Asya SS: Muqaddar Updated Epilogue - Page 19

Created

Last reply

Replies

267

Views

57.9k

Users

60

Likes

826

Frequent Posters

Gulaabo thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful...u are back with a bang!!!!
I love u...
The update was fantastic...asad-simran duo doing a great job...but at last zoya misunderstood asad...so sad!!,
Poor asad...kaash simran usse bacha le!!
Continue soon...
Gulaabo thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
Too good!!!
I'm happy that finally asya are on the way to become one!!!
But only two chapters...😔
Continue soon
-Anitha- thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
So cute & lovely part dear friend...
Super cute asya..
Thanks for the pm...
-Anitha- thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
VindhyaMounika thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

Wonderful...u are back with a bang!!!!

I love u...
The update was fantastic...asad-simran duo doing a great job...but at last zoya misunderstood asad...so sad!!,
Poor asad...kaash simran usse bacha le!!
Continue soon...


everything will be fine... 😊😊
VindhyaMounika thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Thank u so much...😊😊
VindhyaMounika thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Part 9:

Zoya broke the hug in embarrassment... She was angry on him and when did that turn into angry on her... She turned to leave...

Asad - waapass chalo Zoya...

Zoya stopped hearing Asad... She took deep breathe with closed eyes rejecting to see truth that Asad is here to take her back to Bhopal...

Zoya - nahi... mein waapass nahi jarahi hoon...

Asad - Aapne kaha aap mujhe taqleef mein nahi dekh sakte hai...

Zoya - mein ek pal ke liye aapki diyi hui taqleef ko bhulgayi thi...

Asad - Aap yeh sabb kyun kar rahe hai...??? Sach toh yeh hai ki aap mujhse abb bhi mohobbat karte hai aur mere saath waapass jana chahte hai...

Zoya - Yeh sabb jhoot hai...

Asad - mere taraf dekhe boliye...

Zoya didn't turn as she has no courage to say this lie which is actually the truth...

Asad - Aap nahi bol payenge...

Zoya took a step front to leave but stopped to hear Asad's last sentence...

Asad - yeh bhi sun ke jayiye... jab tak aap yeh maan na leti ki aap mujhse abhi mohobbat karte hai, mein yaha se hilunga bhi nahi...

*********************************************

Inside House: 9PM:

Zoya - Simran tu meri madatt karegi...???

Simran - Ha bata...

Zoya - Tu unko yeh shawl, sweater aur khana deke aajayegi...

Zoya kept shawl, sweater and tray of food in her hand...

Simran (Teasing) -kinko...????

Zoya - Mr. Khan ko... abb pata chal gaya na, leke de aao...

Simran - Mein kyun doon... Tum jaa kar deao...

Zoya - Please Simran...

Simran - Teekhe... But aakhri baar... Agle baar kud karlena..tumhari Mr. Khan ki kaam...

Simran said, walking away from there...

Zoya (Scream) - Woh mere nahi hai...

**********************************************

After few minutes Simran entered with sweater, shawl and food in her hand... Zoya ran to her...

Zoya - Tum yeh waapass leke kyun aagayi...????

Simran -tum aur tumhari woh Mr. Khan dono ek jaise hai... Woh waha than ke bte hai... Jab tak tum nahi manaogi woh khana nahi khayenge... sweater aur shawl bhi waapass bej diya hai...

Zoya - Kya...??? Mr. Khan pagal hogaye... Mein kuch nahi mane ne waali hoon... Unse kaho ki woh tandh mein jaaye ya baadh mein mujhe koi farak nahi padta hai...

Zoya ran to her room after completing her part, without listening to Simran...

********************************************

Zoya's Room:

Zoya with no shawl around her stood on the freezing balcony floor bare foot... She rubbed her palm on her arms with crossed arms... Her soft stare fell on Asad sitting before bon-fire in freezing cold... She don't want to feel warm with Asad freezing... Her teary eyes didn't move even for a second from Asad... She saw him sneezing and this is enough for that lovable soul to crack... Zoya ran downstairs to garden...

*******************************************

Garden:

Asad stood up seeing Zoya infornt of him...

Zoya - Andar chaliye...

Asad - Mein already bata chukka hoon... jab tak aap manenge nahi ki abb bhi aap mujhse mohobbat karte hai, mein andar nahi chalunga...

Zoya - Aap samjhte kyun nahi hai..aap bimaar padd jayenge...

Asad - Agar tumhe mohobbat nahi hai toh, mera fikar kyun hai...???

Zoya (firmly) - Nahi hai mohobbat aapse... Nahi hai fikar aapka...

Asad - Sach mein Miss. Farooqi...??? Aapko mujhse mohobbat nahi hai toh aap mere dard ko sehne ke liye bina shawl ki, bina chappal ki balcony mein khade kyun hue te... Agar aapko mera fikar nahi hai toh itne raat ko iss thand mein bahar baagh kar kyun aaye hai...??? Jawab dijiye...??!!!

Zoya stood numb... She got answer but don't want to answer... She turned to leave but couldn't leave him.. He is sneezing and coughing... She closed her eyes and turned...

Zoya - Ha Mr. Khan, mein aapse abb bhi mohobbat karti hoon... but iska matlab yeh nahi hai ki mein aapke saath waapaass jaa rahi hoon... Abb aap chup chaap andar chaliye... bina kuch bole...

