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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jazmeen

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Awwweeewwwnnn thank u for dedicating this part to me muaaahhhzzz

See ur stalker is first to comment
Even though I didn't see my jealous asya but loved the update
Amazing one
I hope zoya will start to go separate to work mayb with Prasad lol




Hahaha jealous Asya will come and go, promise (: Let's see what Zoya comes up with haha. But not today sorry! Just had a long day and am super tired now. Shall try to start writing tomorrow (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mochhug

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I kinda wish they had talked longer, but I LOVE how he made her see the rumours had merit based on their current position just with a look from his eyes. Sigh. They're so cute in your story. Asad is more relaxed in your stories. It's a nice change. Refreshing and the kind of Asad I was hoping for after they confessed. But alas, Gul is so hell bent on her story and nonsense tracks that she doesn't do Asya justice anymore 😆

Zoya is so cute. Why not just hide under the settee like last time. Silly girl. I love this. It reminded on the Holi prank. So cute. So cute how Asad was just laying down, watching her talk and humouring her. I like that he didn't just kick her out or reprimand her about Tehzeeb or Tameez for once.

And Zoya is cute. Clueless, but adorable. I wonder what she'll do. I hope it doesn't blow up in her face, especially with Vijay. That guy just doesn't sit right with me.

Love you for updating so quickly! I hope it happens again soon!!! 😃



Hahaha well, you know that writing cute stuff is my favourite pastime. The actual QH has a lot of background story to deal with, I just focus on Asya so I guess that's why it looks that way hahaha. I'll try to find the time to write tomorrow!! Glad you liked it (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

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It is 2:45 am here and i am sitting on my lappi unresing my comment coz i am missing you badlyI was just talking to my brother and you came up in a context(What context ask me on PM😉) and i was trying to make him remember that i had told him about you,my online friend who gave me a role in her story but he couldn't remember so i showed him the second update of 'Yes Boss' and then i started going through the Yes boss thread again and i started missing you very much so i thought this was the perfect time to unres my comment😳😳

You know you made my day today not that you do it always with your updates but i woke up today and saw your update and my day just brightened...It was bright and shiny😳😳I hurried with my breakfast so that i could read your update..i couldn't read it wile having my breakfast cause i couldn't risk choking on my food😆😆

Chalo aj kuch zyada hi bakwaas kar di maine...now lets come to the update😃😃

So i was right...this was one eventful weekend...although i expected a dhamaaka from zoya but i absolutely didn't expect this😆😆

So asad kept ignoring zoya...poor zoya she must have been so irritated and Mr.Khan how difficult was it to keep away from zoya?Comeon say it i know you missed talking to her😆😆

A slow smile began to form on her face. She slid off her bed and walked out
determinedly.
This scared me out of my wits man...zoya smiling like that means she is planning something very big😆😆

She peeped into Asad's room, and then quickly covered her mouth to stifle her involuntary gasp.
Well who wouldn't seeing Jahanpanah six packs shirtless☺️☺️No worries zoya i wouldn't have looked away either😉😉

Haha zoya is so innocent she wants to scare him by popping in his room in the middle of the night😆😆

Zoya willed herself to pop out from under the covers at that point and scream to give him a good fright, but found her insides turning to jelly as she chickened out at the very last minute
Zoya chickened out 😆😆well that is not like her but i guess her brain stopped working after seeing the six packs show😳😳

"And what you accomplished was me scaring you? This is why revenge is never a good thing Miss Farooqui. Waise bhi, I didn't know my not speaking to you would feel like punishment to you," Asad teased, his sleep-ridden voice sounding even sexier than usual.
Hayyee that sexy husky voice☺️☺️How can still control each other...the ambience is perfect...zoya hai,asad hai and ek comfortable bed😉

"You think?" Asad finally asked, as he looked down at her arms encircling his neck now, his eyes then trailing back to hers where their faces were inches apart. Zoya felt blood rush to her cheeks as she quickly removed her arms and pushed Asad off her body.
Haha what an appropriate response from asad😉😉Zoya you don't ven realize you end up in such situations that you give people things to talk and speculate😆😆

Asad is way too nonchalant about the whole situation...its a nice change to see him so chilled out😃😃

Ooh what is zoya planning next?I am sure she will worsen the situation and me and my colleagues will have more reasons to believe that Mr.khan and Miss Farooqi are in a relationship😆😆

BTW have i told you yet how awesome the update was...i wanted to write and quote more but i guess aap bore ho jatin itna padh ke😆😆

I loved absolutely loved zoya sneaking into asad's room...reminded me of zoya nd asad's encounter in asad's room for the first time...i love how you pick up scenes form the show and make it your own and you do full justice to them...i ave never been disappointed😳😳

Love ya loads Green❤️❤️



Oooh what is the context!! Haha agli PM mein please keh dena, I didn't read this before sending my last PM. HAHA and please stop reading my mind! You'll see what nonsense Zoya ends up doing. And quote away friend, I'll never get bored haha just happier (: Glad you liked it! (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey,
It was a really cool part. As always Zoe went ahead to accomplish a mission & in return got herself trapped in the same plan. asad is really smart. I just loved how Zoe was being dramatic to earn a reaction from him but of course Akdu won't let down his mask so easily. Waisey I doubt he actually has a problem even with all the talks about them, he's absolutely fine with them.
Oh what is Zoe up to? I hope she isn't thinking of hooking up with a guy at office to clear the doubts. It might help in this regard but Jahanpanah is going to be enraged by this.
Well continue soon..



