FF Turnaround-2. CH 30 Updated PG125 (14th Dec) COMPLETED* - Page 76

Originally posted by: asyafreva

wow...! that was truly good...! Nd m sooo happy they sorted out...! 👏 U rock dear..! bt only 3 more chapters fr this to finish...? its gonna end soo soon..?? I'll miss this lyk hell...! 😭 will try our best to make it reach a new thread...! It juz seems lyk dis story started yest nd already today its ending...! U r truly one fab writer.. hopefully u start smthing new soon...!

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

Aashna I'm so so sorry for missing out on two updates. Haven't been on IF since yesterday!

Chapter 26 -

Oh man I was smart enough to guess what was going , i expected the media, the paparazzis, the gossip, angry Asad but boy what happened later was just so so so unexpected.

I knew he would be angry but the things he said to Dilshad! Well i don't blame him, he had been suppressing his anger ever since he came to know the truth and the lid was going to blow sooner or later, but man what the hell happened with Zoya now. These two are forever fighting 😆

COME ON GAL...OFCOURSE ITS GIVEN..UR SOO SO SMART.😳..N YA ASAD ANGRY= MORE FUN THAN CRAZY PAPRAZZIS😆 LOL...BUT U KNOW THEY'LL ALSO HAVE THEIR 5 SEC OF FAME SOON😉

N WELL THE FIGHT HAD TO BE MULTI DIMENSIONAL..SO THE EVER SO IMPULSIVE ZOYA HAD HER TAKE ON THE SITUATION TOO..N BOY DID SHE REACT...N THEN..SHE'LL REGRET IT..😆 TYPICALL ZOYA😆

Chapter 27 -

*phew* misunderstandings cleared, Some apologies given and accepted and alls well that ends well

But is everything really well? How are they going to tackle the paparazzis? Well i do have an idea of what might happen but I'll keep that to myself, i will not reveal it and then later on IF it does come true i'll be all smug about it! 😆

PS - My comments may come in late, I have taken part in 2 essay competitions and i gotta prepare an essay of roughly 5000 words so I'll be busy busy busy!

YUP ALL GOOD NOW..ZOYA AS AI SAID REALISED WAT SHE DID AND SO DID ASAD..THEY BOTH I TELL YA CAN BE REALLY STUPID N IMPULSIVE AT TIMES..😆

N HOW THEY R GOIN TO TACKLE IT..I THINK UR GETTING WARMER ALREADY WITH UR UNSPOKEN EXPECTATION OF WHATS COMING NEXT..SO WE'LL ADD THAT TO UR MANY PREDICTIONS ONCE I UPDATE..N NE DAY GAL..BE ALL SMUG..N O YEAH..I KNEW IT...😉

N AS FOR UR COMMENTS..WELL AS FAR AS U COMMENT..N READ...M ALL GUD...SO TAKE UR TIME HUN...N HOPE UR ESSAYS ENJOY THE LIMELIGHT 😉

Originally posted by: kals82

hi u said u will update on saturday... today is monday...????????????😭... waiting for it...

prequel is wonderfull ...

Originally posted by: arorasurbhi

awesome update
very well explained asad & zoya's POV
best part was dilshaad & asad's conversation
thanks 4 pm...

Originally posted by: ap3h7u

Amazing...liked Dilshad's confession😊...ASYA resolved their fight🤗...

I know I know what will happen😃-Asad will announce in front of the media that Zoya is his wife🤗...let's see if I'm right😃...update soon😊

Originally posted by: Gudduluvs

Awesum..wow...update...just luvd it...thnks

Originally posted by: Linsie

Fragile heart

A fragile heart was broken before
I don't think it could endure another pain
But there's a voice from deep inside of you
That's calling out to make you realize

That this new bond gives inspiration
To all who feel no love appeal no more
So how can I break this wall around you
That's aiding both our hearts to grow in pain?