Asad raised his hand to say something but Zoya interrupted...

Zoya - mein ne kaha na chup chaap...

Asad nodded...

******************************************

Dining Table:

Zoya placed everything in place and served him food... Before Asad could ask anything Zoya served that... Zoya didn't give Asad a chance to spell a word... Asad silently had his dinner... Zoya left to room after Asad's dinner...

Asad (To himself) - Abb jitna chahe ignore karo, aapko toh mere saath waapass jana hi padega...

**********************************************

Morning: Simran's House:

Asad and Zoya entered living room sneezing... They looked at eachother when another sneeze made there way... Simran entered smiling at them...

Simran - Kya baat hai...??? Dono ek hi baar sneeze kar rahe hai... Actually kaha jaata hai ki jin logon ke hi time pe kuch hota hai toh, who dono humesha saath hote hai...

Asad - Aapko bhi pata chal gaya hai, par jinhe samjhne hai woh samajh nahi rahi hai...

*******************************************

Office: Zoya's Cabin:

As Zoya entered cabin, she saw a auromatic coffee cup on her table with white vapours streaming up in air... She reached her table and picked up note beside it...

Note:

Mujhe coffee ka bahot zaroorat tha... Mein ne socha aapko bhi hogi, issi liye yeh aap ke liye...

Aapka Mr. Khan..

Zoya picked coffee mug in her hand caressing it with twinkling eyes... Simran disturbed her from lost moment...

Simran (Surprise) - Teri haath mein milky coffee... yeh chamatkaar kaise hogaya...

Zoya didn't answer but smiled... Zoya remembered saying Zindagi ki kadvahat kea age yeh black bitter coffee kuch bhi nahi' But do this change in coffee is impling her life...

**********************************************

Canteen:

Zoya sat on her own corner seat with coffee...

Zoya - Mein Mr. Khan ko yaha se kaise bhagau... yeh toh jaane ke liye taiyaar hi nahi hai...

Asad came there and sat before her with his cup of coffee...

Asad - Kya soch rahe hai aap...??? Mujhe yaha se bhagane ka plan...??? Aap time waste matt kijiye, kyun ki aapke bina mein yaha se nahi jaunga...

Zoya got up from her seat and walked from there, when she started to leave Asad held her hand... She turned with a rage...

Zoya - Chodiye mere haath...

Zoya's high pitched voice startled employees around...

Zoya - Kyun kar rahe hai aap yeh sabb...??? Mujhe waapass lejane ke liye... Sochiyega matt Mr. Khan, kyun ki mein waapass nahi jaa rahi hoon matlab nahi jaa rahi hoon... Aap mujhe waapass kyun lejane chahte hai, mujhe aur andar se thodne ke liye...??? Iss baar mein aapko yeh chance nahi dene waali hoon...

Asad - Zoya...

Zoya - Aap Kuch matt boliye... Aap toh kabhi meri layak hi nahi te Mr. Khan... Mein aapke saath nahi rehsakti... SAMJHE AAP... Agar aap mujhe kush dekhna chate hai toh chale jayiye yaha se mujhse dur...

Asad - Zoya, yeh sabb tum gusse mein keh rahi ho...

Zoya - Gusse mein nahi, soch samajh ke keh rahi hoon... Mujhse zindagi ki sabse badi galti hogayi hai aapse pyaar karke... Ek aisi galti mein kabhi nahi sudaar sakti... Agar aap mujhe zinda aur kush dekhna chahte hai, toh please yaha se chale jayiye...

Zoya walked away from there without turning back leaving Asad distraught...

*******************************************

Washroom:

Zoya broke down with no one around... Tears streamed down with no way to stop...

Zoya - Mujhe maaf kar diiye mr. Khan... mein aapko hurt nahi karna chahti hoon.. Par aapke liye, mere liye, sabke liye yahi sahi hai... Humare MUQADDAR mein adhoori pan likha hua hai...

******************************************

Thanks for reading... Please do share your views...

Edited by VindhyaMounika - 11 years ago
Niyati_T thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
Muqaddar bhi do pyaar karne walon ko dur nahi kar sakta saath toh unhe aana hi hai 😉
Aishdegreat thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
very nice update. zoya accepted that she still loves him sooo nice...please bring them together soon
Ish_Speaks thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
u are great
thank u for update

pls dont let asad go

make him get zoya along with her

loved updATE

Thanks for PM

bye...



😊

Related Topics

Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: Coloursoflove · 2 years ago

*New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor

Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor Asad Ahmed Khan is the prodigal son. All the tabloids say so. Coming from an affluent family in Bhopal, he's done...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse · 1 years ago

[NOCOPY] Hello everyone! Happy to be here. I was searching for an opportunity to be here with all of you as a member after a long time as writer...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: ExoticDisaster · 7 months ago

Writer - ExoticDisaster | Graphicer - Oh_nakhrewaali | Theme - Bag Unfolding Yesterday Zoya coughed, pulling the scarf higher over her nose and...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69 · 7 months ago

AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts.

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's day contest - A Bag full of love. cover : oh_nakhrewaali | writer : missFiesty_69 |...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69 · 7 months ago

AsYa OS - Love, Lies and a Spilled Latte

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's Day contest - A bag full of love . cover : ExoticDisaster aka Shiri | writer :...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".