ASYA TS: WITH YOU FOREVER ( Updated Chapter 3 last part)

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Arpita_Mirage

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

it was an awesome update...

loved it...

even my eyes were brimming with tears...

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Simi

@saida.m

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Wonderful! So emotional! There was so much pain in the separation. Zoya's state was so heart touching and it misted my eyes a little.

She was pregnant the while they were apart? Awww, poor babe! I can't imagine how heartbreaking it must have been for her to not be able to tell Asad that they were going to have a baby!

But All is well that ends well, right? They found their way to each other and that's all that matters at the end, no? Great ending to the story!

😃

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Azraa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

This was truly the perfect ending. Well written.. And thanks for the pm.

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--
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unres

awesome update
really loved it

Thank you 😊

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: --Natasha--
Read all the three parts in one go.

Very beautifully written:)

Thank you 😊

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Shubh007
Awesome updates...👍🏼

Just read part 2 & 3 in one go and both parts are emotional and awesome...👍🏼 👏

Really like it...😊

Thank you 😊

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Awesome & Emotional update
Asad return to his life, his zoya.
Love the way she understand his feeling & guilt.
Both reunite again.
Thanks for PM

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: Linnet

Awesome

Loved it

Keep writing

😉

Thank you 😊

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet
Awsum update!!! Zoya believed he will cum back!!! & he did cum back!!! but it too him 6 months to cum back!!! Zoya is pregnant!!!! every emotion were perfectly written!!! thanks 4 pm!!! Would love to read more of ur works!!! do pm me when u write!!!

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Edited by LoveOnlyAsYa - 11 years ago

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--
Nice update and a very good ending !!
Their dialogues were soo good ,,
specially when she said '----this is us'
U write very well ,,
Do write more stories !!

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