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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: starslinedup

<font size="4" color="#ff0000">NOTE!!!!</font>

Ch13...coming soon!!!!


Sorry sorry sorry..but its been a very YUCK🤢24 hours for me...and I dont want to be in this mood and write...kyunki..the coming update is...Well since I am not posting tonight..I'll give in some info bout it..So here goes👏

CH13

Time for Tango...

  • It will start with a special day...😃
  • Zoya will avenge herself..how well u'll see.😉somethin related to tango!!!
  • temperature to upar jaana hi hai..😉😉
  • Maybe...just maybe...Najma might meet Zoya...
So please bear with me and hold on for another day...n u never know..I mite try n do a double update..no promises though..cos dekhte hai din kaisa jaata hai😭n keep commenting and pass on the word if you find my FF worth sharing with ur friends on IF... Cya soon peeps..nu guys rock!!!


PS - As of now the timeline has been updated..n shayad se kya pata koi hint chod di ho maine usmein😲😉😆so chk it out...👍🏼



evil u are...telling only half of d things 😈

tango

looking forward to zoya's revenge time ⭐️

il look for d timeline n see for ur hint 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
love da way hw story progress...

lovely update
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Posted: 11 years ago
I knew it!! :D I knew it was Mango!! As only Mango could cheer up Zoya n I guess Zoya herself said in one of the initial chapters that only Mango can do that... I was hoping that Asad n Mango had some connections to... so I was very happy knowing Asad gifted her to Zoya...
Asad b Zoya bickering over Mango felt like two parents fighting over their child... it was cute... I'm so sure Aapi is gonna be right... Mango will further reduce the distance between Asad n Zoya... :)
Ayaan is slowly getting to know what kind of a relationship Asad n Zoya used to share or share... he is getting to see a side of Asad that he'd never seen... a side that only Zoya n things associated with her could bring about... :)
All in all I'm so super happy with this chapter!! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mysticlover

I knew it!! :D I knew it was Mango!! As only Mango could cheer up Zoya n I guess Zoya herself said in one of the initial chapters that only Mango can do that... I was hoping that Asad n Mango had some connections to... so I was very happy knowing Asad gifted her to Zoya...
Asad b Zoya bickering over Mango felt like two parents fighting over their child... it was cute... I'm so sure Aapi is gonna be right... Mango will further reduce the distance between Asad n Zoya... :)
Ayaan is slowly getting to know what kind of a relationship Asad n Zoya used to share or share... he is getting to see a side of Asad that he'd never seen... a side that only Zoya n things associated with her could bring about... :)
All in all I'm so super happy with this chapter!! :)



Ya..n it was so very hard for me to not let that slip..wen I responded to your comment...u said it twice..so seems like its all making sense...😃 PHEW... n ya its the only thing that can bring the 2 together as it was a happy part of their lives and they both love her a lot...so..it will just get better from here...umm well maybe a lil more of the up n down coz dont u think the last few chapters have been too happy??😕😆 JK...will try n keep the next bit of ups and downs to a minimum...so keep reading..n thanks a lot for u comment...m glad ur enjoying the story so far...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aashna aapi plzz update soon😭
addicted to ur fanfic!!
plzz dnt get asad n zoya together soo soon in the fanfic...
i love the jealous, angry and intense asad u portray!!☺️
these emotions are rarely portrayed originally in the show...
but u've managed to express them in ur writing beautifully😃
love yah❤️
Eid Mubarik once again🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: elenaa



evil u are...telling only half of d things 😈

tango

looking forward to zoya's revenge time ⭐️

il look for d timeline n see for ur hint 😉

LOL😆 agar sab bata dungi to phir wats the point..lol.. Tango..as in dance😉 ..just a means to an end😉...so ya..timeline dekh lo..😉...lol chalo stay tuned...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
RATED 'R' reader discretion is advised..(17+)
So here you go...A lil bit of Mango..leadin into Tango...😆 (oopsies if u find any errors😳)
CH13

Time to Tango...

Take my hand,

Let yourself go..

Come a little closer..

Let me show you how to tango..

Lets romance with the rhythm..

Lets seduce the sound..

Let me take you for a spin..

Come kiss me and turnaround..

Break all the barriers

Forget about the tears..

Just indulge in this passion

Say goddbye to all your fears...

So come a little closer my love..

Let me show you..how to Tango!!!

