AsYa SS ~ Vaada ~ Updated on PG 116 ~ 04/08 - Page 4

Loved it. As with everything else u pen to paper. Look forward to ur next update

OMG

Awesome please continue soon 😊

Originally posted by: goingreen

LOOKS SO GOOD!! Please write the next part soon (:

Already written haha. Just waiting to post it 😆

Originally posted by: Maheerah

CLIFFHANGER!!!!!😡

Awww,its such an adorable story...although its not all the cutesy ditsy girly girl thing but still at the

same time its sooo intense...Zoya's feeling; the feeling of being forced, the feeling of being betrayed

by your loved ones(not actually betrayed but still to some extent), the feeling of lonliness, the the

feeling that some day she is going to get her share of happiness she will be given justice...loved it...

Continue sooon😳

Title Suggestions:

-Betrayal

-Left alone

-Valley of fear, The Dark Past

-Chaar diwaari main bund(closed between four walls where there is no way to come out)

-Locked hearts

-Love eternally

(I have an idea about how crappy they are but still felt like using my pea sized brain...)

😆

You're new I see so you'll have to get used my cliffhanger's love 🤣

Thank you so much! Your comment really made me smile :)

And as for the title, yours aren't bad at all! But actually gave me an idea for one, based on one of yours 😃

Hello people!

Originally posted by: mochhug

NOTE

Hello people!

So thanks to Maheerah's suggestions! I have a title 😃

Now the next part has already been written. But because I have to still update Meri Jasbhaat, I'll only post the second part if I get 100 likes and 100 comments 😉

So get cracking guys!

-Monica <3

P.S. Yes, I'm evil. 🤣

Originally posted by: mochhug

😆

You're new I see so you'll have to get used my cliffhanger's love 🤣

Thank you so much! Your comment really made me smile :)

And as for the title, yours aren't bad at all! But actually gave me an idea for one, based on one of yours 😃

it looks amazing! please continue soon!

Originally posted by: Maheerah

Blushing hard right now...😳...thankyou for praising...make sure you dont get me used to your cliffhangers...post soon...your comment made me blush like an idiot and my brother was like whats wrong with you????