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Maryam Hassan

@mariam1368

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#411

Liked the update. Its a very
interesting and different story.
Am shocked... Kissing stranger not her husband...
Update Soon-ish

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#412

Shocking & Nice update
Thanks for PM
Continue soon

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#413

Truly unexpected.. All this while I assumed Asad to be her husband.. but what a shocker it was.. but yep I trust you and I know it is gonna be ASYA finally.. .but is she married to Rehan ? I am waiting for the puzzle you put to be solved as you progress with new updates.. but plzzz update sooon...😊

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Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#414

Res /Un res

So lovely update.

Zoya why is she shrieking like that at him. Dufus!😆

She is the one who thought he is her hubby.

Why take off her heel. Is Rihan so short. The leg popped. Groin burnt.😛

Nice nice! Of course I was surprised that if this was the first time she was kissing Rihan, Have they kissed before. Shocking. Me no likey!😡

Now My jaanu, Asad, he didn't stop her either. Maza le lo! while you can😲 'So...did u feel how I felt ! Zoya is so nave. Really!😆

Asad-Umm excuse me... Darling you should have said when her mouth was on yours.🤣

And the lipstick marks - should I laugh or cry or just stay shocked. Kya discussion hai yaar👏

Edited by Perfectionist2 - 11 years ago

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aish-au

@aish-au

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#415

asya not married ... m too shocked to comment

update soon

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rajnid68

@rajnid68

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#416

Finally..I am unconfused (is this a word in the dictionary) now..

Story heading on...after the collision...

Zoya poured all of her into the kiss..

Asad stunned..

Though reciprocating...to the kiss..

He comes out of it..or did he..

Will the kiss linger in his dil and dimaag...

Zoya too stunned..

At her boldness...her feelings fluctuating...

Rihaan...

Asad is the patner...

With the kiss inthe background...

His life has indeed taken a 180 degrees turn...

Awesome post..

Thanks for the pm..

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Simi

@saida.m

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#417

You know, with every update, you leave me more confused than before!😆

Let me get my thoughts together and work it as I think through what I think I have understood!

Zoya is married, just not to Asad.

Zoya kissed him, and enjoyed it! 😆

Asad kissed her back!

Her husband has arrived!

So, basically she is screwed? 😆

I am taking your word for that it does not involved spousal adultery! This looks like a very different story and I am eager to read it.

So Rihaan is Asad's partner? Will Rihaan turn out to be a good guy (self-sacrificing for the love and all that) or a meanie?

You say that Asad and Zoya's pasts are not connected, but I have a feeling that Rihaan has a great deal to do with Asad's past?

Its all wild guessing at the moment! I am hoping that the next update will provide me with some answers to all the questions that I have about what the heck is going on, and not leave me more confused than ever, like this update did! 😆

I just have a teeny tiny suggestion. I realize that this is your style of writing, and of course you are entitled to have it, but perhaps you could put the active voice in quotes or in bold letters?

As a reader, I tend to get lost in the inner thoughts versus the actual conversation lines!

You don't have to do it, its just a suggestion! 😃

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Simi

@saida.m

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#418

Originally posted by: starslinedup
Hey gal..Happy new Year to u too...I hope that new yr brings u ur hearts true desires...

N thanks u for ur wonderful comment..N now I'll get to answering ur que...

1-Yes Asad is finally in NY

2-Asad and Zoya...u'll know in ch2..

3-No they dont live together...again reason in ch2

4-Well atleast she is trying to be all carnal..n primitive 😆

Lol..dont worry gal..ur confusion will clear with Ch2😆

N ya..her list...Asad fits the bill...n he is so like in the show..in many ways then 1..

N HUmeira n ZOya...o boy...these gals...n their talks..will be fun...n neday...cleavage n lingerie..work😆

U'll know the reactions soon...n more will be explored😉

so keep readin..n commentin..n likin😉

You got me good with the update! Man, Asad sure fits the bill, but apparently the bill is full at the moment? You married her off to someone else! 😆