AsYa FF Thrd 2 'The Butterflies!' - Page 83

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Hey Tamara,

Do you have any idea how much I love your stories.

You calling me good is gigantic boost to my ego.

Seven unfortunately is a long shot. Sorry😔

More of feminism and fight for equality of sexes coming up in the next update.

And the scene that we spoke it is really almost in the end. After about 6 chapters or so.

So long haul.

But thank you for stopping and making my day with your generous comments and I love you for that.🤗

Stop! (In the name of love... collaborate and listen... hammertime - take your pick!)

We are not allowed to talk about my stories in your thread - this is all about you, you talented girl!

Haha, sadly even I know (sadly 😭) that 7 is a long shot (did I say, sadly?) 🤣

Woohoo for the next update - when will that be, btw?

I'm very excited to know we have at least 6 more chapters to go :-)

Love and hugs girl!

Originally posted by: Tamara27

Cant help Tamara, You are my Sigh Maker remember.😆 Truly Amazing writer you are.

Originally posted by: kals82

hai juliet,

i do agree with u..IF.. does that to me... i was really a very good girl in the recent past... but IF... has kind of messing up my work of late.. keep thinking about quiting this tima and again... but so far no luck...😆

Territorial men...they do exist .,... i have one.. too.. but not like ur asad...yaar...

today woman do take their liberty too seriously... bcoz they are today men.. too independent in their life... so with that comes.. everything...

to our love story,

i love zoya for the way she called asad back in the manager room... she was so angry.. with him for doing that... but her love made her understand...him.. love u sweet heart...

i will be stay tuned to urs...any doubt about that...😆 as i am eagerly waiting for the seven... which doesn't look like a possibly as of now.. kya yaar...😉 which will def keep as hooked to u...

anyways waiting for more

love

kalyani

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Cant help Tamara, You are my Sigh Maker remember.😆 Truly Amazing writer you are.👏

Next update is about Rashid and Mr. Farooqui and Origin of Asad's love story.😉

Yeah about roughly 8 more chapters to go and then epilogue.

Have you read WallBanger by Alice Clayton. Read the reviews online on Good reads. It is my next inspired project after this finishes.

Hey juliet😃

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Kalyani,

I tell myself everyday that today I should sleep early. I somehow just get sucked in.

Also ok just because you are such a darling. Secret to seven will unfold in the next 4th update.

But lots of romance before that.

I got a feed back that this FF is getting boring now and monotonous. So I was feeling a little low, but then I got these amazing comments so I am geared up once again.

Originally posted by: kals82

juliet,

i am making a countdown now.. four more updates.. so for more weeks. to go.. so mostly around ur bday... we get our seven... nice bday treat...😛...it will be...😉

waiting for a lot of romance in between...looking forward...

about the FF being being monotonous... hmm... the tease was little longer then expected...but the story is still moving forward... everyone write in their own pace...and you being you... the expectations are always at peak...people expect more mature and more romance from... after all u live.. breathe ...love...isnt...

by the likes and comments... i am sure you are geared up... by now...

to cheer u further, i will share a few now.. why i fell in love with ur story...

zoya...i love her... full of spirit and love,, dreams... joy...somewhere very close to a normal girl... and yet the feminist...

asad-... the tpycial man... possesive.. dominating.. caring.. loving... head strong...guy... THE MAN...

butterflies... they zoom around... up and down.. depending on the situations their lover are... and love their partially towards asad... poor zoya...

and of course last but not the least... sweet heart... u...one hell of writer... with a wonderful dirty mind... to make the story such beautiful one...

the mature content came very late... i love the night chase they had... and zoya expectations and her tears when asad forgot to bring her back one day... typical woman expectations... we just expect these small gesture from our man...but our man are men... but the moment.. u spell it ... they do that and above that...

their kiss in the garden... and of course the drunken zoya... and what followed... throwing the coffee cup... i love that...

the kitchen... the dance... and the way it was repeated...love it...

their love affair in the bathroom... and the epic moment in asad gym. the terrace... and the sad 10 days tease...

and the wonderful names... u bring out for them...

even though we think very different in the matter of love.. we both discussed a huge lot here...

ur love story- typical.love story.

aashnalove-- arranged cum love marriage

mine love story- completely arranged one...

yet we all are happy in our life.. in our own way... and whatever i discussed with u, really made me look back.. and that gave smile on my face... that i have a very good partner... who i am taking for granted... now i am little conscious... and do a little bit extra.. to keep my man happy...😉 in every ways...

so,

i could lot more... but will do later... waiting for ur update soon...

my post marriage .. i will share... my story..as an FF...😆..i. e what i told u .. i write in detail... i.e also the reason i haven't written anything mature in my FF too...😉

and one more reason...

love can bloom in an arranged marriage too... bcoz nowadays, kids are really crazy about being love.. and they don't get the difference between love and attraction...if love happens... good... if not... even arranged marriage is also good...our parents do their best to give as a good partner...isnt...

and on parting shot, heard this dialogue in a movie i watched few days back..

guy: are we made for each other...

girl: it will depend on how we live our life together...

cheers

kalyani

Originally posted by: pinky06

hey juliet😃

I know there s really no chance of update..but just thought v ll stop by and say hiii😉

Update soonish😊

Loaaddsss of luv

Pinky