AsYa FF: Only in the darkness can you see the stars THREAD #1 - Page 22

Originally posted by: love_kash

so i was right!
asad is not aadil's biological father.but i surely did not expect tge little boy to know that.wonder what it is that asad took aadil's responsibility and a father's name.something tells me that it is not only because tanveer was his friend.
zoya and aadil are just too cute togerher.
cont soon.

Originally posted by: -SB-

Awesome update Simi di...<3<3<3

So Asad's not Aadil's real father?

OMG this story is getting damn interesting

thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: aashiqua

i think both adil and zoya r persons n same boat..they cn connect easily..but i wonder why he was told dat asad is nt his biological father..afterall he is too young to undrstand...i hope u make it clear later..and have nt i told u b4..u r an amazng writer..

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

OMG what an update...👏

The last line had my eyes popping out of their sockets n I actually read it twice...U definately know how to keep the reader hooked to the story...

I WANT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER NOW!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE IMMEDIATELY!!!! I SERIOUSLY
CANT WAIT FOR THE UPDATE I WANT IT NOW...

Thanks for the pm n please please please please update soon. Please pm me the next part.

Originally posted by: akaswan

I really like this udapte and this story so much secret 😃

So Aadil was adopt ? 😕

continue soon please 😃

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Asad is his adoptive father. i like it., i like it i like it

Originally posted by: Mayeesha2217

So Asad is not Aadil's real father!Interesting!!!I sooo loved Zoya and Aadil's interaction😊really cute!Please update soon and PM me if you can!

Originally posted by: NAVI55

👍🏼 A superb and sweet update...

I adored the way zoya and adil have bonded...I liked that adil told zoya that asad is not his real dad...This shows that he trust zoya👍🏼

So i was right in assuming asad is not adil's real dad but he is such a great dad no one will say otherwise...

I am now waiting for zoya's reaction...

You are simply one of the greatest writers on this forum and your stories evoke a whole host of emotions from me...I cannot help but get involved in your story😃

This is progressing at the perfect pace and the story is becoming even more interesting👍🏼

🤗

Originally posted by: DancingDiva.

Simi :D

Fab update, so Aadil, the poor thing also knows that Asad is not his father :(

Originally posted by: parthpathak31

loved Zoya and Aadil bonding😆

Liked your way of writing

waiting for the next update