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Linsie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#741

the childish zoya came back and ... and she did not let go of ... asad... and he knows he cant go against her wish...

and they are together again...

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Linsie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#742

Is nice zoya stand up for her mother in law more then to her husband... coz zoya loves dilshad like her own mom...

and what ever happen is all moment of weakness...

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Linsie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#743

Asad and his anger... react first... then think... he cant hold things
he said it out loud... thats him... is true you always show your anger... to the love ones...

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Linsie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#744

Pehle Asad tell me do you forgive me??? Beacause it should be me who needs to be punished, by you and especially by Zoya. 😭 I have done you both wrong, and I need to deal with my penance. 😭 😭 Asad all these years when I saw you everyday, killing yourself from within, your smile gone somewhere.. I would walk up to you..and try to tell you the truth...but I was never able to muster the courage... 👏 👏 👏 mom who admit her mistake... and ready to ask forgiveness... that is dilshad...

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Linsie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#745

Ammi I no longer need you to be worried about the past. 👏 👏 It is a
moment in time that is no longer of value in our lives.👏 Your favors
on me through my life are beyond compare to this 1 mistake. 👏 👏
Yes this mistake hurt me a lot, but it will never be the reason for me
walking away from you. 👏 👏 Infact it should be me that should be
looking down upon himself, for crossing his lines😡 😡 and speaking those harsh words to his own mother who beared so much to raise me... acceptance

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-StarsLinedUp-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#746

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish
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Awsome.. You are too good in bringing out the emotions from each character.. Very well explained about Asad and Zoya's POV for their outburst and yes the way they patched up as well...

Good job.. 👏👏

THANK U SO VERY MUCH...FOR SUCH LOVELY WORDS N COMPLIMENTS..😊...M HAPPY THAT U ENJOYED THE UPDATE...

Originally posted by: Surish

THANKS😊

Originally posted by: mariam1368
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U really write beautifully well dear
Keep it up

The update was amazingly awesome n beautifully written

The conversation between Asad and
Dilshaad was very emotional and
Am happy that he forgave her and
then understood that he
needed to forgive Zoya.

I want them to tell the world
that they're married n stop all
this media crap.

Please update soon n thanks
for the pm.

OMG...THANK U FOR SUCH AN AWESOME COMMENT...N THANK U VERY VERY MUCH FOR UR COMPLIMENTS..😳...MAKES ME VERY HAPPY😊/..N AS FOR TELLIN THE WORLD..THAT SHALL HAPPEN SOON😉

Originally posted by: vinita459
Lovely update. I was shocked to see another update so soon. But it was a good shock . I am happy things got cleared between Asad and Dilshad. Also, I am happy AsYa got back together. These two have suffered enough now no more misunderstandings. Only romance. 😳

I can't believe it is going to end soon. Will be looking forward to your new FF.

Thanks

HEYA...THANKS FOR UR COMMENT..N M GLAD U ENJOYED THE SURPRISE..N THE UPDATE...N M ALSO GLAD UR HAPPY BOUT THEM CLEARIN THE AIR...N AS FOR ENDIN SOON..WELL YA GOTTA BEFORE IT STARTS TO DRAG RITE??..N YA WILL HOPEFULLY POST A TEASER FOR THE NEW FF SOON😃

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-StarsLinedUp-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#747

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa
Amazingly beautifully written chapter. Loved it to bits.

The convo between Asad n Dilshaad was very emotional n
Am happy that he forgave her n then understood that he
needed to forgive Zoya.

I want them to tell the world that they're married n stop all
this media crap.

Please update soon n thanks for the pm. Please pm me for the next part too.

THANK U THANK U THANK U FOR SUCHA LOVELY COMMENT...M VERY HAPPY TO READ THAT U ENJOYED THE UPDATE...N THEY WILL TELL THE WORLD SOON...😃

Originally posted by: princess101
I LOVED THIS SOOO MUCH THANX FOR THE PM AND CANT WAIT FOR U TO UPDATE 😃

THANK U SO VERY MUCH😃

Originally posted by: AnjuRish
awww beautiful dilu mom and asad conversation
so tender heartfelt :)

THANK U SO VERY MUCH😃

Originally posted by: Ramlath
wow i just loved it... Thnks fr d pm...
😃

THANK U😊

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-StarsLinedUp-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#748

Originally posted by: madina12
Yippee...super love the update...
So much emotions & juz love the bonding between mother & son...
At times wen we angry,we say things we dont meant & regret it later.
But a mother would always forgive the son...
N lastly love the 2 varzy in love couple 😛

