SantaClaus &Tooth Fairy-FF,Chapt 16 updated,(23/7) PG 70 - Page 40

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kaussar

Thats nice to know you like the title and understood it.. i felt that many would not understand the significance of it and also it isn't a catchy title... so was just wondering if i should change it to something which people can relate to more easily... but i guess i should not right.😃


right sweety...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kaussar

hehe... lets wait and see... i think you will like the twist.. it will also bring Asad and Zoya closer... so that's the best of this twist.😃


hmmm... inna acha twist... me waiting already
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 14...

Asad caught zoya and najma antics... yes all three having good time...
when asad came... little bit frustrated gone
mention about naina's birthday..
he supposed to do this for but zoya is doing it..
Asad feel bit out...

Zoya behavior .. made asad smile .. inwardly nice..
he also learn to be around zoya...
knowing her worries ... for Naina...
somewhere inside i think zoya is seeing herself...



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Asad is happy coz of zoya...his family is happy...
things are changing...

Tea party... sweet zoya let naima bond with asad...
and he feel grateful .. how naima wants his attention...
and he thought about zoya words ...
he did came close to his daughter...

he thank zoya.. for doing this...
tanveer did one thing separate asad from naina...
but zoya got them closer

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Asad watching zoya in trance.. sign of getting closer...

something happening to him...

he is trying to get zoya attention...

so he did.. by helping zoya prepare for the party...

najma was shock..to see asad changes...she is happy for him

see him relax from his sadness

party asad was ...and the end he felt emotional...

zoya is watching asad closely just like he is doing...


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Posted: 11 years ago


awesome update .. on 4 of them najma, zoya , naina and asad...





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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry for late comments!!
Was inactive bcoz of studies!!
Just back now
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 8.
Asad said harsh things in anger!!
Zoya hurt!!
Dilshad is also hurt!!
Dilshad and asad recollecting past!!
And here enters kaali billi !! Tanveer!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Most needed character sketch!!
Yep we are young and we want a Prince charming who is meant only for us!!
But it happens only in fairytales!!

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