AsYa FF: Destiny Comes Calling (suspended) #2 *Note* 3/12/13 Pg 26

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antiquegold

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Rivs thanks for the pm. Nice slant on aapi, jeeju and her inner debate. asad hero hai, hero!

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shreya mehra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

congrats fr new thread...

n its an awesome update...

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princess101

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

CONGRATS ON THE NEW THREAD I LOVED THE UPDATE THANX FOR THE PM AND UPDATE SOON😃

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Nim

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Hey dear,

This was a v crucial chap from the story. it really did clear some doubts. For Asad & Azam, you have stated what I had doubts about, but only you can tell the precise details about it. I am glad that instead of the cold phase between them, the guys helped each other out during testing times. Yaar I didn't understand why would Azam start this designer business as Chaand Bi, I mean why in this way?

Okay for Zoya, I really felt bad for the poor girl. I think the P was right in his place to make her understand that the outcome of this all won't be all good & to remind her of the worst. Asad was right too, obviously he didn't want anyone to dampen Zoe's spirit & dictate them to something.

But Zoe's response was v good.

I know she only lets down her guards when alone. her past has been really painful. despite all the love her aapi & jeeju gave her, the rude behavior from Humeira made her suffer a lot. I feel that she too wants someone whom she can call as her own, her own family.

Oh the earring misses to be seen by Asad this time too, when will he get to know that it's Zoe's earring that he has.

waiting for the next part. update soon.

CONGRATULATIONS on the 2nd Thread.

Lots of love.

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Maryam Hassan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

congrats on the new thread!!!
awesome update :)

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Asya_Maaneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Chapter 18

Totally loving the bond between Dilshaad and Zoya. 😊

It's so sweet of Asad to help Zoya

Very nice chapter! 👏

Chapter 19

"Ms. Farooqui I should have guessed it was all you doing. Musibat shoud be your middle name." Asad will be Asad

I love their bickering! Poor Dilshaad being sick and having to listen to AsYa 😆

"Nahi. Zoya ne soup banaya hain mere liye. Najma aur who pizza kha lenge. [No. Zoya has made soup for me. Najma and she will have pizza.]" Dilshaad smiled at how her son could guess the dinner menu.

"Packet ka?" Asad mumbled.

"I heard that Mr. Khan. Allah Miyah, what's wrong with you? I just spent an hour in the kitchen preparing chicken noodle soup from scratch and you think I just boiled the contents of a packet? And for the record, I do know how to make dinner too. We just chose to order in so that I could spend as much time with Phoopi as possible."

Asad could not hide his smile anymore and raised his hands in defence seeing Zoya's seething face. Dilshaad too burst forth laughing seeing Zoya's face but quickly sobered down seeing how Zoya's reaction to her."

OMG! This was priceless! 😆

I'm loving where this story is going! And I love the way you write it out! totally awesome! 👏

Chapter 20

OMG! I knew from the title that I would love this chapter! So awesome!

Whenever AsYa are in the same room, sparks fly! ☺️

A jelly Asad is an adorable Asad! 😆

Poor Najma...she seems to really have something for Azam!

The ending was so sweet and funny! 😆 😃

Chapter 21

Yay! New threads! Congrats! You totally deserve it!!!! 🥳 👍🏼 🤗

Now on to the chapter:

"Asad observed her texting someone from her phone. Her gloom from earlier was replaced with her effervescent smile. Control yourself Asad. Focus. He reprimanded himself." I admit I smile at Asad's insecurities but this is tooo cute! 😃

Aww I feel bad for Zoya!

Love the way Asad freaked out on the guy! So Asad style! 😳

OMG! The flashback! Wow! Zoya needs a hug! 🤗

Great update!

Ok now to my batameezi of not relying to your PMs! I'm super super sorry! Promise no sob story just a sorry! They changed my hours at work and I haven't had the time. But please don't stop sending me your PMs! Pretty please with a cherry on top! 😳 🤗

Love ya! Will try to read and comment sooner next time! 😳

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: starsinmyeyes

I can guess what he may have said...😆

Ishq waala lourve

I have given a few hints of his lifestyle from 10 years ago. I am not saying he is the same, that's Asad's opinion. But samjhdar ko ishara kaafi hai.

i hope its ishq wala...😆

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GoodGoneWrong

@GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: juggaad

Well, I have always loved it when Asad, Zoya and MyJaan got together.

Well I am working on bringing Jaan back into the picture...

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webuser7

@webuser7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

First of all, congrats on the new thread! 👏

Lovely update Rivs! Wonder what exactly Azam said to Asad years ago that soured their relationship.

AsYa scene with the PI was cute. Glad Asad was supportive of Zoya. His anger. Uff! Bechaara PI!! 😆

Zoya's FB gave more insight to her loneliness. Waiting for the main plot to unfold.

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Linsie
Thanks for the pm...

zoya is worried about her findings...
and her visa expiry

asad and azam revelation

asad.. jealous attitude towards azam ...
and he feel he need to protect her...

Asad almost jump on PI... for asking something that made
zoya sad...