AsYa FF Thrd 2 'The Butterflies!' - Page 82

Originally posted by: jasminerose

Aww. I mean each and every word I write for you. When you had updated I was surrounded by guests and family and I didn't want to spoil the fun of reading it among them coz I won't HV been able to get the real feel after all.😉

I was in a rush to excuse myself and go back to my room and read and it was defo worth it.😆 And I forgot to mention, loved that part when Zoya drew that heart sign with her name. It was cute and very symbolic.

Love the chats always. I guess wen u ll b better we will get into frequent talks. Take care.

I have been there myself, Privacy is best when you read an update otherwise interruptions just spoil the fun. Haha😆 @ getting the real feel.

Originally posted by: Diya.mishra

Loved it.. update soon..

Hey Diya.mishra,

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

Finaly read last two updates. Both r very beautiful. Love it. Waiting for some action. Sorry for late comment.
Thanks for pm

Hi RAJLUVASYA,

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update
Continue soon
Add me in ur PM list plz
Thanks

Hi asifiqbalsh

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

Hi Shoma Di!

But this update was really a long one and was a fantastic as usual...

Asad is really possessive man... he dosent want ppl to look at zoya by any means...

let alone to touch her and hug her...😳

This was very good update and their fight was also good but how zoya handled the situtaion was least expected form immature zoya...

I am really hooked by this story...

And sorry for commenting this late, but next time I will comment on time...😉

Do pm me when u update next...

Hi SH7_Sunny--

Originally posted by: Tamara27

*sigh*

You're just too good, you know that?! 👏

Absolutely love love loved this update! It had everything... romance, feminism, Asad's possessiveness (which really shouldn't make me happy, but does nonetheless 😳)

Alas, she still didn't get her 7 - will she ever?! 😆 Come on, Juliet!

Waiting for the scene you mentioned in your comment on my story - update update update!

Hey Tamara,

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

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Hi RAJLUVASYA,

Action! I just gave you action Dude! Just one thing at a time,😆

Thanks for your comment and happy that you liked the update

action means i want to say some movement in story. I felt that story is not moving forward. Same thing happens. Asya teasing each other. Either Asad get jealous or zoya get jealous. Asad get possessive.Which i clearly dont like. Dont mind but their romance now thoda sa irritate me. I feel that asad still doubt zoya. Pls make their 10 day challenge over soon and give some real progress in their relation. And i also want action btwn asad and rashid. Ri8 now more than asya romance i want asad rashid action.Hope u dont mind for my comment.

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

action means i want to say some movement in story. I felt that story is not moving forward. Same thing happens. Asya teasing each other. Either Asad get jealous or zoya get jealous. Asad get possessive.Which i clearly dont like. Dont mind but their romance now thoda sa irritate me. I feel that asad still doubt zoya. Pls make their 10 day challenge over soon and give some real progress in their relation. And i also want action btwn asad and rashid. Ri8 now more than asya romance i want asad rashid action.Hope u dont mind for my comment.

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Hey Kalyani,

Yeah IF does that to me. 2 AM and late nights have caught up and now I am sick for God know till when.

But all good after a few more days of good sleep.

This chapter was about Territorial Men, yes they do exist and every relationship has a citing of this kind at least once in a life time.

It was also about Woman of today who take their liberty too seriously. And then there is love that confuses it all.

Hope I could capture that. Many more juicy bits coming up. So stay tuned.

Can I say I love Asad no matter what he does. Gimme a Man who cares and is so involved with his woman. Now that is some Love.

😆

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

TAMARA,😃

OK You gush And ME blush.😆

Only because your comment made me go pink with blushing pride and embarrassment.

Pride because you compliment me is a gigantic boost not just to my ego but my creative juices too.

NO seriously Don't think dirty with I say juices.😛

And embarrassed because I hawk your updates and think very highly of you as a writer so when you say these things about my update I have a writer's Boner! Or make that an writer's orgasmic thrill.

Yeah My head will really explode - No joke.

Thanks and hugs.🤗