AsYa SS ~ Vaada ~ Updated on PG 116 ~ 04/08

First Previous

Page

Frequent Posters

Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#741

Originally posted by: Shadowblue20
Just chill...i just made a guess.in show zoya some how was understanding the situation thats all ...but I should say u r a good writer👏👏👏

Sorry it's just this particular track made my blood boil.

I honestly never agreed with the whole thing. Not even Zoya being understanding. Particularly because of the way Asad took her to the Siddiqui Mansion. He didn't even ask her, just dragged her there, and left her. Forced her to sign a Nikaanama without trying to find another way to fix the problem. It was wrong. I just feel very strongly about it. I don't think I can really agree with what the writers did here.

Thanks for the compliment 😳 I just tend to get a little intense over things that make me feel strongly lol

Quote

Tanzia Scott

@latanzia

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#742

Nice to see the pain of both Asad and zoya, love this story

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#743

Mona sachi main ekdum apt title tha updt ka Krodh

Ayaan get a well deserved slap & experienced some Krodh😆

BDW I m a hardcore Asya shipper but wid d way this story is being penned I don't mind Zoya not forgiving these 2 Bro's infact I think that would b right 2 seeing d extent of Zoya's hurt here

Mona u r doing excellent in showing Zoya's side of turmoil & misery she bared in that low life house where only selfish ppl stayed who thought 4 Nikhat but not 4 Zoya & Humi

Keep up d good work & Pms coming😳

Quote

Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#744

Originally posted by: jas91
Mona sachi main ekdum apt title tha updt ka Krodh

Ayaan get a well deserved slap & experienced some Krodh😆

BDW I m a hardcore Asya shipper but wid d way this story is being penned I don't mind Zoya not forgiving these 2 Bro's infact I think that would b right 2 seeing d extent of Zoya's hurt here

Mona u r doing excellent in showing Zoya's side of turmoil & misery she bared in that low life house where only selfish ppl stayed who thought 4 Nikhat but not 4 Zoya & Humi

Keep up d good work & Pms coming😳

Thanks hun! For the long comment and for the compliment 😳❤️

Quote

rajsmi

@rajsmi

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#745

Nice update,... felt sad for Zoya and what she went through. You really portrayed her emotions at that time really well!

Quote

JASLEEN

@Jasleenkaur01

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#746

Finally zoya let out her pain..

N u have written it beautifully...

Zoya's pain is too much...

I hope some Happy time come in her life soon..

Thanks for the pm

Quote

Daljit Dhami

@Always_asya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#747

Sad but beautiful
hey please tell me this story going happy ending or not bcs i hate sad ending

Quote

Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#748

Originally posted by: allwaysasya
Sad but beautiful
hey please tell me this story going happy ending or not bcs i hate sad ending

I'm honestly not sure. It won't be a cruel ending, that much I can promise. But I can't promise if it'll be happy. Just going where the story is taking me.

Thanks for reading 😳