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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Teaser for chapter 2:-



Totally engrossing

I am addicted to bunty and chintu now

When I had heard this concept...
I had not anticipated this

It is so amazing

So unique

So different



This teaser is so cute

I loved the bond AsYa share in your story

Perfect

*Mitwa... ishq pe zor nahi*
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Chapter 2:-

"Bunty! Change your clothes and come out!", he shouted.

Loved Asad's caring nature

"Why the hell are you behaving like a damn pregnant woman? Ek pregnant lady ke bhi utne mood swings nahi hote honge jitney tere hote hain Bunty! Stop fooling around with me!", barked Asad.

Asad's outburst... Surprising

"Damn you Chintu! It's my BIRTHDAY today! And you forgot!!!!", she shrieked.
"I forgot??? I had planned a surprise this evening and you have been just fooling around shrieking your lungs out at me, not bothered what I would feel! I have had enough of your mood swings Zoya!", he shouted and retreated to his room leaving a shocked Zoya behind.
Zoya plopped on the sofa and has a small mind talk cursing herself, "Allah miya! Ye maine kya kar diya? I shouted at Asad for this? He had planned a surprise! Shit shit shit!!! What did you do Zoya? You know na.. Asad can never forget your birthday! He might forget his own but not yours!"


Aah.. A small fight... Zoya drove Asad crazy

She pushed him onto the bed and sat on top of him.
"I'm sorry! Very sorry! Super sorry!", she said like a little child.
Asad smiled at her innocence and smiled. He said, "Pagal ladki!"
She fell on him and hugged him tight. "I love you!", she sqealed
He wrapped his arms around her, "I love you too baby!", he replied.


So cute this was

Suddenly Zoya felt something poking in her belly, her eyes shot up in shock. She rolled to the other side and fell on the bed. Asad realized what happened and got up immediately.
"What was that?", she asked nervously.
"Exactly what you think!", he replied.


Oyye hoyye... Abhi se yeh haal

"And what's my surprise?", she squealed.
"Wait till the evening! You'll get to know!", he winked as Zoya smiled.


Waiting

Want to know wat was my first reaction when I finished reading this part??

It was that's it

It is so short



This was amazing, superb, fantastic, terrific, awesome, fabulous and the list goes on

Perfect and Flawless update

I love Chintu and Bunty

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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Teaser for chapter 3:-

Now I get it

You really want to kill me



You are driving me crazy

This is fan-awe-tas-some-tic (i know it makes no sense)

I am so waiting for the update now

Chintu Bunty *in a dream world*

Listening to *Mitwa... Ishq Pe Zor Nahi*
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Chapter 3:-

Something is different...

I was sure that the teaser I had read had some different words

So I went back to teaser but it was not wat I had read

I was damn sure that something is fishy

so i compared the editing timings

and yah i had commented before you changed it

don't mind the change though but how come you didn't tell me 😲

and yah 100+ pages.. as if u don't know that Mahima is a regular reader of urs

comming to the update


i totally loved it

awesome work

brilliant it was

pizza cake... oyye hoyeee

fairy lights... drooling

so many kisses... i was counting them but lost track in middle

😆

so kisses for you too



my fav dialogues now

Asad entered the room with a box in hand. He put it aside on the bed and went over to the side table and lit a candle. He held Zoya's hand and guided her to the bed.

"OMG!!!!!!! Chintu... This is the best birthday gift... Pizza instead of cake and fairy lights all over my room! Oh.. I love you so much!", she squealed and threw her arms around his neck. He pulled apart.

She stuffed it into Asad's mouth and then he held her hand and guided the same piece to her mouth. The pizza was completely relished. She threw herself on him and hugged him tight as though he were her most priced possession. Well.. He was.. That's for sure!

"Don't worry Bunty.. I'll take what I want!", shouted Asad as he followed her out.


"Ye sab sirf tumhare birthday ka hi nahi.. Kal engagement ke liye bhi hai!", replied Nikhat with a wink.


Zoya rolled him to come on top of him and replied, "Oh no honey! I'll take what I want!", she winked.


"Hmmm", came her reply still kissing his neck. She gently sneaked her hand under his tshirt.

"Did I tell you not to?", she questioned looking at him and raised her brows.

She gently moved her hand on his shirt and started unbuttoning it. She bent down to his neck and showered kisses there and went down to his chest trailing wet kisses. Asad on the other hand was getting extremely restless coz Zoya had pinned him and over that she was arousing him to such an extent and he was not able to take lead.


