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Poor Zoya she really hurt but I hope she 4gives Asad
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Part 8:

Asad's Cabin:

Zoya stopped at the entrance seeing Simran in his cabin... There is nothing new in it but surprisingly it is not Project discussion, it is personal discussion about Zoya and Asad...

Simran - Aap ne yeh kya kiya... mein jiss carpenter ko nikalna chahti thi, aap usse paisa diya aur aap usse abb bhi kaam pe rakhna chahte hai...

Asad - unhone jaane anjana mein mera madatt kiya hai... Miss. Farooqi ne mujhe 3 saal baad, milne ke pehli baar Mr. Khan kehke bhulayi thi...

This sentence cleared Zoya that Asad didn't plan anything... Zoya wanted to slap herself for misunderstanding him...

Asad - Mein ne kitne saal baad unki chehre pe mere liye fikar dekha tha... mere liyeunke chehre pe shikanj dekha tha... Mein aaj bahot kushhoon... Woh aaj bhi mujhse utna hi pyaar karte hai, jaise pehle karte te...

Zoya left from there with wet eyes after hearing Asad...

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Office caftria:

Zoya sat on her regular corner with black coffee thinking about Asad...

Zoya - Mein kya karoon...???Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aarahi hai...??

Mind - Mein Mr. Khan ke pass waapass nahi jaa sakti hoon...

Heart - Mein kyun nahi jaa sakti hoon...???

Mind - ussne tumhare saath itna galat kiya hai...

Heart - Woh sirf unka galat faimi tha...

Mind - galat faimi wahi hota hai, jaha bharosa nahi hota hai... Aur tumhara decision ka kya hua...??? Tumne decide kiya tha tum unke life mein waapass nahi jaoge, kyun ki tum nahi chati ho ki woh kisi ka life mein dusra banker rahe...

Heart has no answer... Mind won this war which pushed away her love in the name of love... That love which sacrificed love in the name of presenting future happiness...

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Evening: Simran and Zoya's House:

Zoya - Ramu kaka...!!!

There is no response from servant...

Zoya - Jyothi...!!!!

Other female servant also didn't respond...

Zoya - Kaha hai sabb...?? Kabse bell baj raha hai...

Zoya got up to open door... She ran to open because it is ringing from long time and someone is waiting out... As she opened the door, she is uttered shocked to see Asad and Simran out there with Asad's luggage...

Zoya - Yeh sabb...???!!!

Simran - Aaj se Asad humare saath rahenge...

Asad - Miss. Farooqi aap zaraa side denge mujhe andar jana hai...

Zoya didn't move who stood still in shock... Asad made his move inside with little space left...

Zoya - Aap yaha nahi reh sakte hai...

Asad - Yeh kis ka ghar hai...???

Zoya - Simran ka...!!!

Asad - Toh aap kaise decide kar sakte hai...

Zoya - Simran...!!!

Simran - I am sorry yaar, mein ne inhe promise kiya ki mein inhe ghar mein rehne dungi...

Zoya - Ok fine... Mein inke saath iss ghar mein nahi rahungi...

Zoya left from there...

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Out side: Garden:

Zoya - Samjhte kya hai apne aapko...!! Mujhe pata hai, yeh sabb Mr. Khan jaan pooch kar rahe hai... Mein inke jaal mein nahi aane wali hoon...

Simran and Asad came there... Simran went and sat beside her...

Simran - Yeh kya bachpana hai Zoya... Anadar chalo... 7 bajgaya hai aur tand bhi bad rahi hai...

Zoya - Kuch bhi hojaye... Agar Mr. Khan rahenge toh mein uss ghar mein nahi rahungi...

Asad - Accha Mr. Khan'... Kya baat hai Miss. Farooqi aapko mera naam yaad hai...

Zoya glared at him and Simran held her head...

Simran - Zoya, Asad humara mehmaan hai... hum inhe ghar se bahar kaise inkaal sakte hai...

Zoya - Teekhe... toh yeh ghar woh rahenge aur mein yaha...

Asad - Teekhe Miss. Farooqi aapko raste pe sona ka mannhai toh hum kuch nahi kar sakte hai...

Asad left from there...

Zoya - Dekha... inhe meri koi kadar nahi hai... yeh kabhi nahi sudrenge...

Simran - Tum andar chal rahi hai ya nahi...??

