FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE

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PalyGirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#681

Originally posted by: rajnid68
Paly ..I love mondays ...hahaha
Dilshads reaction was awesome ..
Anger at asad ...at being rude to their guest ..
Perplexed when hearing out A ,Z and N
Horrified after viewing zoyas wound ..
Love for zoya..wonderment at najmas deeds ..
Final decision to tag along with asad and the girls ..
The whole drama quotient ..
At the plot ..Rohan defends dilshad ji ..
Dilshad coaxing him to tell the matter ..
Amidst the action from asad ..
Zoya stumbles on the skeleton ..
Ghosh what a night ..
Thanks for the pm ..

Aww, it was so sweet to read that you love Monday's. Am I a small part of why Monday's are good for you? 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#682

Originally posted by: sarbrathan
OMG I feel so sorry for Rohan. I know it was an accident. There is no way Rohan is a murderer because if he was he would have started shooting as soon as he pulled out the gun. I love Dilshad. Can I get a Rohan and Zoya hug at least? Rohan needs a hug and I am assuming Dilshad will hug him, but can Zoya hug him too.

You insist on liking Rohan, don't you? Don't feel bad - I like him, too!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#683

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

NO. 😡

ASAD WILL KILL ROHAN 😡 🤣 and lock Zoya up after sterilizing her 🤣

No, no, no! Asad would never sterilize Zoya. He badly wants little Zoya's running around! He MIGHT kill Rohan but he won't hurt his musibat.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#684

Originally posted by: Akilla
The mother of all cliffhangers!!!!!!!!, how...what...no, cmonnn really??? Really?? But...I mean...can you come and like be my personal storyteller? Because what you did there, you extremely talented and extraordinary person, is beyond beautiful. LOVE IT

Actually, that might be possible - to an extent. My next story is an original character story based in Chandigarh and features a NRI young man falling in love with a local girl. It will be my first real romance novel so I'll need lots of input. Stay tuned - I'll send out a PM when I start posting the chapters.

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PalyGirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#685

Originally posted by: rosamale
oh my my my... what a twist👏 Rohan killed his own brother?😲 but i feel sad for Rohan😭

All the kindness and support for Rohan makes me feel really good as a writer. I like to think it means that I wrote a sympathetic character who is conflicted and troubled but not evil. Thank you!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#686

Originally posted by: PalyGirl

<font size="3" color="#cc00ff">No, no, no! Asad would never sterilize Zoya. He badly wants little Zoya's running around! He MIGHT kill Rohan but he won't hurt his musibat.</font>

Please don't kill of Rohan! Even if I don't get my Rohan and Zoya hug can I at least get a good moment between them. Even if its just Rohan admiring her determination or SOMETHING. And yes, I love Rohan. The poor guy is tortured... I have a thing for tortured souls. I want his agent to suffer... death would be to easy for that selfish manic 😡

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Posted: 11 years ago

#687

Originally posted by: Rattyswami
Told you it's gripping😉

You did and you were right.👏 I'm also very happy to read all the feedback that is understanding and sympathetic to Rohan. He maybe sad and troubled but readers can tell that he's not evil. I think that means I've written a well-drafted character!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#688

Originally posted by: HR-DMG4life
The update was beautifully written :)
I loved the part between Dilshaad and Zoya
Finally we found out
I don't like that Arun guy
WOW he killed his own brother :O
Did he really?????
Please update soon
Did you really have to leave it at a cliffhanger???

Yes, of course i had to make it a cliffhanger. I'm a sad, insecure writer. 😔 I need to make sure you come back to read the next chapter!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#689

Originally posted by: anopama
wow what an update
awesome dilshad learns the truth
and loved what she told zoya
asad crys and doesnt even realizes
so rohan truth is out and really he killed his own brother
the agent is the slimeball he got some good smacking from asad
so wanted to see my sher fight
continue soon

Arun really needs a good smacking from Rohan. Poor boy is broken and that heartless Arun just crushes the pieces of Rohan's heart into dust. How does Rohan find the strength to go on when he has no support and even the few people in his life hurt him and treat him so badly?

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Posted: 11 years ago

#690

Originally posted by: saida.m
Fantastic! 👏

So Dilshad finally knows what is going on! Zoya's reaction was so heartbreaking! I almost had tears in my eyes!😭
And so was Rohan!
Rohan's misery was heart breaking too! I wanted to rush to him as much as Dilshad wanted to!
And I loved Asad! His reputation is totally something! No ones messes with his family!
That agent turned out to be quite an a-hole!

Rohan has some skeletons in his past, literally! Excited to see how that plays out!