FAASLE IV: END/EPILOGUE Pg 130 Nov 30 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
Sorry for late comment di. Very nice update. I love it. Wonder who is standing with a gun infront of asad. Hope nothing wrong going to happen. Thanks for pm. Update soon.
Congrats for new thread 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Congrats for the new thread.
I loved " ek sher ko uski sherni hi bacha sakti hai"
But I'm not sure that its Ayaan at the door. It could be the Indian navy as they would have found Asad 's graduation clip in Rashid computer.
Eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: me2you

Ladies and gentle ducks,

Dear readers,
Bhai log (if there are any) and behen log,

With much pleasure and enthusiasm, I would like to announce the 4th thread of 'Faasle'.
Jaise ab sab log jaante hain, this story is very much liked and loved among all of us, so without further a due; let's enjoy the next chapter.
On behalf of all your loyal readers, a very big congratulations to you Sangeeta Di for this new thread😃 🤪👏

Hi Narges...let me give the credit to you all this time. All your long waala comments have helped us get here😃

Let's get serious now...

Asad's house
"Kya baat hai, bahut dino baad razor ki yaad kaise aa gayi?" (I liked the way his ammi teases him)

"Haan, main chaahti hoon tum dono ki aaj sagai kar doon." (Aur mein chaahti hoon ke in dono ki nikaah jald se jald ho)

I am glad you got rid of that beard too (Bye bye stubble) 😭

Very cute scene with mother and son. Only a mother can read the heart of her child.
That razor wala comment from Dilshaad ammi was really one of the most cutest 😊 Her character is one of the best on-screen mothers.

yes, i have always loved dilshaad but lately, thew writers haven't been fair to her esp the way she has abandoned zoya

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I know I might be a rookie in the field of love but this is my profession (Rookie??? Hmm...let's see whether he indeed is a rookie or not...suhag raat pe sab pata chal jayega) 😆

he he...yes, SR par pata chalega😆 Looks like i need to ff the story to SR now. Aap log itne betaab ho rahe ho

he had played a two faced game with Rashid and Razia (Imran se aur kya expect karti thi)

Agar hum pakde gaye tho saath pakde jaayenge, maare jaayenge tho bhi saath maare jaayenge (If this is not true and pure love, then what is it...?)

ek sher ko sirf sherni hi bacha sakti hai (Zoya, the bravest!)

It's our time now Zoya. We have suffered for a long time. (True...they deserve to live and make special moments in their life)

This part was full of suspense. The way from Ayaan's office to Rashid's office was very well described and written 👏 Mr. Khan ka kaam toh ho gaya and thank God they did not get caught (well at least not here) but I am afraid of one thing: the trust that Ayaan has on Zoya.
Trust is a very fragile thing which can be broken very easily. Unknowingly, she has broken his trust and what the consequences of that will be, is something we will have to wait for.
So Imran killed himself...reminded me of the scene in Jodhaa Akbar where the guy, who attacks Akbar with an arrow, poisons himself and dies.

yes, just when ayaan trusting someone more than himself😕

Evening
Asad, dressed in a black suit (Oh my...Mr. Khan in black, makes me... ☺️)

Is he real or just a figment of your imagination? (Exactly Di, when will we get to meet Mr. Wahi)

Lekin bhaijaan itna intezaar nahin karenge (Even I cannot wait that long)

Apno ki nazar sab se pehle lagti hai (Very true) 👍🏼

The engagement! Sweet, cute and romantic just like it was in the show. I tried to open the link, but could not watch the video due to copyright reasons or so 😕

hmm...i guess it's only available in the US😕


Anyways, I got the picture. Who can forget the AsYa engagement; Mr. Khan in handsome black and Zoya in hot red. That feeling came back and I enjoyed it very much.
Stubble gone means engagement and caste gone means nikaah 😉

Sab theek thak chal raha tha...when all of a sudden...
What a cliffhanger Di!!! 😲 Did not expect them to get caught like this aur woh bhi on their engagement day. I am sure its Ayaan who saw them together at the parking lot and now he has come to her house. Does this mean a face-off between AsYa and Ayaan? I am sure, he will be furious at Zoya as well. I guess lots of drama is coming up in the next chapter...

yes...drama galore😆

A huge thank you Di! 😃 I am glad they got finally engaged but the biggest problem still needs to be solved: Razia, Rashid and Ayaan. Looking forward to the next.

yes, the climax is near for sure


Very very good update; drama, suspense and action. That is what I like the most about you stories, it has an element of all the ingredients 👏

try to balance all the masalas because even i get bored writing just one kind of track

Did my flying hug reach you? 😆🤗 it did😃



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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
amazing update ... cant wait for more ... plzzz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Congratulation for 4th thread...😊
Awsome update... 😊
waiting for nxt part so update soon... 😊
Pm me when u update nxt part... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
And i finally could catch up with the FF :D
Brilliant ff di! Love the story line and the complete plot! I started in the morning and i just couldnt stop myself at one part! Every update had something that made me wanna read what happens next! And i suddenly feel that i should have let you finish your ff first and then read coz with your current cliffhanger is making me more curious and nervous abt what happens next!

Asad and Zoya's love for each other is beautiful! The way they understand each other is soo heart warming!

I have a feeling this guy at the door is Ayaan and now he'll know Asad is back WOOW! I am soo excited YAYY!

Continue sooon! <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Damn, I lost my long post. Have to type again. 😒
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: webuser7

Damn, I lost my long post. Have to type again. 😒


Don't worry RK...make a long comment for next update. We all have better things to do in life than write a duplicate post. 😃

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