Zoya - Nahi...

Simran - Teekhe... Mujhe bahot bhook lag rahi hai, mein jaa rahi hoon... Andar aana hai toh ajana...

Simran also left from there...

Zoya - Yeh kaisi dost hai...??? Mujhe chod ke chali gayi.. Inn teen saalo ki yahi dosti thi...

Zoya made all type of irritated faces she can make...

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Simran - Aapko kya lagta hai... Zoya raat bhar baha rahegi...???

Asad - Agar Miss. Farooqi kuch thaan leti hai toh who kar ke rehti hai...

Simran - Matlab yeh raat bhar rahegi...!!!

Asad - Nahi... Bahar itna thand hai... Bimaar pad jayenge... Bhook lagegi toh kudd andar aajayegi... Kyun ki kitna bhi thaan le, Pizza dikhegi toh reh nahi payenge...

Simran - Pizza...???!!!

Asad - ha mein ne Pizza order kiya hai...

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Zoya strained her eyes to check wether anyone is coming out of house, but no one came out...

Zoya - Koi nahi aaraha hai Zoya... Giraffee ki tarah gardaan lamba karke dekhne ki zaroorat nahi hai...

Zoya banged her wrist in disappointment... She rubbed her shoulder with increasing cold breeze... She saw a red Pizza bike stopped at the entrance and a Pizza boy with two Pizza boxes stood before door to deliver t to customer...

Zoya - Pizza...!!!

Asad came out, took delivery and paid him... He looked at her, smiled and left in...

Zoya - Mr. Khan Pizza khana kab se shuru kar diya...!!!

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Simran and zoya stood near window, which is on Garden side...

Simran - Aap khana nahi kayenge...???

Asad - Miss. Farooqi ne nahi kaya...

Simran - Par...

Simran stopped seeing Zoya nearing window... Zoya hid to hear Asad... Asad didn't see her so Simran informed him...

Simran (Whispered) - Asad, Zoya aayi hai...

Asad for teasing her changed the conversation...

Asad - Jyothi ne khana bahot accha banaya...

Simran - Khana...????

Asad (Stressed) - Khana...!!!

Simran - ha... khana..bahot tasty tha aur Pizza bhi... Pizza na Zoya ko bahot pasand hai...

Asad - Miss. Farooqi ko sirf bekaar cheese pasan aati hai... Simran ji aap Miss. Farooqi ke saath kaise rehte hai... Oh god aapko headache nahi hota hai...

Hearing this Zoya made a o' shaped expression... Simran smirked understanding that Asad is trying to tease Zoya...

Simran - Aisa kuch nahi hai... Zoya bahot sweet hai...

Zoya smiled hearing this...

Asad - Sweet...??!!! Miss. Farooqi teekhi mirchi ki tarah hai... Bahot clumsy ladki hai... Nautanki mein toh first hai... Tameez aur tehzeeb ki spelling bhi nahi aati hai... Kudki marzi ke age kuch nahi dikhayi deta hai... Jaha woh hai waha pareshani ki invitation ki zaroorat nahi... Musibat toh saas ki tarah ek pal bhi unki peeche kare bina rukhta nahi...

Zoya (To herself) - So mean Mr. Khan...

Zoya left from there... Asad ignorant of this continued to complain...

Simran - Abhi bass kijiye..woh chali gayi hai...

Asad smiled watching Zoya's way...

Simran - Aap unhe mana ne aaye hai, chidane...???

Asad - Miss. Farooqi mujhe atleast ladte hue baat karenge, nahi toh...

Simran - Silence will rule...

Asad gave a nod...

Simran - Teekhe... Abb Pizza ka kya kare...

Asad - Jaake manana padega...

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Garden:

Zoya - Mr. Khan sirf natak karte hai... Dil mein itna badas hai aur mujhe manana ne ke liye aagaye... Iske baad mein bilkul waapass nahi jaungi...

Brain - iske baad...??? Tum pehle bhi nahi jaana chati ti...

Heart - haa par...

Brain - par var kuch nahi, tum Mr. Khan ke pass waapass nahi jaogi...

Heart (Disappointed) - Pata hai...

Zoya ran out of thoughts when she heard Asad nearing her... He is having Pizza box in his hand... he came and sat beside her... He opened the box...

Asad - Miss. Farooqi aapki favourite Pizza... Kha lijiye...

