#4|| AsYa FF: Cupid Strikes (Chp 18 to Chp 22) - Page 66

Originally posted by: ..Ananya..

It was a heart wrenching update..I can't write much but it was soul touching and it really made me cry.. 🥺
I can't wait for them to patch up..Please continue soon

Originally posted by: Surish

A riveting account dear!

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

I'm really sorry for extreme delays in un-reserving my comments. But you know my genuine reasons.

Sheer brilliance Mahi. Asad and Zoya doing the play!

Loved it... ❤️

Hawww... Zoya told Asad to stay away from her if he loves her? What the hell is wrong with this girl!

Ohkay... Zoya wants to fix things!!!!!! HOW???? Continue soon!

Brilliant work Mahi baby! 👏

P.S.: My comments would be gif less and short as my net speed is simply superb!

Love you loads, ❤️

Mina di

Originally posted by: --Aashi--

Originally posted by: aman93

waiting for update

Originally posted by: Linsie

update soon

Originally posted by: arshi_ke_dewane

waiting...

Originally posted by: elenaa

Ahem ahem someone completed a century on the fourth thread of her FF!

Originally posted by: elenaa

love you heaps!

Originally posted by: elenaa

Res although three chapters are pending! 😆

heyo im back...I was half through in posting my comment and it got deleted by me only by mistake! im such a mess anyways here you go...

CHAPTER 20

ANYTHING FOR YOU...I never though that Zoya would ask Asad to stay away from her:(

What has gotten into her but I guess given the circumstances and how confused she is between her mind and heart her actions are somewhat justified.

This moment where Asad consoles Zoya was very heartwrenching. Never ever expected Zoya to ask this from Asad.

about the rest of the chapter I just love the way how every time very artistically you manage to put in an apt song to suit the paricular situation.im in awe of that!

Jeene laga hoon I like this song although i dislike the actors featured in it. lol

and khuda jane is toh my favourite...huge fan of deepika and ranbir...sorry im going off beat now 😆

Okay fine coming back to the update...you created a perfect asya moment with jeene laga hoon...song in the bg zoya on top of Asad and petals showering on them. ...imagining it right now!

How disturbed Zoya is...she was about to write Asad's name instead of Ayaan...hope everything is sorted out soon.

I appreciate that every one else is trying so hard to get Asya together.

Ayra are finally are married.

zoya afterall had to regret her decision:)

CHAPTER 21

'BEFORE ITS TOO LATE'...NAME SE HI LAG RHA HAI SOMETHING BAD WAS ABOUT TO HAPPEN AND IT DID...YOU ARE NOT KILLING ASAD THAT IS TOH CONFIRMED! I KNOW IT:)


Ayra are juat true professionals man I thought they might be enjoying planning for some vacations but here they are to work!:)

Fawad im in love with his character already.

You know after reading Fawad and Zoya's conversation I felt that Zoya all along had been clear in herself with what she wanted.She just needed to voice her thoughts to someone and a little encouragement and support.Her fear had already been removed:) Great job there Mahi!

Asad really thought that Zoya had moved on in her life and she was happy because he was leaving...how painful it must have been for him.

Again that song sequence...how you sink the song with the situation at hand is something that I admire alot:)

Zoya had planned something special for Asad aww.

I liked the conflict in the end I mean the opposite thoughts of Asad and Zoya...beautifully written.Where Asad is thinking of leaving and Zoya is thinking of stopping him.

Alas but our Greek hero is shot now.

I guess this was needed to allow Zoya to break her last string of resistance and and again accept Asad wholeheartedly:)

Looking forward for the next chapter!

Love you loads Mahi:*

p.s forgive me for consolidating comments for both chapters here.