She always gets trapped in her own plans haha. Let's see what Zoya ends up doing! Glad you liked it (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: t1234

Most important question you'll ever be asked about your FF, please answer carefully:
What is Asad's hair like in this story?

Also, can I guess what idea Zoya comes up with based on what she said as she walked out! I reckon she'll argue that she can't be in a relationship with Asad bcuz she's in a relationship with someone else!
Or at least I hope she does this haha

As always great update I always look forward to reading your work 😃



Haha his hair is like how it was during the Bhatawdekar episodes, after all this is an extension from there! Haha let's see what Zoya ends up doing. Glad you're enjoying it (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: NAVI55

Fabulous updates green ji👍🏼

I couldn't help but smile as i read the last 3 updates😃 Your ff has that effect on me...
Vijay is beginning to creep me out😕 He is just odd...
Zoya sneaking into asad's room was funny...She trying to scare him...Seriously, Zoya😆 We saw how scared he really was...when HE pinned HER to the bed😉
Mr khan not even bothered about the office gossip😲
Well zoya is a pagal ladki...I'm sure she's about to get into some mischief...Let see what she does now...
Congrats on the new thread🥳 Well deserved...



Haha glad to have made you smile (: Let's see what Vijay's problem is, and what Zoya ends up doing hahaha. Glad you liked it (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerose

Hey congratulations for the new thread. I guess I am very late but didn't get time to catch up.

The updates were amazing as always. Zoya is a darling. She is so innocent yet she proclaims to be the most intelligent person. I love this aspect of her personality and u have portrayed it so well
Her conversation with Anu and other girl during lunch shows how good at heart she is. Vijay is so weird yet funny.
Zoya getting jealous that Asad took Ms. Nargis in his room was so adorable . lovely updates
And yes this update is my favorite. They were so conveniently talking in his bedroom so late at night not feeling awkward at all and yet not acknowledging that thy feel something for each other. You bring out their denial part so perfectly. The scene was superbly written. Really enjoyed reading it.



Glad you found the time to catch up then (: Yeah Zoya is like that, intelligent yet ditzy at the same time, so I'm glad that came across (: Glad you enjoyed it! (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: webuser7

Green, short but great updates! 😃 Read parts15 and 16!


#15
Ha! Ha!! Zoya trying to talk to Asad and not able to do so! She's jealous of Narges!! My bachha is so special!! 😉

Hope Dilshad won't get ideas to hook up Narges and Asad!! Zoya will go ballistic!!

Hmm, even Najma mentioned that Vijay was weird. What's the deal with that creep?! Gives me the shivers.

"Zoya whined, pouting a little as she broke off a piece of her roti and stuffed it in her mouth. Asad stared at her for a while, his eyes a little dazed as he fell into deep thought." A penny for your thoughts, Mr. Khan?! What exactly is going on in that head?

Loved the last para:

"Poora weekend para hai Miss Farooqui, at least Friday night ke liye aapke aawaaz se baksh do!" Asad finally added, slamming his door shut after entering his room, leaving Zoya to fume silently again. And to think the people at work thought she was in a relationship with this highly infuriating man. Never!

Why is he so mean to Zoya? 😡 Payback will be sweet!! Zoya, never say never!!

#16
Asad is continuing to annoy her!! The bedroom scene was hilarious with a twinge of awareness. Asad is not fazed about the office romance. Good for him.

Loved the last para again:

"The rumours are ruining my life because it's with YOU Mr Akdu Ahmed Khan," Zoya put in the last word, as she rolled her eyes and walked out of the room. It was fine if Asad didn't want to do anything about the rumours, she'd just have to think of something herself.

Hobart
What will she do now?! Give him lots of love? Or better yet, make everyone at work believe she has a BF



HAHA I totally was playing with the idea of Dilshaad suggesting Narges for Asad :p Hahahaha we'll see what Vijay's problem is, and what Zoya is up to. Patience :p Glad you liked it! (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: me2you

Dhinka chika...yes, its me again. Dheere dheere, I will unres all my reserved spots.

Sabr ka pal meetha hota hai, lets see if this one is meetha or not 😆

Meetha se yaad aaya... CONGRATS for the new thread!!! 😃🥳 Pehle din se, I knew that this story is going to be a BLOCKBUSTER and look, second thread already! Yeahh!!! 👍🏼

Part 14
I cannot take this Vijay fellow for even a second longer (mein bhi nahin, take some action)

Bada aaya password change karne ke liye. Ullu ka patha saala (Hahaha, a really angry and irritated Zoya here)

Anu and Monica shared another look (Of course, they did not know this! I can very well imagine the shocked looks on their faces)

It seemed easier to just give up on figuring Zoya out (She is dynamic, weird, cute, ajeeb, bewakoof, funny and yet so lovable) 😊

"Not too close Miss Farooqui, aapka koi bharosa nahi," (Uska koi bharosa nahin ya phir khud pe, Mr. Khan...😉 YES, blame me for thinking very differently here) 😛

How is it that she'd never noticed this before? (Because you are way too busy with your own nautanki antics)



Bechari Zoya, phas gayi hain woh Vijay ke saath. Let's hope she finds some solution for this situation. And to make it even worse, she even got to know that the staff members are gossiping about her and Mr. Khan. Of course, office mein aise baatein hoti rehti hain.
Now lets see whether she will be able to talk to Mr. Khan about this or not and if so, what his reaction will be...

