AsYa SS *A Pink Rose** Chapter 3 (12/4/13) - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
just caught up with this

brilliant concept

looking forward to this

Pm me when you update

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 2


Recap:

Zoya is recalling how her only family died while Asad is concerned for her and she is freaking out on how he is talking to her in this state.
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"Haan. Mein Teekh hoon." Zoya lied to him with a fake smile still clutching on to the flower.

Asad could still see the pain behind that smile.

Asad took his thumbs and wiped away the tears on her face. Zoya's eyes widened in shock. That touch sent an electric current through both of them.

"You want to talk about it?" asked Asad in a concerned voice.

Zoya opened her mouth to say something but then she paused in between and looked at Asad. Concern was evident on his face. She felt like she knew Asad forever and could trust him so she just followed her instincts. Yet she still thought about it while staring emotionessly at the pink rose. Then the plane took off.

It was about three hours into the flight. It was time for lunch. Zoya didn't want to eat anything as she hated airplane food so she asked for a cup of water. While as Asad, he knew he had to eat the food no matter how unhygeinic it was or how awful it tasted because he gets extra grumpy when hungry. Anyways, he knew it wasn't the time to get grumpy especially if there is an angelic beauty right beside him. So Asad got his food and started eating.

In the middle of Asad eating, Zoya gasped and said "OK." Asad immediately stopped and stared at Zoya with wide eyes and a mouth full of food. He resembled a baby boy with a mouth full of chips looking at his favorite ice cream.

One glance at him and Zoya turned into fits of giggles after all that crying.

Asad now realizing at how foolish he looked quickly swallowed his food forcefully and cleaned up. While cleaning up, he saw the beautiful sight of Zoya laughing and was satisfied he could make the beautiful yet sad girl happy.

After laughing Zoya looked at Asad and took a deep breath.

"OK so long story short, my Appi and Jiju died three weeks ago and the last thing they left me was this pink rose. I know it won't last long but my Appi told me to cherish it as long as I have it." Zoya said in one breath.

After hearing what Zoya had said, Asad's face was filled with mixed emotions. He was shocked, concerned, sad and more. Zoya noticed his expressions but couldn't comprehend what he was thinking so she just looked away not sparing another glance at him.

Then Asad sat there emotionless for a while and spoke up, "My father left me at the age of ten. Some say it's a too young of a age to understand things but I understood more than they thought. My father cheated on my mother. After my mom found out, she was devasted. At the time, she was pregnant with my little sister. My father left us. We had to find a way to make money, afford school for me and my sister, afford food and everything else but my so called father, he didn't show a hint of concern." By now Asad and Zoya's eyes were both red with tears as Asad continued.

"I am ashamed to call this man my father. He is not deserving of it. He is the worst father a--." Asad was cut off by Zoya and recieved death glares from her.

"Never say that about you father! NEVER!" She said with anger.

Asad's anger started to rise, "He is not my father."

They started getting stares from everyone so they lowered their voices.

"OK fine mister!" Zoya said.

"My name's Asad Ahmed Khan!" Said Asad.

Happy Birthday! Congrats! You know your own name! My name is Zoya Farooqi now moving on." Zoya said as she rolled her eyes.

" Say what ever you say about your father but you wouldn't be alive this day without him. Atleast you got a fatherly and motherly love! You had a sister too!" Zoya's voice started to crack.

"I was orphaned at age of three. My Appi and Jiju had adopted me years later. My mom died infront of my eyes in a fire and I remember her only from a few pictures. I have never seen father ever. I was so happy when my Appi and Jiju adopted me and I got a parents love but it wasn't the same. Everyone one I ever loved leaves me. And look at you now, you should be happy with what you have today because as of now, I have nothing and by nothing, I literally mean nothing except for this pink rose."

She the stared at the rose with no expressions while her words rang in his head.

Thats when a girl came up to her seat. She was wearing a mini skirt and a tang top. She long hair and cat like eyes.

Zoya came out of her thoughts and her that familiar voice that sounded a little too sweet.

Anonymous: "Jammy! Tum!"


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MEOW! Billo Rani!! Billo rani billo rani billo raniii!! Lol

Please dont hate on me for bringing her! I hate her as much as anyone has ever hated! But there was no one else evil enough to take her place...

Uhhh... i dont know what to say yaars!

Lol i just tried to fit in the part when they inteoduce themselves to eachother...

Emotional part...

This is all a fragment of my imagination and characters arent mine! Didnt intend to offend anyone!

Ok this part DEFINETLEY did not come out the way I planned! I wanted more of Asad's story but thats when I realized it was pretty small. Please help! Is there anything else I am missing it feels so incomplete!

To a side note i updated for two reasons only! I AM FINALLY A SENIOR MEMBOR!! Yipeee!! And finally my finals are over!! DOUBLE YIPEE!!

Please buddy @Ira_PM for PMS!!!!!!!!! Its too confusing for me to know who wants an update and who doesnt. P[lease add there for PM!!!
Edited by Asya_Obsession - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
AsYa opened up. Yipeee🥳 But uffo... her also they are fighting😆
Billo Rani😡
Waiting for the next chapter to know what happnes😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
You guys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please add me here for PMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't to do it through my @Asya_Obsession!
So either add here or say "Pm me"

Here I will make a PM list:




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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pm list

-Dynamite-
princess101
VindhyaMounika
aashiqua
ashikakapoor
-LiveLoveLaugh-
--Mahima--
delena_
Kyara.95
NidoNimami
SBanoMalik
zola007
AnjuRish
ankitabaran
ZoyaAsadKhan
zoyaah




NOTE**names in blue must be added in @Ira_PM buddly list for PMS
Edited by Asya_Obsession - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
aww their first convo <3 nice story so far 😊
Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Nice update. (: Emotional too. <3<3

Whoa, Jammy?! 😲 That means...TANVEER. 😡

Continue soon! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Very nice but Billo Rani is back :P thanx for the Pm and update soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
yeh billli yaha kya karing!🤣the update was great do continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
wonderful story
continue soon
and pm me

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