AsYa SS ~ Vaada ~ Updated on PG 116 ~ 04/08

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

interesting zoya's pov...

continue soon..

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

y u ended it here ...plzzz continue soon ...n plzzz a happy ending plzzz...
thnx for d pm ...

Edited by sona_naksh - 11 years ago

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Maheerah

@maheerah_khan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

CLIFFHANGER!!!!!😡

Awww,its such an adorable story...although its not all the cutesy ditsy girly girl thing but still at the

same time its sooo intense...Zoya's feeling; the feeling of being forced, the feeling of being betrayed

by your loved ones(not actually betrayed but still to some extent), the feeling of lonliness, the the

feeling that some day she is going to get her share of happiness she will be given justice...loved it...

Continue sooon😳

Title Suggestions:

-Betrayal

-Left alone

-Valley of fear, The Dark Past

-Chaar diwaari main bund(closed between four walls where there is no way to come out)

-Locked hearts

-Love eternally

(I have an idea about how crappy they are but still felt like using my pea sized brain...)

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chichi220

@chichi220

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

This was really nice pls update soon who was there at the door

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Nisha

@nisha150

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

nice one..plzz end it on happy note...!!
continue soon

and even waiting for ur FF update

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Hey tis is amazing...
Luv it...
Felt all the emotion which is display...
Thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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Tanya

@OceanicHeart.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

This is awesome

But I dont like cliff hangers 😆

You got to update soon now !

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malini

@malini96

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

loved it

do continue soon

and thanks for the pm

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Archana

@mysticlover

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

What had happened just one month before the date of ending the sham that Zoya left without telling n abandoning every hopes of going back to KV?
Is the man on the door that Maulavi who wanted to forcefully solemnise Ayaan n Zoya's wedding?
It can't be Asad, right?

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

hey,

the start is intriguing. So the day of freedom has arrived for the two couples, but looks like Zoe doesn't want to go back to khan house. hmm, is Asad at the door?

well please update this soon.

have a blast at your vacations.

Love.