AsYa SS *A Pink Rose** Chapter 3 (12/4/13)

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The Pink Rose
An AsYa SS
By: Ira (@Asya_Obsession)





Prologue:
He finally got his beloved black and bitter coffee and comfortably sat down in the waiting area patiently waiting for is flight to board.

After sitting down something caught his eye. There was a girl in a full sleeved black shirt with swirled designs by the wrist of sleeves. She was wearing blue skinny jeans and had her hair let down.She had beautiful milky white skin and deep chocolate brown eyes that were brimming with tears. Soon enough, they were streaming down her face like a river. Once in a while she would shut her eyes as if it would prevent more tears from falling. She had a cute button nose and pink, plump lips which reminded him of that pink rose she was holding.

Yet, she looked ethereal and he couldn't help but be mesmerized by the beauty infront of him.

She was crying a lot. She was clutching on to the pink rose as if her life depended on it and she couldn't and wouldn't stop crying.
Just about when Asad was going to walk up to her and ask her why she was crying, the speakers announced "Flight #124 to Bhopal is now boarding."

He quickly grabbed his things and rushed to the gate. Yes, he was leaving that distraught girl behind but lest did he know she was boarding the same flight as him.

While sitting himself on his seat, he noticed the same girl who was crying just moments ago walking around trying to find her seat. Deep down inside he wished that it would be besides him.

Finally she walked up to the seat right beside Asad. She put her bags in the top compartment and sat at the seat beside Asad.

Asad was relieved at the fact that she was sitting next him and he couldn't help but notice she was holding the same pink rose. Just when he was about to tell her something, the flight attendant came and asked them if they needed anything.

"Looks like this just has to wait." Asad thought to himself getting comfortable knowing this would be a long flight as it is New York straight to Bhopal, India.

This is how Asad and Zoya's love story began.

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Hey guys! I am writing my first SS here!! I have a bunch of exams this week so don't expect me to update soon! ;)
Please tell me what you think and whether I should continue or not
If you guys want me to continue then I must get over 20 like and over ten pages worth of comments! Dekho na!I'm being generous here! :)
This is all a fragment of my imagination!
Chappals are allowed! NO actually i changed my mind! I want like extremely soft and cozy slippers of size 6. :D

Please buddy @Ira_PM for PMS!!!!!!!!! Its too confusing for me to know who wants an update and who doesnt. P[lease add there for PM!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Index:

Prologue : Page 1

Chapter 1 : Page 5

Chapter 2: Page 7


Chapter 3: Page 10
Edited by Asya_Obsession - 11 years ago
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nice start, cant wait to read the rest 😊
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Nice start plz continue soon 😊
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WOW! Awesome storyline. Continue soon!!
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Plz continue seems like a good story
Just one request just don't make asad rude or arrogant
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Very interesting can't wait to read please PM me once u update and update soon please😃
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Originally posted by: Hophop1456

Plz continue seems like a good story

Just one request just don't make asad rude or arrogant




No worries! But Asad cant be Asad without his black and bitter coffee! 😆

BUT!!!

He will be very stubborn and angry when the " twist thing" comes around chapter 5ish inshallah... otherwise he is like zoya.


And also!! Has the same respect for woman...


Ok actually he is alot like the show especially when OCD, jealousy or anything regulary annoying things comes. Otherwise he is funloving and an extrovert... you will see in character sketch ;)
Edited by Asya_Obsession - 11 years ago
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I'm in! Liked d way u started! Update soon! :)
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Hey its awsum plz continue soon n dont forget to PM me

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