He plunged his tongue into her mouth, the kiss becoming even more passionate with every passing moment.. Her nails were digging into his bare back and his hands slid under her tshirt caressing her bare waist.




luv u Mina Di

eagerly waiting for page 120+ (cause 100+ par teaser and 120+ par update) 😉


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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Teaser for chapter 4:-

GR8... NOW I NEED TO SPAM 50 PAGES 😆

OK... I KNOW I'LL GET HELP

BUT STILL

POOR ME

HB, BD, DTL and LIST GOES ON

IN THE SIGGY BELOW (DRACO IS YOU AND HARRY IS ME)


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Lets talk about the teaser now

Zoya sat in the backyard under the moonlit sky admiring her ring. She felt a kiss on her hair. She smiled, but then hid it.



"Bunty yaar! Tu baat baat pe gussa ho jaati hai! Kya hua ab?", asked Asad.



"Sorry baby! Very sorry! Ab to sagaai ho gayi hai.. Now I can't leave the house without your permission! Haina?", he asked nuzzling in her neck. She giggled at she felt his stubble brush her neck.



"Because from now, you are gonna sleep with me in mine!", he declared and put her down on his bed and got on top of her.



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TOTALLY LOVED THE TEASER

dieing for the update now

it was so cute

ASYAlicious

yes you have a dirty mind

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I LOVE YOU TO DEATH ❤️ 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Thread 2:-

I am not at all surprised to see Thread 2

You deserve it







HUGS AND KISSES FOR MY BIG SISTER

I LOVED THE SPECIAL SHOUT OUT FOR ME



UPDATE SOON

AND KEEP SCROLLING FOR MORE COMMENTS

Edited by --Mahima-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Some Chintu Bunty time











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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Chapter 4:-
Trying something different today!!

I haven't read the update yet

and will do it along with commenting

I'll read a part of it and then comment a bit!

Lets see how this turns out!

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This chapter is dedicated to Ayra (-HoneyBunch-) for a speedy recovery! Get well soon and come back! I'm missing you! 🤗

I missed Ayra too... Hope she recovers soon

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The house looked beautiful, decorated with long chains of fairy lights, and mirror strings lit all around with candles and colourful silk draperies hanging at the windows. Purple orchids filled the room giving it an ethereal look.




Totally loved the decoration!!

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Asad looked at the door of her room, hoping that Zoya would come out any moment.

Dilshad smiled and nudged him. "Looking for Zoya?" she asked, smirking.

Asad flushed and asked, "Isn't it time for the engagement to start ammi?"

"Patience Bhaijaan!", replied Najma as she laughed at her brother's impatience.

"I've waited 28 years.", Asad muttered under his breath. Dilshad and Najma burst out laughing along with Ayaan and Humeira.




Asad took away my heart here!! ❤️

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Asad smiled at her, his molten chocolate eyes melting with love for her. Zoya looked up, and catching the clear appreciation in his eyes, blushed seemly.

He held out his hand. Zoya placed her hand in his, smiling into his eyes.


Omg!! Wow!!

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Asad gently held her left hand in his and slid a beautiful diamond studded platinum ring on Zoya's finger. Zoya took a plain white gold band and placed it on Asad's finger.

Perfect choice!! My parents are in jewellery business so I know that it is perfect!!

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Zoya looked at the ring on Asad's finger, and said, smiling mischievously, "Now you are all mine Chintu!"

"I was always yours Bunty! Just that we made things official today!", replied Asad.

Zoya smiled and spoke, "Where will you run when I tease you now?"

Asad smiled into her eyes, and then whispered in her ear. "Who said I will want to run away from you Zoya Asad Khan?"

"I'm not yet Zoya Asad Khan! Our wedding date is not even decided!", she retorted with a laugh.

"I will get that done soon!", he winked.




It's getting better and better


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She sat in the backyard under the moonlit sky admiring her ring. She felt a kiss on her hair. She smiled, but then hid it.

Teaser scene!! hope it does not end there like you had said on WA!! You did say about extension but let me read and see

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Asad smiled and broke apart. He then pulled himself onto the pillow and lay down, then pulled Zoya onto his chest. She lay on him with her head on his broad chest and his arms wrapped around her shoulder pulling her more into him.



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After an hour, Zoya woke up and found herself snuggled into Asad. She gently lifted herself without disturbing him. She smiled and caressed his face.

She dropped a kiss on his forehead, then eyes.. She closed onto his lips. Before she could touch them, Asad pinned her down on the bed.


Glad you extended it!!

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She blushed as he caressed her cheek with his thumb. He dropped a kiss in the crook of her neck. She gasped as she felt his lips against her skin. She held onto his shoulder. He trailed kisses along her throat and neck line further down to her cleavage. He nuzzled into her neck and closed his eyes..

Zoya's fingers ran through his hair, ruffling through it after which he drifted off to sleep soon followed by Zoya.

Never did they know that a new day always comes up with a new twist!


