FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE - Page 40

Originally posted by: webuser7

Paly, this has got to be one of my favorite chapter! Action packed and just brilliant! 👏 The adrenaline rush was tremendous! If you think this chapter is good, wait until the next chapter! I hope it will be heart-wrenching.

Highlights for me:

• Ayaan and Zoya working together. Their interaction was funny and entertaining. The lot scene was thrilling! Didn't I tell you you'd be proud of Ayaan in this chapter? He used is brain and brought Zoya her first big break in the case. Ayaan's not stupid, just young and spoiled. He even protected Zoya when needed. What is there not to love?
• Rohan's secret is unravelling, slowly but surely! Why is he interested in the lot? I'll have to wait to find out. 😆 Yes, of course you must wait! Otherwise, why bother reading my story? I enjoy keeping my readers on the edge of their seats. Stories should entertain us, shouldn't they?
• Asad and Zoya's "relation" appear to be coming to head. Of some sort. Hopefully the next update will reveal more! That has been the hardest part for me - allowing their relationship to build up logically while in the intense pressure cooker that is life with Zoya. But Asad has to understand what he's in for, unless Zoya's fear comes true and he locks her in the store room and feeds her a diet of only protein shakes and cereal!
• Asad seems to be recognizing the depth of his feelings for Zoya. Let's hope he can be more vocal! I don't feel that Asad has a problem being vocal. I think the problem comes from Zoya deliberately misunderstanding him and not accepting the intensity of his feelings. I don't think either of them understand how intensely they feel for each other.
• Poor Zoya, she is so emotional when it comes to Asad. Hopefully, she will recognize her feelings soon! Again, Zoya's life is a pressure cooker. She keeps so much inside her and only lets it out when the pressure becomes to much for her to handle. She - and Asad - need to understand this and develop ways to let her release the pressure before she gets to a crisis point.

Zoya is hurt. Asad found her bleeding. 5 inch gash? Oh boy! 😲 I look forward to the next update. Then I have done my job well!

Originally posted by: ankitabaran

Plz update yr...you have stopped at a such a point which makes me curious to know what will happened next.

So, plz update soon and pm me.😛

Originally posted by: Love-AsYa-4ever

sorry for the late reply. everything on the forum and in life in emerald is just crazy right now.

fantastic update as usual. I really liked how Zoya and Ayaan really bonded in this part and I got to visualize MaBurt again after a long time 😃 ugh I'm so confused about Rohan! like is he good or bad and what is he hiding? please update the next part soon as answer all my questions in the part! 😉

Originally posted by: PalyGirl

Your comment made me laugh. You know I'm writing a detailed story. I can't answer ALL your questions in one chapter! Sadly, the next chapter probably won't answer any of your questions. In fact, I think you'll be crying before it ends.

You have been warned. I hope you're not disappointed!

Thank you for leaving feedback,

Paly