Oh wait a minute... I already know that! (This is what happens when one does NOT unres
immediately: you already know what's gonna happen) Lekin mein phir bhi unres karoongi! See you soon 😊

P.S. Was this meetha enough? 😛

P.P.S. RK mom thinks I am a big nautanki too 😆



YAY (: Better late than never hahaha. Tsk tsk your hatke thinking, just when I thought I've begun to get you hahaha. Bohut meetha tha, I'm very happy now hahaha, nautanki hi sahi :p Glad you're enjoying it! (:
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Posted: 11 years ago
chota hi sahi pr lovely update...😉

Zoya grit her teeth as Asad closed his bedroom door on her face after dinner the next day as well. He'd spent the entire of Saturday annoying her by avoiding her on purpose just because she said she had something to tell him.
Asad Miyaan just love to tease his New York Hoitey Toity...😉

A slow smile began to form on her face. She slid off her bed and walked out determinedly.

naughtiest smile ever...😃

Asad stood shirtless in front of his bed, tying the string of his pajama. Zoya thanked her lucky stars for not coming any earlier than that. She knew she should've just looked away immediately, but she found herself unabashedly watching Asad bend down and pick his kurta up, slipping it over his head before doing up the bottom two buttons.

ha ha...again...SIX-PACKS...😳
Miss. Drooling...😆

But the pout was quickly replaced by another slow smile, as another idea struck her. He was having the time of his life annoying her, so now it was payback time!

Miss. Farooqui's brains work faster thn the computers...😃

She'd give him a good scare by suddenly popping out of her hiding place once he came out of the bathroom.

really Miss. Zoya Farooqui...trying to scare Asad Ahmed Khan...ha ha ha...😆

Asad walked out with his towel covering his face as he wiped it, walking over towards the window obliviously. He hung his towel neatly on the rack there before turning to his bed, taking steps towards it.

OCD...

Once it did, she'd slip out of the covers and leave without being noticed.

Ohh really...and Mr. Khan will not catch you...

She lifted her upper body off the bed in a swift movement, but before she knew it, her body was slammed back down.

and yo...Asad CATCHES HER FINALLY...😉

"Kaun hai?!" Asad growled, his voice heavy with sleep as he pinned the intruder down on his bed with his body. He'd managed to grab the intruder's flailing arms and lock them in a tight grip at the wrists above her head, realizing from the width of the wrist that it was a girl. With his free hand, he reached for his bedside lamp and flicked it on, just to be greeted with the face of an extremely terrified Zoya, her mouth slightly open, poised to scream.

woww...this scene was so sexy...so brilliant...😉

"Main uh, aapse... aapko... I came here to scare you damn it, as revenge for avoiding me the whole of today," Zoya whined, punching his shoulders slightly in frustration. Asad didn't move though, he continued staring her with his ridiculously straight face.

ha ha...blurted finally...poor Zoya...

And what you accomplished was me scaring you? This is why revenge is never a good thing Miss Farooqui. Waise bhi, I didn't know my not speaking to you would feel like punishment to you," Asad teased, his sleep-ridden voice sounding even sexier than usual. Zoya let go of his shoulders suddenly, turning away as she rolled her eyes. Asad hid his grin as he began to lift himself off of Zoya, but Zoya's arms found their way back to his shoulders, stopping him again.

Mr. Teasing Ahmed Khan is back in action...😉

and Zoya...finds him sexy...😳 nt bad..Miss Farooqui...😉

"You think?" Asad finally asked, as he looked down at her arms encircling his neck now, his eyes then trailing back to hers where their faces were inches apart. Zoya felt blood rush to her cheeks as she quickly removed her arms and pushed Asad off her body. He complied easily, flipping his body back to his side of the bed as Zoya sprung up into sitting position.

yuhuuu...Asad Miyaan made her blush...😳

Zoya snapped out of her thoughts and turned to Asad to continue her argument, but she found him turned away from her, snoring gloriously. She punched his back in irritation before sliding off the bed, quick to catch the soft chuckle as she did. Pretending to sleep, huh?

so cute...Zoya punching Asad...she is irritated to the core now...😆

"The rumours are ruining my life because it's with YOU Mr Akdu Ahmed Khan," Zoya put in the last word, as she rolled her eyes and walked out of the room. It was fine if Asad didn't want to do anything about the rumours, she'd just have to think of something herself.

so now Miss. Farooqui's THINKING CAPS are on..
means fr sure she will do sumthng which will jingle-mingle evrythng...😆

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