SantaClaus &Tooth Fairy-FF,Chapt 16 updated,(23/7) PG 70 - Page 38

Originally posted by: GitaIyer

Nice Updates Kaussar.

Asad and Zoya finally come closer after Zoya's lecture. Thankfully, Asad heard her throught without interrupting.

And then begins Asad's concern for Zoya, night and day.

Love has sowed the seed, waiting for the sapling to grow.

Originally posted by: grad2011

awesome story !!!

plzz do update soon :)

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

I love it 👏

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

res...
unres...
aj mai late hogaya ...

No Arzoo.. you weren't late.😆
beautiful update it was ...
Thank you.😃

so it is nainas birthday celebration arrangements that made the house to look a mess...
Asad was doubting that has he really entered.his own house... lol
the gasps that came out of everyone on seeing him... "Mr. Khan" "bhaijaan" "Asad"... it was so funny...

Hehe.. thought of incorporating a typical Asad scene with a twist... glad you liked the scene.
Asad is getting used to zoyas presence around him n unknowingly he's always looking forward for it...
yea Asad has gotten used to Zoya being around... now circustances will pull him more towards her and he wouldn't even realize it.
aaw naina lost her first tooth...
and the Fairy vl come to gift her...
oh the tea part was amazing...
Fairy land for Asad...
where there was a slight improvement in asad n nainas relation... m glad he joined it... yea.. and there s a small twist on the way which will improve Asad -Naina relation.
hmmm sara feels she has seen him somewhere.. is it so???

Yea.. that will be revealed soon...but don't expect too much on that front.. thats not a very significant thing but that will lead the story towards another angle later where Sara will play a bigger role in Asad and Zoya's life.
we got an AsYa moment here...
asad was mesmerised by zoya ... he couldnt take his eyes off her...
she looked so ethereal in moonlight...
just lyk a FAIRY...
and then she couldnt break the eyelock...
both wondering... wt it really was that they felt... but the moment broke n the preps started... with asad joining in...
najma is unconsciously looking forward for AsYa together...
nainas birthday celebration was a success...
vd asad joining it lyk a good dad n vn he felt so he retrieved back to his shell...
yea Asad went into shell again.. its impossible for someone to change overnight..pls Asad is hurt, bitter and scared as well.. but Zoya will break through his barriers.
So ua this update contained the FAIRY part of ua title...
yea thats the fairy part o title... do you think this title is ok for the story? i sometimes wonder whether i should change it or not?
waiting for more ...
continue soon
Will try to update sooner this time... thanks for the lovely comment Dear.😃

Originally posted by: GitaIyer

Nice Update Kaussar.

Zoya in moonlight, Asad awestruck and composed himself a lil too soon. Should've allowed his emotions to get the better of him.

Now, the title of the story comes into play via Naina.

First time Asad fed a bday cake to Naina. How touching was that?

Asya making preparations for a party together. Aww that brought back some sad onscreen memories.

Now, looking forward for Asad to come out of the room and asya love story to begin.

Originally posted by: life4me

Awesome update. Continue soon.

Originally posted by: sasir

awww.

awesome.

loved it.

amazing.

there are so many heart warming scenes that i cant help but read it again n avian.

plz update soon

cant wait for next update.

i am very greedy in case of my fav stories.

plz

plz

plz update soon

Originally posted by: jas91

wonderful updt👏

thank you Jas.😃

So Naina's B'day was highlight of this part😛

Asad entered his house & d way 3 ladies adressed him really amusing😆
hehe... glad you liked that scene.

awe so he also started likeing Zoya's company & looks 4ward 2 that😃

D tea party scene was fantastic⭐️

Asad felt as if he is in fairy tale😃
yea Asad has started to like Zoya's company..

Zoya always does everything wid prisition😉

Yea Zoya in this story is not really messy and knows how to do things without it becoming a disaster eventhough they created a mess while preparing for the party.

Asad Naina was cute 😳

than Asad saw Zoya resting in moonlight😊

He was mesmerized & when Zoya see him in d eyes she was a goner

they both didnt realized yet but they r started falling & caring 4 each other😳

yea they have.. happy to know that you all loved the moonlight scene.. just wanted to create circumstances and moments which are not typical like the typical fall and catch moments.

than they decorated d house btw Najma's scens was 2 god she wished Asya 2 b 2gather

yea najma wished it... but she will not act upon it as she will think its impossible.

d cake cutting scens & d way Asad felt emotional was great scene👍🏼

this was fantastic updt👏

loved reading it⭐️
thank you Dear... and thanks for the lovely comment.

thanx 4 PM😛

& continue soon😃