SantaClaus &Tooth Fairy-FF,Chapt 16 updated,(23/7) PG 70 - Page 53

Regarding Naina i haven't still completely decided what to do... but i may have to disappoint you... because future story wise and for Naina's sake its best if she is Asad's daughter... but don't worry it will come out beautiful even if she is Asad's daughter... and as i said in introduction many times our prince charming might be someone who was married earlier and had a child as well...and even then Asad is Zoya's prince and they are meant to be together... fate has Zoya in store for Asad... and may be thats why his marriage with tanveer didn't work out despite him trying to make it work...😃

Awesome update. Loved it. Continue soon.

lovely update

Originally posted by: anopama

Love the update

Well worth the wait

So asad has open up again he is going twitch them yay

Najma so excited even Naina but she don't show

Oh he is looking at zoya hmmm

So she ends up in front seat with him he is happy about that

Wow he sings too for their game nice and he allows her to drive 😳

Najma and dilshad 😲To see zoya driving can't believe asad allowed her

The bonding between Naina and asad was beautiful he made an effort and everyone was happy

Oh asad and zoya com vat lunch wow he want her to use his first name too

The eye lock the feelings they can't name

So DNA problem. Zoya farooqui will fixfix😆

So hope it turns out in asad favour but even if it don't I know he will still love Naina

Asad wants to know more about zoya pass interesting very curious my family is yours

Continue

thanks Anopama... if it was worth your wait my day is made.😆
Yea it was all about Asad and Zoya's changing relationship... its just little things right now... but they show how much Asad is being drawn towards Zoya and has started to accept her.
Yea he will love Naina either way and Zoya won't let anything bad happen to Naina.😃

Originally posted by: jas91

Regarding Naina i haven't still completely decided what to do... but i may have to disappoint you... because future story wise and for Naina's sake its best if she is Asad's daughter... but don't worry it will come out beautiful even if she is Asad's daughter... and as i said in introduction many times our prince charming might be someone who was married earlier and had a child as well...and even then Asad is Zoya's prince and they are meant to be together... fate has Zoya in store for Asad... and may be thats why his marriage with tanveer didn't work out despite him trying to make it work...😃

I m angry😡

how can u do this🥺

I m crying in a corner now😭

pehle BW main Zoya Ayaan ki shaadi🤢

now this also

I hate u😡

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like a love u😆

but still i m angry😡

oh Dear.. don't get angry... now i will also cry in a corner.😭.. but think about poor Naina... her own mom left her and went.. and now if Asad turns out to be not her Dad she is being brought up by complete strangers.

As for BW, i assured you earlier also that you won't be disappointed... just wait for a while.. there's twists and turns ahead in that story, and i am sure you will love the twists ahead and whats happens with Zoya and Asad and the Ayaan angle as well... just wait for a while.😃

Originally posted by: life4me

Awesome update. Loved it. Continue soon.

Thanks ... glad you loved it.😃

Originally posted by: kaussar

oh Dear.. don't get angry... now i will also cry in a corner.😭.. but think about poor Naina... her own mom left her and went.. and now if Asad turns out to be not her Dad she is being brought up by complete strangers.

As for BW, i assured you earlier also that you won't be disappointed... just wait for a while.. there's twists and turns ahead in that story, and i am sure you will love the twists ahead and whats happens with Zoya and Asad and the Ayaan angle as well... just wait for a while.😃

Originally posted by: jas91

I don't want Naina 2 b Asad's daughter due 2 1 more reason. Asad having baby wid a women who slept wid many men b4 & during her marg wid Asad & i can't accept Asad having any physical relation or baby wid such a cheap girl.

Jas i can understand your sentiment here and why you feel that way... but actually even if Tanveer is cheap which i agree she is, there is no fault of Asad in that... and if you remember the introduction, i said even in that also that Tanveer is not really a prostitute here... she is not that cheap also.. she had an affair with someone before marriage with Asad and then while married to Asad, she had an extra marital affair with another one... these things happen in real life and thats what i wanted to highlight... but here Tanveer doesn't go on sleeping with each and every man she meet like a prostitute.

