Asya SS: Muqaddar Updated Epilogue

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Friends... After seeing this Muqaddar drama going in QH... I thought of seeing Muqaddar in positive way... If Muqaddar separates two persons and quakes lives of innocent loves, Why can't that Muqaddar bring innocent love together...
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Part 1:

Muqaddar, Kismat, Naseeb, Taqdeer... Alfaaz alag hai par osat ek hai... Yeh alfaz zindagi ki osat badal deti hai... Har insaan ki sapna Kuda ki khel ke saamne gutne tek deti hai...

Iss khel mein jet aur haar humari haat mein nahi hote hai... Kismat se haar nahi maan kar zindagi jeena aasan baat nahi hota hai... Isse himat ke saath dekh kar kudha bhi muqaddar ko badal deta hai...

Kudha ka khel nahi, kismat hai meri...

Haar nahi, Zindagi hai meri...

Saas nahi, Agar teri rooh nahi meri...

Zindagi udaar hai meri, Agar tu nahi saath meri...

Kudha ka khel nahi Muqaddar hai meri...

Naintal:

Simran - Zoya kaha hai...!!!

Employee - Pata nahi maam...

Simran - Usse abhi tak aajani chahiye... Humari computers kaam nahi kar rahe hai... saari kaam rukh gayi hai...

Zoya entered running into her cabin...

Zoya - Sorry...!! Actually mein naya software download kar rahi thi jis se hum eh saari problems solve hojayenge...

Zoya started working with worried looks around her... After 3 long hours problem got solved...

Zoya - yeh lo Simran... abb hum clients ko design send kar sakte hai... saari computers kaam kar rahe hai...

Simran instructed all the employees to get back to there works... Zoya went to Canteen waiting for her coffee... when Simran came there...

Canteen:

Simran - Kaisi peeti ho yeh kadvi black coffee...???

Zoya - Zindagi ki kadva hatt ke aage yeh toh kuch bhi nahi...

Simran - Tum aise kyu soch rahi ho Zoya... 3 saal guzar gaya hai... Shayad Zindagi ek naya mode le legi...

Zoya gave a half-hearted smile...

Zoya - Kya aaj mein jaldi ghar jaa sakti hoon...??

Simran - yeah sure...!! Mein driver ko inform kar deti hoon...

Simran left from there leaving Zoya with her coffee...

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Bhopal:

A car making its way through busy streets of Bhopal stopped in front of Corporate Office named Dilshad Constructions... Asad stepped out of car and entered his office... He went to his cabin and sat in his chair... He looked at the photo-frame in front of him and took into his hands... He is lost looking at the photo... His Zoya...!!! He lost his Zoya forever...!!!

He got disturbed from his thoughts with the knock on the door...

Ayaan - May I come in Bhai Jaan...??

Asad - Ha Ayaan... Come In...

Ayaan - Bhai Jaan aaj ek meeting hai uske bare mein discuss karni thi...

Asad - Dream Constructions ke saath hai na...

Ayaan - Un logon ke saath humein Naintal mein 2 Projects hai uske bare mein meeting hai...

Asad - Files ready hogaye hai...

Ayaan - Ha Bhai Jaan...

Ayaan handed him files...

Asad - Ok... mein dekh tha hoon...

Ayaan - Ok Bhai Jaan...

Ayaan was going to leave...

Asad - Ayaan... Humeira ne complaint kiya ki tum breakfast kiye bina office aagaye ho...

Ayaan - Who Bhai Jaan kaam...

Asad - Usne kaha ki woh breakfast leke aane wali hai... Breakfast aur Daat dodno khan eke liye taiyaar hojao...

Ayaan - Aadat banana padega bhai jaan... Biwi banne ke baad woh mujhe har din khilane wali hai...

Ayaan smiled and left from there and Asad was back to his work...

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Naintal:

Zoya with her dairy close to her sat on Window ledge with tears in her eyes... Those which she is hiding from world down which break downs every night... No one can answer those questions flowed through tears... Not even Zoya...

Zoya - Log kehte hai Kudha apni sabse pyaari bacchon ki sabse katin imtihaan lete hai... Allah Miyya...!! Kya aap mujhse itna pyaar karte hai ki meri imtehaan ka hissa kabhi anjaam dekh nahi paa rahi hai... Mujhe India aaie hue 4 saal hogayi hai... Meri Duniya se door 3 saal... Yeh dard sehte hue 3 saal... Mein zinda laash hoon jo sirf saase le rahi hoon... Mein har pal hazar maut mar rahi hoon...

The only thing she have in her life to share her emotions is her Dairy... Simran came to know about her past through Zoya's dairy... Simran was hell shocked to see that brave girl who is still alive...

Naintal - Evening:

Simran entered house and threw bag to one corner of living room... She went upstairs to Zoya room... She knocked the door but Zoya didn't answer... Realising that door is not locked she entered dark room with dim light on side of the bed... Simran went and switched on the lights and saw Zoya with her dairy and welled up tears in her eyes... She went near to Zoya and placed her hand on Zoya's shoulder which helped in bringing Zoya to this world...