AWW..THANK U FOR A LOVELY COMMENT...M GLAD U LIKED IT..N WERE ABLE TO RELATE TO IT...😃

Originally posted by: awesome
Awesome update

THANK U😊

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-
awesome ...good that both realized their mistakes!!! asad and dilshad cleared their minds!!! yeah...:):)
zoya is zoya...wants asad but is too stubborn...lol!!!
but finally they are together...n will deal what may come!!!
continue soon

THANK U SO VERY MUCH...CHALO M GLAD U ENJOYED THE UPDATE..N EVERYTHING FELL INTO PLACE..N IT ALL MADE SENSE...THANK U FOR A LOVELY COMMENT..😃

Originally posted by: aman93
great job... u describe both asad n zoya's emotions beautifully...

THANK U SO VERY MUCH..😃

Originally posted by: bulou2013
LOVED IT AWESOME UPDATE

THANK U😊

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-StarsLinedUp-

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#749

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2
Ok Liked the chapter definitely.
Also loved Asad's apology, as it began with placing his head to ask for forgiveness in her lap.

I know exactly how that goes cos My mum usually bears my worse blunt and it is her whom I probably love the most. That part was very well done. Silent Apology which just unveils so much untold turmoil from both Dilshad and Asad.

One thing I would have done differently - but hey it is your story and I am no critic, I am just here to enjoy a free pass.

Ammi...you are more important to me if not as imporatant as Zoya...You both mean a lot to me...and I cant live without either of you...You are the one that gave me life took care of me and made me a man...and ...Zoya she showed me love, made me a better man...she is the one that sustains my life...

I wouldn't compare the two. I think one never can. And I can tell from my own personal experience. A MIL will never like it if her son say you are very imp if not as imp as your DIL. 😃Indian saas - bahu serials dekh thoda. But enough said. 😆

Keep up the good work.

Love

Juliet

PHEW..CHALO TUMHE ACHHA LAGA...N THAT MUJHE ACHHA LAGA...😃..I FOUND ASAD AND DILSHADS PARTS VERY TOUCHING..N YES IT WAS ALL FELT N UNDERSTOOD SILENTLY..SHOWS THE CONNECT BETWEEN THE 2...N AS FOR WAT U WOULD HAVE DONE DIFFERENT...I WOULD HAVE 2...AT THAT POINT I WAS JUST HAVING A WRITERS BLOCK..HENCE THOSE LINES..COS I DONT BELIEVE THE 2 CAN BE COMPARED NE DAY..N AS FOR MIL..I KNW WAT U MEAN..😆..

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2
Dear Aashna,

Thanks for the writers thought process. I loved to reading your thoughts.
Mainly this is just to say I can be a giant pain in the wrong place. So don't mind me and my apologies for stirring things up.

You know I love your work.🤗

Love
Juliet

WELL..I HOPE UR QUESTIONS WERE ANSWERED..N M ALL GAME FOR CONSTRUCTIVE CRITCISM..M FEEDBACK..N OPINIONS...N SO ALL GOOD GAL..😃

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-StarsLinedUp-

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#750

Originally posted by: rajnid68
One gave him life..and the other sustains him..
Aptly put ..
Each has made a place of its own..and he has to uphold it..
Dilshad is the bridge between zoya and asad..and she has become stronger..
They have to overcome the past to be ib the present..
Awesome update...
Thanks for the pm..

THANK U FOR UR AWESOME WORDS...M SO HAPPY TO READ UR COMMENT..N ALSO..VERY HAPPY TO KNOW THAT U ENJOYED THE UPDATE...THANKS😃

Originally posted by: anopama
awesome update
did not need to clarify the
outburst it was understandable
glad asad apologize
and so glad he came to zoya and
she got to apologize.
love tht he will use her smart mouth for
other things
continue soon

THANK U VERY MUCH FOR A LOVELY COMMENT...M GLAD U LIKED IT..N FOUND IT WELL JUSTIFIED..😃

Originally posted by: nilusoni
awesome
thanx for pm

THANK U😊

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra
Sp gud dear
Gud to c dilshad n asad sort their problems

Asad zoya r finally happy

Perfect update

THANK U SO VERY MUCH😃

Originally posted by: Garimavirmanksg
Hey first of all I want to tell u am new to ur writing n ths is the mst awesm ff. U r a fab writer if u hav written other ff or anythng do pm me n plzz pm me ur future writtings too. I hav sent u buddy request.

HEYA...THANK U SO VERY MUCH..N M GLAD U GAVE MY SOTRY A CHANCE..N U ENJOYED IT...N YA WILL KEEP U POSTED...FOR SURE..😊