So forget your past and we can dream tomorrow
Save our hearts for care and lovin' too
It's hard, I know, but oh, one thing's for sure
Don't go and break this fragile heart

A hurting mind in need of emotion
I don't think I could endure another pain
But baby, in you, I've found affection
Affection I have never felt before
So don't let your past destroy what comes tomorrow
Don't go and break my fragile heart

With all this fire that burns between us
There's so much to lose, yet so much more to gain
And if I could choose the world around me
The world I'd choose would all revolve around you
So help me complete the game inside me
And help me to mend, to mend this fragile heart... 👏 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: Smmm

Ch24 :

Awww I loved it !!! It was aesthetically written !!!

The way Asad brought the old Zoya back was jus woh !!

Also the song selection was lovely ( I have never heard this song ) I loved the lyrics they were soo apt

My favorite line was this one :

Not this time Zoya he said,...Im not gonna let you get away... its time..you let yourself go, and give me my old Zoya back, The firey, confident and passionate Zoya back...he voiced his desire with coviction, making Zoya nod, lost in his soulful voice, his possesive yet full of love demands..

And this one too :

Asad and Zoya were finally together and one in every sense, finally their past had joined hands with their present and given to it..all that had been left behind in the recesses of their yesterdays.Now the two once again, sealed their relationship with their undyin, love for each other.It was Zoya's birthday and what better way to start her new year in the arms of her love, soaked in the after efeects of their lovemaking.

Truly what a better way to begin your new life that in the arms of your loved one

And last but not the least it wasn't at all vulgar !! So I loved it 👏👏

THANK U SO VERY MUCH FOR A LOVELY COMMENT..N FOR QUOTING UR FAVORITE LINES..M FLATTERED..N M GLAD U FOUND IT NOT VULGAR N CLASSY...THAT WAS ALWAYS MY INTENT...WELL..ONCE AGAIN THANK U FOR ALL UR AWESOME WORDS..😃

Ch25

Even though I feel bad for their separation , I just can't help but say they were sooo lucky to relive such special moments twice :

She smiled at the thought of their first/second encounter, their first/second touch, their first/second fight, their first/second connect, their first/second smile to each other, their first/second kiss, and today, their first time making love, again.

Zoya blushing awww again I thought that's just sooo adorable after thinking of their night and then the next moment she was back to being her bold self.

And Asad not being jealous because Riley's girl friend was there , was cute .

The reunion with their friends reminded me of my reunions and my party's with my amigos !!!!

And the grand finale to the part the revelation !!! Shit he got to know !!! Once again I was in awe by your characters they were bang on with their reactions

Zoya was perfect I can't believe she is ssooo compassionate and understanding and Asad I could feel his emotions and pain

Both the leads were lovely and your writing ,everything about their reactions was justified , not for a moment did anything seem out of place

Well that's it for now I will be back to comment on the rest of the parts !!!

Btw I've read the prequel to this one , and I want to tel you that your writing and imagination and creativity seriously deserve a salute , at sometime thing of it professionally if you still haven't 👏👏

ONCE AGAIN..I JUST TRULY ENJOYED READIN UR COMMENT..N TO READ HOW MUCH U ENJOYED THE UPDATE..N HOW IT WAS WELL JUSTIFIED FOR U..MAKES ME REAL HAPPY...N THANK U FOR ALL THE ENCOURAGING WORDS N COMPLIMENTS..ON MY WRITING..N MY CHARACTERS...TRULY MAKES ME FEEL LIKE IT MAKES MY DAY...N AS FRO WRITING PROFESSIONALLY..ERMM...I DUNNO BOUT THAT YET...I FEEL I HAVE A LONG WAY TO GO..BUT THANK U FOR TELLIN ME THAT MY WRITING IS WORTH THAT TRY...WILL C HOW THINGS GO..😃..SO YA I'LL WAIT ON UR REMAINING COMMENTS...N M ALSO GLAD U ENJOYED THE FLUFFY PREQUEL..😆