SantaClaus &Tooth Fairy-FF,Chapt 16 updated,(23/7) PG 70

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#501

Finally an updt😆

so Asad is also coming wid them😃

loved d line where Najma was more concerned about him going wid them instead of his leg😆

Asad is smart hid his reason very smartly😆

Loved Asya's silent convo wid their eyes😃

Every1's happiness wid Asad coming wid them & him feeling happy about Zoya sitting wid him in d front seat was a sweet scene😃

Asad liked Zoya in westrn dress 😛

did Zoya used 2 wear Suits b4 i didn't noticed i though she always wear jeans😕

I think i have forgot d story😳😆

They played Antakshri & Zoya was blown away wid Asad's voice

Asad shared about his past trips & felt guily about avoiding them from past 5 yrs but Zoya wisely put him at ease...they share very mature bond now😃

Asad let Zoya drive his car😲...this is huge step cuz i know when he injured his hand in d past he didn't let her drive his precious car😆

Zoya was happy listening her name from him & his trust😃

Dillu Naj were surprised when they saw Zoya on drivers seat😊

Allah miyan Asad was not happy wid Naina wearing swimsuit but Zoya talked him out😃

Loved there scene's in water slides Asad's effeort 2 make Naina happy😊

I wanted a scene when some gye saw or approached Zoya when she was in water & Asad's jealous reactions on that😆...wishful thinking😳

Zoya missed & wished she had such family😭

Asya talked about calling each other wid their 1st name & d classic i lock...i loved d scene😛

they talked about DNA test & Asad again admired Zoya 4 her advice & wiseness👍🏼

Asad noticed & asked about Zoya's sadness & she shared a little of it

but Asad was moved 2 see her courage & his feelings after hearing his name from her...awesomly penned👏

Ammi came at d time & teased them & Asya felt they were caught😆

d last para was awesome it showed that Asya broke 1 another barrier & got a little more close🤗

superb part I loved it👏

I was smiling throughout😃

now i want updt of Broken wings soon😆

Edited by jas91 - 11 years ago

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taznim

@kaussar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#502

Originally posted by: Divya.S.R
WOW!! Loved this a lot..
You give long chapters.. It's really interesting.. 👏
Loved the transformation of Asad.. 😳
but the betrayal of Tanveer in their flashback.. Urghh!! 😡
Dilshad and Zoya's bond is beautiful... even adorable is Zoya and Naina's bond.. ⭐️🤗
The development of Asya's relationship is also good..
Zoya soothes Asad when he is upset.. 😳

Update the next one.. can't wait...

Thanks Divya... so you have finally read this story... glad you loved it.😃

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taznim

@kaussar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#503

Originally posted by: Divya.S.R
Asad agreed to come suddenly.. shocking everyone.. 😳
Najma prodding him to get his answer was so cute... 😆
He has started trusting Zoya a lot.. That he gave her the car to practice driving.. 😳
Loved the picnic scene a lot.. 😃
Asad bonding with Naina was so adorable.. 😃
So Asad gets a little glimpse of Zoya's past..
Waiting to see how they succeed in get the DNA test done and what the result would be..
Hope it's all good..

hehe yea he shocked everyone in the morning and through out the day as well..😉
Najma and Asad bonding is always very adorable..

yea has started to trust her and unknowingly and knowingly he depends on Zoya a lot now.

Glad you loved the picnic scene because it didn't come out the way i wanted and i was not very satisfied with it... but since everyone was asking for an update i didn't want to rewrite it again and delay the update.😆

yea lets see how they manage to the DNA test.😃

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taznim

@kaussar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#504

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet
Awesome!!
So much progress in AsYa's relationship!!
Asad & Naina bonding!!
Everyone happy!!
Zoya shared her feelings!!
Asad understanding her!!
He considered her as part of family!!
Loved it!

yea there is so much progress although most of it is subtle.
And yea he made an effort and bonded with Naina as well... he has started to accept Zoya's words and act upon it... and his change of mind is making him understand Zoya also better.
And yea he considers her as part of family now and told her that his family is her family... lets see if he one day says that his heart is also hers.😉

thanks Maneet.😃

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taznim

@kaussar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#505

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Awesome update
Asad agreed to go for picnic with them
All played antakshiri & asad sang a song which touched zoya
He enjoyed his time with naina & all 3 was happy to see them playing
Asad & zoya convo was wonderful
Dilshad teased him for let zoya drive his car
Plz continue soon
Thanks

thanks Dear... yea Asad bonded with Naina a lot that day.. and he has also become much closer to Zoya.. and they all had s good time because Asad came with them.😃

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taznim

@kaussar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#506

Originally posted by: pinks2911
Kaussar, that was such a wonderful update..

