SantaClaus &Tooth Fairy-FF,Chapt 16 updated,(23/7) PG 70 - Page 52

Originally posted by: jas91

LOL you have too much imagination... i didn't think of making him jealous.

u missed a golden chance there sweety koi nahi koi dusra mouka mil jayega i hope😆

hehe..but Ammi doesn't yet know that they have become this close and she unaware of late night talks, and early morning visits etc... if only she knows.. ..

If Dillu would have knew she would have raced her imaginary horses 2 marry Asya😆 but this time i don't want her 2 know about Asya soon or even if she notice 2 not verbalize it😉 cuz Asad is already wounded 4 d last time forced relationship.🤢 He will go far away from Zoya cuz of Dillu's involvement & nagging. This time i want Asya 2 realse it themselves & than talk wid Dillu 2 marry them.😳😛

btw do remember not 2 make Naina Asad's daughter😳 DNA test is coming soon in nxt 1 or 2 parts😆

yea i missed it..😆

Agree with you regarding Dillu... i had the same thought. this time she should not know about it.

Regarding Naina i haven't still completely decided what to do... but i may have to disappoint you... because future story wise and for Naina's sake its best if she is Asad's daughter... but don't worry it will come out beautiful even if she is Asad's daughter... and as i said in introduction many times our prince charming might be someone who was married earlier and had a child as well...and even then Asad is Zoya's prince and they are meant to be together... fate has Zoya in store for Asad... and may be thats why his marriage with tanveer didn't work out despite him trying to make it work...😃

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

beautiful update 👏

thanks Dear.😃... glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: potternerd

Ha finally you updated !!!!

superb update

loved that zoya's talk had some effect on asad

he joined them for the picnic 👏

And omg he let Zoya drive 😳😃

Naina must be happy that her father was spending time with her

Nice to know that Asad understands Zoya 😊

loved the update ⭐️

Continue soon 😊

hehe yea finally an update..

yea Zoya's talk had an effect on Asad... much more than even she thought and he decided to go with them as well.

And yea he let Zoya drive surprising everyone and he even bonded with Naina.
thanks for the lovely comment.😃

Originally posted by: kals82

nice update

thanks Dear... glad you liked it.😃

Originally posted by: sasir

awesome

loved it

amazing

finally the equation BTW asya are changing

nice

plz update soon

thanks.😃.. glad you loved it... yea their equation is changing slowly.😊

Originally posted by: kaussar

Thanks Divya... so you have finally read this story... glad you loved it.😃

Love the update

lovely update...
it was a very very very pleasant outing...
hoti kese nahi Mr. Akdu jo agreed to accompany... roz roz thode hi aesa hota hai...
the car ride started with zeal n zest bt thn all slept n to everybodys shock they woke up to see zoya driving...
well dosti, trust n comfort level inna badh gaya hai to highway pe driving to jayaz hai boss...
all enjoyed to their full ...
naina was so happy with her abbu on her side...
but during all this zoya felt a void...
she has missed all this... a family all her life...
asad could make it from her expressions that something is amiss...
n thn she told him the reasons...
this first name basis is seeming difficult fr zoya...
abi problem ho rahi hai... no worries... ek din aadat ho jayegi...
so the fun filled day came to an end ...
continue soon

Originally posted by: neenabinu

awesome kaussar

thanks Neena... glad you liked it😃

Originally posted by: Divya.S.R

Yup.. finally caught up with the story.. 😆

and how could I miss such a good story..? 😳

hehe thats nice to know... thanks.😃