kind of a person she is and also because i started the story during Christmas time... will hopefully update soon.. a little busy these days..😃

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