AsYa FF: Destiny Comes Calling (suspended) #2 *Note* 3/12/13 Pg 26 - Page 6

Originally posted by: Linsie

Something still missing why najma avoid azam..

Originally posted by: Oldestfan

Rivs thanks for the pm. Nice slant on aapi, jeeju and her inner debate. asad hero hai, hero!

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

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First of all many many congratulations on your second thread di...wow it has been a long and wonderful journey and i feel so happy to be the first one to comment on the new thread...

Congratulations once again on this very very deserving second thread..🥳

Thank you for the support🤗

Now coming to the update.Can i say it was a very beautiful and emotional one 😳

Yes u can. And thanks for saying so

I will never get tired of appreciating the fact that you will manage to keep anwar linked to zoya nd not forget about him.I am so happy to see her discussing the progress with him.😳

Yes...two reasons I want them connected and I want Asad to later remember this during one of his J moments...😆

Control yourself Asad. Focus

So Mr.khan is jealous😆Come on just accept it Mr.Khan😆😆

Well...he is just over protective...protecting her from predators like Azam😉😆

Interesting Asad nd azam back story..so they were quite close but they drifted apart.Well i am really excited to know what did azam say to asad that their relationship took such a turn.

There is a reason but not what he said...

I am glad the PI asked that question to zoya coz we an audience needed to know why she wanted to find her father so bad and i think zoya needed a reality check too😃

Yes...so did we

I loved how asad supported zoya nd how our sher roared😳😳

I can't have him sit mute while she is breaking apart. He is a gentleman first.😉

I loved zoya's reply to the PI as to why she wanted to find her father.I think she knows excatly what she is doing and what she is up against.She is one strong girl😳😳

Yes she is...she is my alter ego (Gul style)😆

Their eyes met and it was a moment of reconnect for them, one where words held no meaning. The discomfort from the morning was long gone and it was replaced with something much more meaningful and deep rooted.

Beautiful lines di...i loved the silent talking between the two😳😳Nothing talks better than your eyes and i loved this convo very much😃

Yes yes yes

I like the fact that asad is so caring towards zoya😳😳Hmm i wonder how will zoya decide to extend her visa?Joining asad's office or something else?😉

Send me ideas...

But as soon as she was in the closed confines of her room, her feelings and thoughts replaced the put up exuberance.

I love how you show zoya's feeling so beautifully.How she is someone else to the entire world and a completely different person in the confines of her room😳

Like I said...alter ego😉

I loved the way you explained how she could never feel completely at home with anwar nd zeenat due to humeira nd therefore she needed to find her father.

Wonderful reasoning to her actions di

Thanks...It was necessary coz I kept asking myself why she wants her birth family when she already has one.

looking forward to the next update.the updates are getting very interesting and emotional😳😳

Love you loads di❤️❤️

Thanks and lots of love to u too

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey dear,

This was a v crucial chap from the story. it really did clear some doubts. For Asad & Azam, you have stated what I had doubts about, but only you can tell the precise details about it. I am glad that instead of the cold phase between them, the guys helped each other out during testing times. Yaar I didn't understand why would Azam start this designer business as Chaand Bi, I mean why in this way?

I will explain the remaining things as the story progresses. but I just wanted to get some of the questions out of my way. Since so many of you had so many questions. I will keep in mind to go into details of the Chaand Bi phase and why Asad is pissed about it. Don't forget two things - Asad does not like Azam's lifestyle /choices (the fight) and he is a judgmental person as I have shown enough time already.

Okay for Zoya, I really felt bad for the poor girl. I think the P was right in his place to make her understand that the outcome of this all won't be all good & to remind her of the worst. Asad was right too, obviously he didn't want anyone to dampen Zoe's spirit & dictate them to something.

But Zoe's response was v good.

Thanks. The main purpose of this part was for you the readers to understand Zoya's POV. I am glad you like it.😃

I know she only lets down her guards when alone. her past has been really painful. despite all the love her aapi & jeeju gave her, the rude behavior from Humeira made her suffer a lot. I feel that she too wants someone whom she can call as her own, her own family.

Yes. She wants her own family and hence the search for her blood relatives. But she is not ignoring that they abandoned her. Also, from Humy's POV, her parents are raising a stranger who is not related to her. She has to share everything with her. Its not easy esp. when your parents don't give u preferential treatment. She is not bad, just does not want to accept the reality. Maybe when she is older, it will be easier for her.

Oh the earring misses to be seen by Asad this time too, when will he get to know that it's Zoe's earring that he has.

I have not decided on that yet. Maybe it will come up at some point, but not yet. How about it being her mooh Dikhayi when the time comes????😆

waiting for the next part. update soon.

CONGRATULATIONS on the 2nd Thread.

Lots of love.

