SantaClaus &Tooth Fairy-FF,Chapt 16 updated,(23/7) PG 70 - Page 35

Originally posted by: Linsie

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome updates
Zoya told him to give some time to naina
Asad wanted to tell her but he thought she didn't knew anything so not to discuss with her
Asad apologised to zoya & his Ammi as well
He rang zoya which surprised her & went to see her as well
He felt relieved after talking to zoya
Asad told dilshad that he apologised to zoya as well
No doubt she was shocked bit happy that her son did it
Plz continue soon
Do pm me for next update
Thanks

Originally posted by: kaussar

thanks.. glad you loved it... hope the progress is not slow... but a natural progression should be there...thats why i am not rushing with it.

Zoya's story after her mom's death that will come later.. not so soon... sorry about it..
will try to update soon.😃

Originally posted by: kaussar

thank you Linsie.. i was thinking may be some people will find it slow... so i'm glad you like the way its shaping up.

tanveer will make an appearance later and she will come to know about AsYa... so your wish will be fulfilled.😊

Originally posted by: anopama

nice updates
oh zoya he definitely care
he was so restless he couldnt even sleep
he reached till to ur gate at midnight but it as locked
he went and search ur number in his ammi phone and he could
have used his ammi phone to call but he stored ur # in his 😉
aww he reached her door b4 leaving for work and he told hr to call him
if she needs anything ☺️
oh asad ur heart is winning the battle over ur mind when it comes to zoya
oh zoya and ur heart is fluttering too AAK cares
loved her attitude at the hospital parking she is so cute
he couldnt help but smile
he apologizes to her and also his ammi
wonder if he will take advice abut naina
continue soon

Originally posted by: kaussar

working on it... do give me a breather Dear.😊. will hopefully update in the weekend.

Originally posted by: kaussar

yea as children what we face does affect us psychologically... but we never know how people with similar experiences turn out to be different when they grow up... like Zoya and Tanveer here and i have seen it happening in real life as well...
As i said above tanveer will make an appearance and will come to know about AsYa as well... but i had planned it to be a brief appearance... but may be i can twist the story a bit and fulfill this wish of yours of tanveer seeing Naina calling Zoya mommy... lets see.😃

yea we still have Zoya's past after her Ammi died as well.. and i am thinking of bringing Humaira in to the picture at a later stage.. so i will make Dilshad's past brief and i won't give too much of space to Rashid and that family...thats the reason why there is no introduction to Ayaan as well though i love Asad and Ayaan's bond in the original QH..😃

Originally posted by: Linsie

Weekend pakka... 😃 😃

Originally posted by: kaussar

thank you Dear.😃. glad you loved the update...

hehe.. yea bheege gi tho bukhar will be there.., and if no fever how will Asad show his concern?😆

yea there is no proper trust yet, but he is getting drawn towards Zoya and at least now believes that she is nice and caring.

And yea AAK acted like a thief just to get Zoya's number..😆

Asad's mind will not be able to take over again, till he really falls in love with Zoya.😉.. after that some complications may arise again... lets see.

Will try to update soon.
thanks for the lovely comment.😃