Simran - Kitne saal iss andere mein zindagi guzarogi...

Zoya - Jab tak meri saase chal rahi hai, tab tak... Kyun ki meri zindagi kud iss anderi mein kahi ulajh gayi hai...

Simran - Tum iss uljhan se bahar aana nahi chahti ho...

Zoya - Bahar aakar zindagi jeene ki hmat khuta rahi hoon...

Simran - Kya tum woh sabb bhul nahi sakte...

Zoya got up from window ledge with flowing tears...

Zoya - Kash bhul jati... Kash mein yeh bhul pati ki meri zindagi mein woh yeh ek din aaya tha, jab mein Mr. Khan se door hogayi thi... Kash mein bhul jaati ki meri nikha Ayaan se ho chuki hai... Kash mein yeh bhul pati ki mein iss duniya ke liye Mrs. Ayaan Ahmed Khan hoon...

Zoya turned towards Simran...

Zoya - Pata hai SImran meri liye Nikha hi sab kuch tha... Ek baar mein kisi se nikha kar liya toh mein zindagi bar saath nibana chahti thi... Par nikha koi balidaan dekh kar nibhaya nahi jata hai... Nikha do dilonki kwayish hai... do ruh ki Milan...

Simran - Tum Asad ke pass waapas kyun nahi chali jati...???

Zoya - mein ne Ayaan ko iss nikha ki bandan se mukt toh kar diya par mein uss yaadon ko peeche chod kar Mr. Khan ke pass waapas nahi japaungi... Mein nahi bhulpaungi ki unhone mere saath kya kiya hai... Mein koi gudiya nahi thi...

Zoya burst out in tears... Simran tried to console her...

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Bhopal: Khan Mansion: Dinner Table:

Dilshad - Asad kaha hai...??

Ayaan - Bhai Jaan kamre mein hai...

Rashid - Usne kuch khaya...??

Dilshad - Nahi...

Shirin - Kuch banau uss ke liye...???

Dilshad - Nahi Shirin...

Humeira - Mein Bhai jaan ko coffee dekhe aati hoon...

Dilshad - Tum rukho Humeira... Mein jaati hoon...

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Asad's Room:

Dilshad entered Asad's room... Asad stood near window looking at stars and some tears in his eyes...

Dilshad - Asad...!!!

Hearing his name from Dilshad he wiped his tears and turned towards him...

Dilshad - Mujhse toh ye aasu matt chupao...

Asad - Ammi... woh...

Dilshad - 3 saal hogaya hai Asad... Tum usse 3 saal se doond rahe ho... Tumhe har din marte hue mein nahi dekh sakti hoon Asad...

Asad (Unshed tears his eyes) - Mein ussi din mot ko gale lagaya jis din meinne Zoya ko kho diya...

Dilshad - Aisa matt kaho Asad...

Asad - Mein ne uss kud kho diya hai... Woh kabhi waapas nahi aayegi ammi...

Dilshad - Aisa matt kaho... Saccha pyaar kabhi nahi haar tha hai...

Asad - Mein haar chuki hoon ammi... Shayad mera sacha pyaar hi nahi...

Dilshad - Isa matt kaho Asad...

Asad - Aapi aur Jiju ko kud pata nahi hai ki Zoya kaha hai...

Dilshad - Himatt rakho Asad... Kal ek naya shuruat hoga... sab kuch teekh hojayega...

Dilshad left from there when Asad fell on the couch with distraught...

Asad - Miss. Farooqi aap kaha hai kaise hai kuch pata nahi chal raha hai... Maula se yahi du ki aap jaha bhi rahe mehfoos rahe...

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will be continued soon...

Thanks for reading...

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INDEX

Part 1 - Page 1

Part 2 - Page 5 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3750873/asya-ss-muqaddar-updated-epilogue?pn=5

Part 3 - Page 9 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3750873/asya-ss-muqaddar-updated-epilogue?pn=9

Part 4 - Page 13 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93997507

Part 5 - Page 18 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/94561631

Part 6 - Page 26 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3750873/asya-ss-muqaddar-updated-epilogue?pn=26

Part 7 - Page 30 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3750873/asya-ss-muqaddar-updated-epilogue

Part 8 - Page 33 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3750873/asya-ss-muqaddar-updated-epilogue

Part 9 - Page 35 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3750873/asya-ss-muqaddar-updated-epilogue

Part 10 - Page 39 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3750873/asya-ss-muqaddar-updated-epilogue

Epilogue - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3750873/asya-ss-muqaddar-updated-epilogue

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Ayaan and Humeira married...

Asad and zoya separated...

i hope there is a twist...


waiting for the next update..

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Wow!! You have written it so beautifully. Loved it and would be waiting for more.
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Originally posted by: Linsie

Ayaan and Humeira married...

Asad and zoya separated...

i hope there is a twist...


waiting for the next update..


Humeira and Ayaan didn't get married... read it again... Ayaan said that i have to make it as habit because after marriage he have to take it all...

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