FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE

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akaswan

@akaswan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#651

Finally the truth is out 😃

Again an awesome udapte 👏

I just loved this story ❤️

Continue soon please 🤗

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rosamale

@rosamale

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#652

oh my my my... what a twist👏 Rohan killed his own brother?😲 but i feel sad for Rohan😭

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#653

amazing it is ...just sooo eventful ...u put me on d nick of my seat ...
eagerly waiting for d nxt ..plzzz plzzz plzzz update soon
thnx for pm

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#654

OMG that was a brilliant update. Loved the way the mystery of the plot has been revealed.
The emotional scene between the khan family was very well written n it did moist my eyes. Dilshaad n Zoya's emotions were so well described.

Loved the whole plot scene. Please update soon n please pm me for the next part too.

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benaz

@benaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#655

Thanks for the PM. Oh my your updates are so full of action, suspense and so much tension. It's just so fascinating to keep on reading. Hehe continue soon😊

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#656

bravo!!! power packed...thrilling update!!!
the truth is finally out...
waiting for more...
cont soon

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Tanvi

@KulfiBai

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#657

Omg whilst reading the latter half of the chapter my heart was thudding like no tomorrow and then BAM I read the last sentence! :O

Great update, Paly! :)

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#658

The update was beautifully written :)

I loved the part between Dilshaad and Zoya

Finally we found out

I don't like that Arun guy

WOW he killed his own brother :O

Did he really?????

Please update soon

Did you really have to leave it at a cliffhanger???

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NainaAlex

@NainaAlex

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#659

amazing...
I was holding my breadth till the end

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#660

Whoa, talk about intense. But I really enjoyed it! I'm just really terrible at writing comments and explaining my opinion about such intense and emotional stuff like this! Sorry. 😆

So, I just want you to know that I really, really liked this chapter, I think you wrote it very well - by explaining all the different emotions and descriptions really nicely - and I hope you continue soon! 😃

-Fari. 😳 ❤️