And i plan to bring Tanveer later and she will be kind of redeemed in this story.. she will regret everything she did and she will turn a new leaf in her life.. and even though she is not the main heroine here, she is also an important part of this story... thats another reason why Naina has to be Asad's daughter... Tanveer will regret loosing her daughter... If Naina is just adopted by Asad, Tanveer could always take her away..

And Jas if you think that way what about stories in which Asad himself was portrayed as a play boy who slept around? even now i can remember two stories which became very famous here in which Asad slept around before he met Zoya... i won't name them as i don't have anything against those stories and i personally read them and enjoyed them despite that aspect by giving that aspect a blind eye, because over all those stories were very good.

But i am mentioning this here because, if its about morality, then for me definitely Asad being a man who slept around and had many girlfriends is worse than Asad being just married to someone who had an extra marital affair and another relationship before marriage... but still i don't remember anyone raising an issue about those stories also..

Its not about Asad having baby wid another women cuz there is 1 ff Sunshine of my life where Asad has a daughter wid his 1st wife & I don't have any complains wid that cuz there his wife is a positive character whom Asad loves & I love that story 2 d bits.

So d thing is i don't have problem wid Asad being Naina's father i just don't want his baby wid such a cheap women.

Plus d point about Naina being brought up among strangers i don't think its bad cuz in QH Zoya was also brought up by AnZee did they loved her any less then their own child no na. I guess its a nice msg i mean we also adopt kids na than what's difference is here. And Asya r not like that that they will love Naina less cuz of this reason even Asad said that he will accept d truth & who is gonna tell Naina anyway that she is not Asad's daughter only family will know this.

As i said above if Naina is adopted by Asad, Tanveer can always come and take her away.. Asad will have no power... but Naina knows only Asad's family as a family and imagine the condition of naina if she is taken away from this family now.

And another thing is in this story both Asad and Zoya came from a broken family and had lived with one parent and suffered as children... and Naina is another little girl whose life story is going similarly... but then Zoya comes to her life and changes her life... Asad accepting her will be a part of that and ultimately naina will grow up as a beautiful soul having the love of two parents... and everything happens because of Zoya's beliefs about life... these messages will ultimately be more beautiful if Naina is Asad's daughter... and not just a girl who is adopted by Asad and Zoya.

But still its ur story i can't interfere & i even don't want 2 but if d story goes that way than sadly i have 2 leave it here cuz sorry but i hate sad stories. U know na how i reacted in BW when i knew about Zoyaan nikah i don't have d strength 2 read 2 emotional stories. This was ur 1st story i read & fell in luv wid it & u but sadly i have 2 leave it here.

Hope u don't mind that & if u think i m rude or something its just how i feel. I m sorry if i hurt unintentionally. But till this point i love this story so i would love 2 leave it at a happy note.

Best of Luck

Lots of Love

Jas
No Jas i didn't think you are being rude and i do understand your feelings as well... but from the writer's point of view i have tried to explain you as much as i can why i don't feel that naina being Asad's daughter is such a big issue in this story... but still if you can't accept that then as you said, it's best if you leave... but i really feel very sad that you are leaving... you have been one of the few whose comment i always look forward to after an update and you have been with me through out this story... so i am seriously feeling very very sad... but what to do right? and i guess all i can say is i will miss you very much...😭... i seriously have tears in my eyes now.

PS... and i'm still hoping you won't leave.

just love ur story👏
girl u write with perfection😉
finally asad is opening up to zoya.. spending time with his daughter..
when will u update the next part😭
n ur other story update?😭

Originally posted by: cale

lovely update

nice to see that asad is trying to open up with zoya and is spending time with family

Update soon

thanks Dear... glad you loved it... next update will take a while as i have to update the other story.😃