FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE - Page 68

what a update...rohan kill his bro...😕

Ohhhk this chapter is a shock for me but was an outstanding chapter 👏.. Rohan did what?? he killed his own brother.. its hard to believe.. I so hate that agent of his, Arun.. I think there's more to this story and Rohan has not killed his brother.. wish he gets the love of a family.. felt bad for that guy..

Asad is so protective of his family.. and Dilashad is a wonderful mother.. no wonder how all her children wanted to protect their mother.. Convo between Dilshad and Zoya was very emotional and touching...

Update the next part soon.. eagerly waiting to read it.. Thanx for the pm😊

hey a superb n fabulous update...

Amazing!!! update!!!
Zoya, Dilshaad share a great bonding!!!!
Asad so protective of his Family!!!
Rohan killed his brother Rohit!!!!
Arun knows everything!!!
He is so bad with Rohan!!!
Thanks 4 Pm,
Update soon!!!

awesome update👏

wow !!
that was awesome !!

i think there's some misunderstanding for rohan !
maybe he didn't actually killed his brother ! he may be just carrying the blame for it !!
loved the whole update !!

loved this line very much
Asad is my strength, Najma is my pride and you, my darling, are my light

continue soon :)

ur ff is so interesting. with every update i m like.. what now, what next, now this happened. i didn't think of it all...

Originally posted by: snehasya

this was just unimaginable I thought he would have buried some thing precious but it turned out to be a skeleton and rohan killed his own brother why did he do that

the way dilshad said zoya she is part of her family as much as asad and najma was really emotional one loved the way she said they love her not or she has done to them but she is herself

thanks for pm and it was really wonderful update

Originally posted by: asyafreva

Wow...! that was some daring update...! I'm still shocked...! The most attention capturing part was when he revealed he killed his own brother...! Such a shock...! That arun guy is a total coward...! Good for nothing...! I'm guessing Rohan is a innocent guy who was just not in the right state of mind and was young when he killed his brother or was probably some devil back then and due to jealousy he ended up murdering his brother... nd now he truly repents it...! Fabulously written...! The way you depict each and every scene portraying the emotions as well as showing the scene and dialougues...! Just Brilliant...! Pure excellence...! Asad was truly a Sher ready to protect his family and no less was Dilshad or Najma or Zoya...! Eagerly waiting for the next update to know Rohan's past...!