AsYa SS *A Pink Rose** Chapter 3 (12/4/13) - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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but now how he is going to start the convo and

who give her the rose
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great start👏
Pls continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start... awesome and amazing... Please do continue soon and PM me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ok.. this is quite interesting.
What's the secret behind that pink rose, eh?
I hope you're not planning to write that Zoya just broke up with Ayaan and Ayaan has given her that pink rose or someyhing like that 🤢 It would be just urggghhh 😕
Anywayz, All the very best for your exams 👍🏼 and update the part ASAP 😛 I'll be waiting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kyara.95

Ok.. this is quite interesting.
What's the secret behind that pink rose, eh?
I hope you're not planning to write that Zoya just broke up with Ayaan and Ayaan has given her that pink rose or someyhing like that 🤢 It would be just urggghhh 😕
Anywayz, All the very best for your exams 👍🏼 and update the part ASAP 😛 I'll be waiting 😊




TRUST ME! *zoya style*

I hate just the thought of ZoYaan *shudders* as much as the next guy! 🤢 Dont worry yaar! Nothing like that!! 😉

Thank you!! 😃

Uhhh ill update it... soon... 😕

Lol either when exams are over or exactly at the tenth page! 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 1

Zoya's POV
There I was crying to my heart's desire... the thought of leaving my home behind, it broke my heart. This is the place where i got my motherly and fatherly love until my Appi and Jiju left me.
Flashback:
3 weeks ago
Zeenat Appi: "Zoya, me and your Jiju are going to Ms. Maheka's house OK?
Zoya: "OK Appi! Don't forget to get my goodbye candies when I leave for Bhopal tomorrow!"
Zeenat Appi: "Accha baby, I will not, don't worry!"
Then three hour's later Zoya received an unknown call.
Anonymous: "Hello, is this Zoya speaking?"
Zoya; "Yes, who is this?"
Anonymous: "Umm well skip that... your Appi and Jiju just died in a car accident with a drunk driver.
Zoya felt her world collapse. Tears directly just started streaming down her face as if on cue.
Zoya: "WHAT?! How do you know they are my Appi and Jiju?! Who are you!? Please tell me what happened! PLEASE! Where do I go? Please tell me you are joking!"
Anonymous: "No, I'm not joking. Who I am shouldn't mean anything to you. Your Appi and Jiju are in City Hospital and they have a 0.1% chance of living.
Zoya quickly got her bag and rushed to the hospital but the time she arrived, it was too late. She ran to the room in which her Zeenat Appi and Anwar Jiju laid almost lifeless in.
"Zoya." Called Zeenat.
Zoya silently nodded through her tears.
"Come here beta" said Zeenat.
Zoya obediently agreed and walked up to her Appi.
Zeenat started: "I didn't know it wouldn't end this way but please, just take this as a remembrance of us. It probably will not last long but please just cherish it as long as you have it."
Zeenat gave Zoya a beautiful pink rose. Zoya promised to herself mentally that she will protect it as long as possible.
Zeenat slowly caressed Zoya's cheek and breathed her last breaths until all Zoya heard was the "beeep" of the monitor.
Zoya slowly left the room and ran to her house and cried to her heart's desire and maybe more.
Zoya mourned over the loss of her only family. Yet she knew she still had a mission and that was to find her family that left her alone. Since she missed her flight, she booked one three weeks later.
She made all plans as she had done before and she called up her Dilshad Phoopi to reconfirm she can stay and to give her the news.
When Dilshad heard the news, she had immediately prayed for them heaven and hoped Zoya could manage.
Flashback Ends
"Now here I am STILL crying my heart out clutching to the last thing that Zeenat Appi and Anwar Jiju had left me knowing there is an enigmatic yet a man that resembles someone 100times better than a Greek God with extremely chiseled features and beautiful brown eyes...W-WWAIT! OFF TOPIC! Think about him later! After completing your thoughts!" Said Zoya to herself.
"So as I was saying uhh to myself... there is an extremely handsome man gazing at me and here I am mourning!" Zoya continued thinking.
Her thoughts were interrupted by his voice...
"Soo...umm" Asad said to Zoya.
Then Zoya slowly shot her head up and looked up at him.
A few thoughts jumbled up in her mind; "Is he talking to me? Why is he talking to me? Who is he talking to...not me! NO NO NO! NOT AT THIS TIME! NOT LIKE THIS! How will i respond! No I won't respond!" She finally calmed down and decided not to reply.
"I uhh... woh actually... i couldn't help but notice you were crying...alot actually. Tum teekh hoon?" Asad said.
"Allah Miyan! Whats wrong with you!? Talk about stating the obvious! Do i look OK to you?!" Zoya screamed at him mentally.
"Haan. Mein Teekh hoon." Zoya lied to him with a fake smile still clutching on to the flower.

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OK OK OK...I know I said after ten pages but I had this already written and just wanted to wait until I got my ten pages but then I felt incomplete and I couldn't study for my history exam without posting this... So ishould be able to study now...

And Anonymous will come in the "twist thing" i mentioned in the comments earlier...

I wanted this part to be sadder.. it didn't come put like I wanted it to. :(


Chappals are allowed! FLUFFY ONES!
Since this came out like this... i guess next part will be about Asad.
Hoped you like it :D

Please leave lots of likes and jumbo wala comments!

All of this is my imaginationish

Didn't mean to offend anyone!


Please buddy @Ira_PM for PMS!!!!!!!!! Its too confusing for me to know who wants an update and who doesnt. Please add there for PM!!!


Edited by Asya_Obsession - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I loved the update thanx for the pm and update soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovelyy...it was amazing..plz update soon..
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awesome and wonderful... Thanks for the PM...
Why don't u want to update banner...??? Please update.. I want to see...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Cute. I never get anyone interesting to sit besides me in long flights!


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