FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE

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sarbrathan

@sarbrathan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#641

OMG I feel so sorry for Rohan. I know it was an accident. There is no way Rohan is a murderer because if he was he would have started shooting as soon as he pulled out the gun. I love Dilshad. Can I get a Rohan and Zoya hug at least? Rohan needs a hug and I am assuming Dilshad will hug him, but can Zoya hug him too.

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lasya13

@lasya13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#642

Omg!! He killed his own brother!! Wonder y...
amazing update as usual...
agn u have left us in suspense.. 😆

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#643

O.o

am actually panting.

and why is there not an A/N? :O

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#644

Originally posted by: sarbrathan
OMG I feel so sorry for Rohan. I know it was an accident. There is no way Rohan is a murderer because if he was he would have started shooting as soon as he pulled out the gun. I love Dilshad. Can I get a Rohan and Zoya hug at least? Rohan needs a hug and I am assuming Dilshad will hug him, but can Zoya hug him too.

NO. 😡

ASAD WILL KILL ROHAN 😡 🤣 and lock Zoya up after sterilizing her 🤣

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#645

Chapter 12...

Love the mother's embrace from dilshad... for zoya
simple love... the meaning is so strong...

The family went out to solve the mystery...

so thats why he wanted ... the lot.. coz he bruied his brother..

so arun take this has his weakness... and bully him..

so what ever he earn .. goes to arun... thats the hell rohan mention..

is kind of big blow for dilshad... learn the truth...

Nice move with asad... 2 big blow ... to the face...

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ankitabaran

@ankitabaran

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#646

Amazing...😛

thanks for pm...

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fanraya

@fanraya

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#647

Wow, this is brilliant, amazing, He killed his own brother? 😕 wow, please update soon, can't wait for the next one😊

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ANKITA GOKHALE

@armaan_best

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#648

hey
my first time on your ff but i must tell you u r the best thriller writer i have ever read on if...your style definitely keeps the readers on their toes...just amazing
bheegi di is my fav and now ur also my most favourite
just love the way asad is always their to protect his family and his subtle yet over possessive nature for Zoya
dishad is just a perfect example for a mother and a graceful lady
u just left the update at a cliffy
do update soon
if possible before next monday
will be waitng

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#649

A cliffy.. And now 1 week before another update.. *sad face*

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Akilla

@Akilla

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#650

The mother of all cliffhangers!!!!!!!!, how...what...no, cmonnn really??? Really?? But...I mean...can you come and like be my personal storyteller? Because what you did there, you extremely talented and extraordinary person, is beyond beautiful. LOVE IT