Twsit?? Oh Gosh!!

hope its a gud one

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Teaser would be posted on Page 38+ 😉

As I am editing I can see that page 36 has already been reached 😉



Don't know how crappy this comment is

BUT I LOVE YOU LOADS
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Teaser for chapter 5:-


"Uhhh...", she thought when suddenly a heavy voice spoke, "She is my Fiance! Back off!"

"How dare anyone asks you for a dance?", barked Asad.

finally the jealously track

plzzz give a long one yaar

especially Asad's one... the show didn't give a proper one


can you update today plzzz

pretty plzz

*battling eyelashes*

AND NOW LISTENING TO "MITWA ISHQ PE ZOR NAHI"

update soon plzz cause my badtameez dil maan nahi raha hai
Edited by --Mahima-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Chapter 5:-
Finally post ho gaya update

*phew*



Dilshad laughed out and said, "I know you and Zoya slept in the same room yesterday. I heard Zoya tell you that you should tell me about this!"

"YOU KNOW???", he shrieked.

"Yes, I do!", replied Dilshad.

"And you don't have a problem?", asked Asad as Zoya looked baffled.

"Ummm.. No I don't! That's because I have faith in both of you and I know you both would stay in your limits.", informed Dilshad.


It was superb... totally loved Dilshad here... ❤️

They way Asad blushed and his sisters reacted was so cute

Zoya was amazing here


"Anyways, we are staying together!", winked Asad.

"BHAIJAAAN!!!", warned Nikhat and Najma in unison.

"You are staying together this week! Next week, the wedding functions will start so Zoya would go back to her room!", said Dilshad with a grin.


Poor Asad... but I am sure he will manage... so looking forward to this 😉


Asad and Zoya entered the party. All eyes were on them. The guys ogled at Zoya and the girls ogled at Asad. Zoya wore an indigo saree with a black blouse and Asad wore a black suit, white shirt with a thin black tie.

Asad & Zoya's dress: http://i5.minus.com/ib1EfjNlCmSy1Z.jpg

I totally loved the dress in the movie and of course the song is 'BADTAMEEZ DIL'

it is one of my fav sarees and I had already imagined Zoya in it


Asad held onto Zoya by her waist possessively as they walked into the party hall. They met a couple of college friends. They walked to Zaroon who stood along with his wife.




"Happy Birthday Roon!!!!", she squealed and threw her arms around him. Zaroon hugged her back.

"Thanks Zee! You look gorgeous in this saree!", complemented Zaroon.

"Thanks Roon! You look dashing too! You really look awesome in white shirts! Did I ever tell you that?", she asked with a wink.

"Yes! I remember you telling me that back in college!", replied Zaroon.

Asad clenched his fists in irritation on the closeness of Zaroon and Zoya.

"Zee! This is my wife Kashaf! And Kashaf, this is my.. very old girlfriend!", said Zaroon with a laugh. Zoya laughed back.

"Hey Kashaf! Nothing like that haan.. Me and Zaroon are friends! Just that I had a tiny winy crush on him back then!", she giggled. Kashaf laughed.




Zoya having a crush on Zaroon.. come to think about it Zaroon will look great with Zoya 😉

Jealous Asad is my fav


"Seems like someone is feeling left out!", taunted Zaroon.

"Not at all!", replied Asad.

"Are you sure?", asked Zaroon with a smirk.

"I don't need to be! Zoya is all mine!", replied Asad with a smile of victory as he snaked his arms around her bare waist.

"Zee.. You've got a possessive boyfriend in Asad.. I see..", said Zaroon with a wink.

"Correction buddy.. It's fiance!", said Asad with a grin.



yeh hui na baat Asad miyah 👏


"May I have a dance with the gorgeous lady?", he asked.

"Uhhh...", she thought when suddenly a heavy voice spoke, "She is my Fiance! Back off!"

Asad came close to Zoya and tugged on her waist and pulled her close to him. He stared down at the guy as he rolled his eyes at the couple and walked away.

"Asad! What was that?", asked Zoya baffled.

"How dare anyone asks you for a dance?", barked Asad.




I loved this scene in the teaser like I had said 😊


Zoya come in front of him and pecks on his lips while his eyes are closed.

"May I have the pleasure to dance with my fiance?", asked Zoya.

"It would be my pleasure!", replied Asad as she guided her to the dance floor.


Huge hug for you for doing this 🤗




Asad caressed her cheeks and leaned in to bridge the distance between their lips. Their lips brushed against each other. Zoya parted her lips in anticipation and Asad deepened the kiss. The kiss soon turned into a passionate one with both of them lost in the moment.


This was flawless and so picture perfect... I love this story a lot... So cute and so simple... A perfect love story... So love your style of writing


Btw the song and its description was amazing


Just picture perfect


and I love this song


NOW LISTENING TO "MITWA... ISHQ PE ZOR NAHI"

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