Chalo Ghar Chalein: AsYa OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: KulfiBai

With his eyes glued to the road, he replied, "no gear-change till we reach home. I don't want to take any more chances.

This line is so frickin' perfect! AAAH!

RES!

Originally posted by: me2you

Agar aap ache mood mein ho, toh hum bhi ache mood mein hain 😊

I have not seen the BTS, but I could totally visualize it because of your amazing writing skills 😊

yay..my Narges beta is here. Where is your other mommy?

Chalo shuru karte hain...

a resolute Asad walk away with Zoya (waiting for this scene, very besabri se)

silence was the best way to start that healing process (Yes, let them digest this horrible experience)

Only a person who had been in captive against their wishes could appreciate what freedom was (Wah, kya baat hai) 👏

No matter what happened, she would always be his priority (Yes, she should be the only thing that matters)

Khan Villa

"Kyunki wo dono communication mein believe karte hain." (Point to be noted...)

I really hope they take the communication in their relationship to the next level, after this track.

yes, if they can learn one thing from this track, then it's the importance of communication

"wo bechari nahin Ms Museebat-e-aazam-Bond-girl hai." (Wow, what a new creative name, Di!) 😃👍🏼

"museebat ki aadat si ho gayi hai ab. Life becomes too boring otherwise." (It was indeed boring without the museebat annoying her sher)

just like him (just like us) 😳

Aakhir wo ek insaan hai aur ek aurat bhi. Switch on ya off nahin kar sakte aise (Dilshaad ammi's wise and intelligent words)

Zoya's room

No, she was no longer a bride, but yes, she was married nevertheless (She needs to get rid of that tag, ASAP)

Asad's room

Mujh par aur meri zindagi par aapka poora haq hai (Beautiful)

You don't need any permission to come into my room (Hope this only goes for Zoya, warna agar sab log bina knock ke andar aayege toh phir...) 😛

galti hum sab se huyi thi Zoya. Aapse, mujhse, Ayaan se---aur haalat se (Let this be the worst mistake and the biggest lesson in your life)

Haalat badal gaye hain lekin hamari mohabbat nahin (Exactly...)

I will never let anyone break us apart- ever-I promise (Actions speak louder than words)

"main tho apni biwi se milne aaya hoon." (Kyun Ayaan, kyun?!)

"mujhey aisa behooda mazaak katai pasand nahin hai." (Same here!!!)

"I need to get curtains and put locks on these windows!" (Better late than never, right?)

walked over to Zoya's room (Aur phir...)

Dil khush kardi aapne, Di! I know, as a writer, you need the right motivation and inspiration to come with a story. I am glad, you found that back again 😊

Let me be very honest, is was the first time I had mixed feelings while reading your story. Lekin, that has nothing to do with you or your OS whatsoever! It is just that, humare aakhein taras gaye hain to see her back where she belongs to: KV, Dilshaad ammi and her Mr. Khan.

So reading your version of it, made me happy and a bit sad as well because we know nothing of this will happen in the show 😔 Gul madam, please consider Sangeeta Di for your CV team, aapka show ek dum phirse top mein aa jayega!

That end...too bad its an OS 😳

shukriya shukriya...let's stay optimistic and hope we will get a nice milan scene between Zoya and KV members after she returns home. I really want to see Zoya-Dilshaad interaction more than anyone else

Was I too harsh with my dialogue comments? If so, I am sorry! Perhaps, it has to do with the current track.

no...not at all. We have all been burnt many times with QH writers that ab hum chaach bhi phoonk phoonk kar peete hain😉

Thanks Di! 😃 Aap saaj mein great ho! Love ya Narges...😃

🤗

Originally posted by: PreetiASYArocks

It is amazing Sangeeta di...👏
Indeed everything won't be the same anymore, not for a long time...and AsYa, most importantly Zoya, are gonna realise that when they get back to KV...😭

Had tears in my eyes reading this!😭


I wish to see Dilshad-Zoya bonding too! I really miss Dilshad...😭

Originally posted by: kankabhor

You are the best best best..😳

RES..

UNRES:

It was so realistic.. Zoya's awkwardness, Asad's subtle anger towards Ayaan and same old childish Ayaan who is unaware of others feelings...Very well written..👏

I seriously hope CV's give us something like this and I am dying to watch their car journey back to home..

Loved it...

Originally posted by: vinita459

Can we please send this to QH writers. It would be so much fun if it can play out like this way. Amazing writing, and had fun reading it.

Originally posted by: Oldestfan

asad and Zoya said all the right things, but you let Daadi off too easy! 😕

I am planning a vicious post on Daadi for Diwali! Jaa jee le apni zindagi simply does not cut it!

he he...I guess my ff characters are always nicer than the characters on the show. I have a hard time writing about out and out evil or mean characters😆

How do you feel about the character assassination of Mr. And Mrs. Chipku!

What about them? Ayaan is crazy and Zoya has become crazy in SM...KV jaakar theek ho jaayegi. I have confidence in AsYa's love for each other

So Sangeeta, the marriage is going to follow them for a while, at least until the three month talaaq deadline! It will eventually get dissolved I suppose! But Nikhats issue will crop up again, I am sure. Looks like Imraan passed the test!

yeah, unfortunately it seems like yes...perhaps to prolong Ayaan-Zoya0Asad triangle

Karan said in the interview that we could say that it was the end of the suffering.

keeping fingers crossed...as long as asya are together and fight the world, I don't care

They are def...initely doing these scenes for the buy in of the real world shireens and badi bis, who think that marriage IS the piece of paper!

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

That was BEAUTIFUL...

What Asad said is true...about communication between them and about not letting a small mushkil stop them from walking with each other...😳

When Ayaan said that my heart stopped for a sec and then I wanted to beat the life out of him...STUPID kid...

Would LOVE to watch something like this in QH...