Originally posted by: Asya_Maaneet

Yay..you are back...🥳

Chapter 18

Totally loving the bond between Dilshaad and Zoya. 😊

Thanks

It's so sweet of Asad to help Zoya

😃

Very nice chapter! 👏

Thanks

Chapter 19

"Ms. Farooqui I should have guessed it was all you doing. Musibat shoud be your middle name." Asad will be Asad

I love their bickering! Poor Dilshaad being sick and having to listen to AsYa 😆

That's her fate.😆

"Nahi. Zoya ne soup banaya hain mere liye. Najma aur who pizza kha lenge. [No. Zoya has made soup for me. Najma and she will have pizza.]" Dilshaad smiled at how her son could guess the dinner menu.

"Packet ka?" Asad mumbled.

"I heard that Mr. Khan. Allah Miyah, what's wrong with you? I just spent an hour in the kitchen preparing chicken noodle soup from scratch and you think I just boiled the contents of a packet? And for the record, I do know how to make dinner too. We just chose to order in so that I could spend as much time with Phoopi as possible."

Asad could not hide his smile anymore and raised his hands in defence seeing Zoya's seething face. Dilshaad too burst forth laughing seeing Zoya's face but quickly sobered down seeing how Zoya's reaction to her."

OMG! This was priceless! 😆

Thanks. I could totally see judgmental Asad kicking in. Like is Zoya were to serve him dinner, he could totally go looking in the kitchen for a receipt of to-go boxes. That's the trust he has on her.

I'm loving where this story is going! And I love the way you write it out! totally awesome! 👏

Thanks

Chapter 20

OMG! I knew from the title that I would love this chapter! So awesome!

You did? Thats awesome

Whenever AsYa are in the same room, sparks fly! ☺️

A jelly Asad is an adorable Asad! 😆

Yes he is. Poor thing has no idea what's gotten into him

Poor Najma...she seems to really have something for Azam!

Lol...yes. It will clear up soon. I am going to make her happy go lucky soon.😃

The ending was so sweet and funny! 😆 😃

Thanks.😳

Chapter 21

Yay! New threads! Congrats! You totally deserve it!!!! 🥳 👍🏼 🤗

Thanks

Now on to the chapter:

"Asad observed her texting someone from her phone. Her gloom from earlier was replaced with her effervescent smile. Control yourself Asad. Focus. He reprimanded himself." I admit I smile at Asad's insecurities but this is tooo cute! 😃

I think you were the first to catch the insecurities. I am so glad u caught it.

Aww I feel bad for Zoya!

Love the way Asad freaked out on the guy! So Asad style! 😳

Yes. so Asad.😉

OMG! The flashback! Wow! Zoya needs a hug! 🤗

Great update!

Ok now to my batameezi of not relying to your PMs! I'm super super sorry! Promise no sob story just a sorry! They changed my hours at work and I haven't had the time. But please don't stop sending me your PMs! Pretty please with a cherry on top! 😳 🤗

I figured ur work got u. I am sure its not an easy job to be working with kids. I will keep sending u PMs. don't worry. You take care.

Love ya! Will try to read and comment sooner next time! 😳

Originally posted by: webuser7

First of all, congrats on the new thread! 👏

Thanks RK. How are you?

Lovely update Rivs! Wonder what exactly Azam said to Asad years ago that soured their relationship.

Why is everyone stuck on the words? Why is no one asking why they bothered Asad so much when they did not all the years prior to then?

AsYa scene with the PI was cute. Glad Asad was supportive of Zoya. His anger. Uff! Bechaara PI!! 😆

Thanks.

Zoya's FB gave more insight to her loneliness. Waiting for the main plot to unfold.

Originally posted by: me2you

Chapter 21

Control yourself Asad. Focus (Getting distracted Mr. Khan?)

Ofcourse...the lady is texting someone and smiling away..What do u expect?

if he was jealous (Perhaps not now, lekin woh feeling bhi aa jayega) True that

She felt a hand on her hand while a comforting arm went around her shoulder, squeezing them lightly lending her some emotional support (A very sweet gesture. Exactly what she needs at that moment) Yes...ab jaldi apne liye Asad dhoondo...

Their eyes met and it was a moment of reconnect for them - The discomfort from the morning was long gone and it was replaced with something much more meaningful and deep rooted (Very nice) 👏😃

Just giving birth did not make anyone a parent (True!!!) I knew u would get this one.

Very good update. Bas kaafi hain na? Told you it will be a straight to the point comment. Well, here you have it.

Narges...itna Amul butter mat demand kar...moti ho jaayegi. Asad bhi nahi milega.😆

Chalo, after giving it a second thought, I made up my mind. I just can't give my comment like that. I guess its your lucky day ki mein ache mood mein hoon.

Acha hua I was worried about u😆

Rivs, I really liked this update. Why? Because it had very deep emotions and feelings. The flashback part was very well written. Zoya's turmoil was emotional. You have used the right words to describe what she is going through. Good

Okay so now we know that Asad and Azad used to be good friends but their relation has changed, for no good reasons. Lekin aisa kya hua tha??? Baad mein batati hoon.

Waiting for the next update, because I want to read more the flashback. Again, a very well written part! 👏

Thanks

Ab khush? are u?

WHAT THE?! 😲 I forgot to do say this: Congrats for the second thread!!! You made it! 😃 Thanks