ASYA TS: WITH YOU FOREVER ( Updated Chapter 3 last part) - Page 14

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

That my darling was a beautiful ending to a beautiful story. Thank you so much. I loved it.

And you know what I am going to do now don't you

I want another OS lol

l
ots of love to you

Thank you sweety. Really appreciate ur feedback and was looking forward to see what you think of the update. Am happy you liked it.

Will try n write something soon. 😃 😳

Originally posted by: --Radhika--

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">It was a very beautiful ending! I love how Zoya surprised Asad with the baby reveal, it was very cute!! <33 Finally, he came back for her! Very nice story, overall!! You should write more, I would love to hear more from you.</font>

Thanks Radhika. Will pm you whenever I write next. Thanks for ur feedback.

Originally posted by: CHOCOSWATHI

superb story
i loved d ending..
zoya s pregrant...
that baby was symbol of their love...
awesome update

Thank you. Appreciate your feedback 😊

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

Brilliant..Very well written.. 😊

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Originally posted by: QuboolHaiAsya

I read all the parts now. I just loved it!! This story was beautifully written!! U r a amazing writer!! Ty fr d PM:-):-)

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Originally posted by: ammu228

it was an awesome update...

loved it...

even my eyes were brimming with tears...

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Originally posted by: saida.m

Wonderful! So emotional! There was so much pain in the separation. Zoya's state was so heart touching and it misted my eyes a little.

She was pregnant the while they were apart? Awww, poor babe! I can't imagine how heartbreaking it must have been for her to not be able to tell Asad that they were going to have a baby!

But All is well that ends well, right? They found their way to each other and that's all that matters at the end, no? Great ending to the story!

😃

Am happy that you liked it. Thanks for your feedback it really means a lot to me 😊

Originally posted by: nilusoni

superb gr8 part loved it

Thank you. 😊

Originally posted by: Azraa01

This was truly the perfect ending. Well written.. And thanks for the pm.

Thank you. 😊