Simran came there with a pepsi tin...

Simran - yeh pepsi bhi tumhare liye...

Zoya - Mujhe nahi chahiye...

Asad - Please kha lijiye..aap lunch bhi teekh se nahi kiya...

Zoya - mein ne kaha na mujhe nahi chahiye...

Asad understood that Zoya's temper is on 104 degrees... Asad thought of plan...

Asad - Mujhe nahi pata tha Miss. Farooqi ki mein aapko itna affect karta hoon...

Zoya - Kya...???

Asad - Aap darte hai ki aap mere saath waapass aane ke liye maan na jaye... Issi liye aap mere saath ghar mein nahi rehna chahte hai...

Zoya - isa kuch nahi hai...

Asad - Toh aap yaha kyun bte hai...???

Zoya (To herself) - Seriously... Mujhe Mr. Khan affect nahi kar sakte hai...

Zoya got up and turned to him...

Zoya - Aap mujhe kabhi affect nahi kar skate hai...

Zoya snatched box from his hands...

Zoya - Chalo Simran...

Asad smiled and followed...

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Zoya and Simran entered house... Simran got call from her parents so she ran inside... But before Asad could enter, Zoya came and stood before her...

Zoya - mere saath rehke head-ache hota hai... mein toh teekhi mirchi hoon, aapko gastric hojayegi... Waise bhi jisko tehzeeb aur tameez ki spelling nahi aati hai unke saath Mr. Tehzeeb Ahmed Khan kaise reh sakte hai...

Asad - matlab...???!!

Zoya - Aap anadar nahi aayenge... Aaj bahar hi rahenge..waise bhi Jyothi ki haat ki khana zyada kha liya hoga raat barr walking kar lijiye ga...

Zoya closed door on his face...

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Evening: 9 PM:

Zoya is enjoying each slice of Pizza working on her laptop... Simran after skyping with her parents came down... She looked around but couldn't find Asad anywhere...

Simran - Zoya, Asad kaha hai...???

Zoya - Jaha hone hai waha...

Simran - matlab...??!!!

Zoya - Bahar... Mujhe mere dost ke saamne itna kuch bola... inhe toh yahi punishment sahi hai...

Simran - Zoya tum pagal hogayi ho... Bahar kitna tandh hai koi idea hai... Unhone khana bhi nahi kaya...

Zoya - Jhoot matt bolo.. Mein ne kudh suna hai...

Simran - Oho Zoya... Asad ji tumhe chidane ke liye keh rehate, unhe pata tha ki tum humare baate sunn rahe the... Tumhe manane ke liye unhone yeh sabb kiya tha... Unhone khana nahi khaya aur uppar se thand...

Zoya stood stiff listening Simran... She understood how wrong she is...

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Zoya ran out and saw Asad shivering in cold with a bonfire infront of him... It is freezing out and a bonfire can hardly help without a sweater and Asad is sitting out only with Kurta-Paijama... Asad stood up...

Zoya - Kyun kar rahe hai aap...???

Asad - Abb mein ne kya kiya Miss. Farooqi...???

Zoya - Aapne khana nahi kaya... Aur Affect veffect ka jo natak kiya, woh mujhe ghar ke anadar bejne ke liya tha aur mein ne kud aapko bahar thand mein chod diya... Bahar itna thand hai aapka tabiyat karaab ho sakta tha...

Zoya uttered every word in disappointment on herself... Zoya looked at him with teary eyes... She turned to leave... Asad held her hand... Moment stopped there... Unknown tears flowed down her eyes... She turned to him with head down... Asad raised her head...

Asad - Kudh pe itna gussa ki mujhpe chillana chodkar ro rahi ho...

Zoya hugged him... He locked her tight in his arms...

Zoya - Mein kud ko taqleef de sakti hoon par mein aapko taqleef mein nahi de sakti hoon...

Zoya shed drop of tears in his arms...

Asad - Shh... shh...

He tried to calm her down and she became... She sank her face into his chest asking him to never let her go, clutching her around him... His embrace was warm, his big strong arms seemed very protective when wrapped around her frail body...

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Thanks for reading... Please do comment... Criticism is also invited with open arms...

P.s: Friends two more chapters, Muqaddar will reach it's end with the happy beginning of there lives...

Edited by VindhyaMounika - 11 years ago

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