Asad agreed to come with them.. And he gave his car to Zoya??
He is changing for the good..

Loved Asad and Najma's conversation.. It was very cute.. Najma pestering Asad..

Asad and Naina were cute too.. He is making an attempt..

Poor Zoya.. Feeling sad for her..

AsYa conversation was so beautifully penned..

Great update.. DO continue soon :)

Thanks Dear.. glad you loved the update... yea Asad is changing for good.
loved writing Asad - Najma part so i am happy you loved that part.
yea Zoya has such a sad past... more of it will come later.

Will try to update soon.. thanks.😃

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taznim

@kaussar

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#507

Originally posted by: jas91
Finally an updt😆

so Asad is also coming wid them😃
loved d line where Najma was more concerned about him going wid them instead of his leg😆

yea Jas i finally updated and made you all happy i guess... and Asad went with them and made everyone there happy.😆
Asad is smart hid his reason very smartly😆

Yea that he is... he is always a chupa rustum right?
Loved Asya's silent convo wid their eyes😃
Every1's happiness wid Asad coming wid them & him feeling happy about Zoya sitting wid him in d front seat was a sweet scene😃

yea little things about Zoya has started to affect him.
Asad liked Zoya in westrn dress 😛
did Zoya used 2 wear Suits b4 i didn't noticed i though she always wear jeans😕
I think i have forgot d story😳😆

Yea you have..😆 actually Zoya here is born and brought up in Bhopal even though she did her college education in delhi... so dressing wise she natuarlly follows Bhopali tradition and usually wear Salwar suits.

They played Antakshri & Zoya was blown away wid Asad's voice
Asad shared about his past trips & felt guily about avoiding them from past 5 yrs but Zoya wisely put him at ease...they share very mature bond now😃 Yep

Asad let Zoya drive his car😲...this is huge step cuz i know when he injured his hand in d past he didn't let her drive his precious car😆
Yea that time although he finally allowed her to drive he did not do it willingly... but now he willingly gave it on his own.. so thats a major change.

Zoya was happy listening her name from him & his trust😃
Dillu Naj were surprised when they saw Zoya on drivers seat😊
Allah miyan Asad was not happy wid Naina wearing swimsuit but Zoya talked him out😃 hehe... after all he is Akdu Ahmed khan even in this.
Loved there scene's in water slides Asad's effeort 2 make Naina happy😊
I wanted a scene when some gye saw or approached Zoya when she was in water & Asad's jealous reactions on that😆...wishful thinking😳
LOL you have too much imagination... i didn't think of making him jealous.

Zoya missed & wished she had such family😭
Asya talked about calling each other wid their 1st name & d classic i lock...i loved d scene😛
glad you loved the eye locks.😃
they talked about DNA test & Asad again admired Zoya 4 her advice & wiseness👍🏼
Asad noticed & asked about Zoya's sadness & she shared a little of it
but Asad was moved 2 see her courage & his feelings after hearing his name from her...awesomly penned👏 thanks.😃
Ammi came at d time & teased them & Asya felt they were caught😆

hehe..but Ammi doesn't yet know that they have become this close and she unaware of late night talks, and early morning visits etc... if only she knows.. ..
d last para was awesome it showed that Asya broke 1 another barrier & got a little more close🤗 Yep.

superb part I loved it👏
I was smiling throughout😃
glad you loved it that much.😃
now i want updt of Broken wings soon😆
LOL give me a little break.

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#508

Originally posted by: kaussar

LOL you have too much imagination... i didn't think of making him jealous.

u missed a golden chance there sweety koi nahi koi dusra mouka mil jayega i hope😆

hehe..but Ammi doesn't yet know that they have become this close and she unaware of late night talks, and early morning visits etc... if only she knows.. ..

If Dillu would have knew she would have raced her imaginary horses 2 marry Asya😆 but this time i don't want her 2 know about Asya soon or even if she notice 2 not verbalize it😉 cuz Asad is already wounded 4 d last time forced relationship.🤢 He will go far away from Zoya cuz of Dillu's involvement & nagging. This time i want Asya 2 realse it themselves & than talk wid Dillu 2 marry them.😳😛

btw do remember not 2 make Naina Asad's daughter😳 DNA test is coming soon in nxt 1 or 2 parts😆