SantaClaus &Tooth Fairy-FF,Chapt 16 updated,(23/7) PG 70

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taznim

@kaussar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#531

Originally posted by: FaultInMyStars
So sweet...
Update soon!

thanks Preeti... such a short comment this time.. you didn't like the update?😉

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taznim

@kaussar

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#532

Originally posted by: sasir
plz update soon

Will try to update ASAP... but next update will be of BW..😃

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taznim

@kaussar

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#533

Originally posted by: maha2012
just love ur story👏
girl u write with perfection😉
finally asad is opening up to zoya.. spending time with his daughter..
when will u update the next part😭
n ur other story update?😭

Thanks Maha😃... glad you are liking the story... next update will be of BW.. will update that soon.😊

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#534

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#535

such an endearing update!!
loved asya's bits...
n the change in asad...good going!!

especially feeling happy for naina...

continue soon

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#536

wonderfull n amazing...

luv it...

beautifully written...

luv the way hw asad n zoya are bonding between with each other...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#537

Originally posted by: kaussar

Are don't cry dear even i m very emotional wid this decision but i still stick 2 it. I have been following this story since d 1st part & this & every Asya story is special 2 me. I still have my points & u have ur points but i don't want us 2 justify each other cuz i respect u as a writer & frnd & want 2 maintain our frndship like that. At d end its ur story & i think i shouldn't have interfered at d 1st place itself but u know na once u love something u can't help but put ur inputs so just shared my thoughts wid u. My intentions were never 2 influence ur story.

& Honestly i would not want 2 continue this if Asad is Naina's father cuz it will only hurt & make me sad & if i won't b happy after reading it how will i give u my honest replies saying its fantastic & i loved it while i won't b. Honestly this story is very close 2 my heart & u don't how sad i feel leaving it like this but i can't help. Don't blame me blame my heart.😳😆

Edited by jas91 - 11 years ago

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#538

More than u i m sad cuz if i quit this story u r writing Broken wings only which will b completed b4 this what will i do after this.😭 This was ur 1st story i read & fell in love wid.😃 I m gonna miss u so bad.😭🤗

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#539

Good progress in both...

Asad move forward after he share his burden...with zoya there is a
change in him...
he got himself and his family back...
Dilshad saw the changes... in asad... but how..

Zoya knows what she is doing... helping this broken family...
in the process she is healing to...

Asya got closer... love the way... the story moves...

awesome update..