In a matter of a few weeks, Mango had become a star in her own rights. Everyone on the sets adored her, and no matter how bad, her licks and cuddles would turn things around for the best. She was always present on the sets, spending all her time with Asad, as she only got to see him then. Zoya, even though she felt happy at her two loves bonding, couldn't stop the jealousy, hell she was even jealous of her own dog spending time with Asad. No she was just mad that her dog picked Asad over her, well she did stay with her..she just couldn't decide. Slowly the Mango effect had started to affect the two starcrossed lovers also. Not being able to stay away from her dog for too long, and seeing no efforts from Mango, Zoya had finally made a move and reshifted closer to Asad, infact she had put her chair besides Asad, with Mango in the middle. Only then did Mango acknowledge Zoya's presence, rearranging herself to be cozying up to Zoya's feet. It seemed like that was her plan altogether. Asad seeing the turn of events couldn't help but smile..shaking his head and patting Mango.

Zoya-Kya hua why are you smiling??,...umm like that...like u know something and I don't..

Asad laughed..

Asad-Woh to sure hai ki I know what you don't.

Zoya- Ya right..and might that be??

Asad-Well Mango got what she wanted, right my girl??

Woof woof...

Zoya- What are you talking about??

Asad- LOL she just wanted you to be here, near me..he winked.

Zoya- Nahi aisi koi baat nahi, she just wanted me to be around her without she having to leave you..so stop flattering your self.. near me ya right...she muttered to herself..

Asad couldn't help but hear her mutter making him laugh..

Zoya looked at him, trying to be offended, but ended up laughing herself, while by their lers, Mango let out a satisfied sigh and napped away, her head touching Zoya's feet and her body touching Asad's, her favorite place in the world.

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The crew had gotten a special cake made for Mango on her 6th birthday; making her birthday a big deal.Infact they had all packed up earlier than usual to celebrate. Also because it was their last shoot for the week and they had some time off before they shot a song sequence and headed to California. So with everything taken care of, the crew wished Mango a very happy birthday and continued on with their party, enjoying the food and drinks, courtesy Asad. Everyone was having a good time, including Ayaan, who had been getting really bothered by his brothers secrecy. He had been feeling left out, for not knowing and not being told anything about Asad and Zoya, when he knew he was the only one who was unaware.It was only due to Humeira's presence that he was able to enjoy the evening and not think about Asad and Zoya for once. He was just focused on Humeria, the duo inseparable ever since her return from Banglore. It was their first time apart and they hadn't liked it at all, making them promise each other never to be away.

Everything was going good, infact Zoya and Asad seemed to be in their own happy world, laughing and enjoying the cool February breeze. Suddenly Mango barked, wagging her tail.Looking where she was looking, the pair saw someone approaching them;it was Najma, and seeing her Zoya couldn't contain her happiness and ran upto her and took her in for a hug, shocking Najma to her core.

Najma- Zoya..uhh aap..umm aap yahan kasie..yah allah mein koi sapna to nahi dekh rahi hu naa???..Ouch.. Zoya had just pinched her..

Zoya- Nahi tamtar..im really here...

Najma- OMG...aaa she squealed and hugged Zoya again, crying and laughing at the same time...

Najma- Aap yahan kaise?? I mean ..yahan woh bhi Asad bhaijaan ke sets pe..OMG you do know that bhaijaan is an acote now right?? OMG have you met Asad bhaijaan..OMG OMG ..ab kya hoga..

Zoya- Tamatar relax...I have already met your brother, infact I am his costar in Ayaan's movie, deko don't look so confused..its a long story kabhi fursat mein bataungi..filhaal lemme just look at you..Allah miyaan cant believe its been almost 6 years since I last saw...and look at you all grown up and pretty..haa thodi moti ...she teased..

Najma-Zoya aap bhi..pehle ghar mein bhaijaan aur Ayaan mujhe sataate hai aur ab aap bhi...not fair...I mean mein gym bhi...

Zoya- Mazaak kar rahi thi tamatar..just chill..you look amazing and you are beautiful as always.. yaar I missed you so much...

Najma had tears in her eyes...

Najma- Umm Zoya..uh...kaise kahu...I mean sorry is such a small word for what happened..I mean u don't even know the situation...

Zoya taking her in for a hug...-Shh don't cry yaar..mujhe sab pata hai..and I know you and ammi have always looked out for me..jo hua use hona tha..and ab humein aaga badhna chaahiye..please yeh mat socho ki mein naraaz hu...its all in the past..and look at us now..Me and Asad have finally decided to move past it all and move ahead. So please tamatar don't cry anymore..you are getting redder by the minute..

Najma- Magar Zoya ammi...

Zoya- Please forget about it..and ammi ko bhi yahi kaho...BTW how is she?? I miss her so much, aur kitni baar socha unse milu but..

Najma- Zoya she misses you everyday, ek din aisa nahi jaata jab who tumhare baare mein ya jo hua uske baare mein nahi sochti..Zoya she wants to make things right..she wants to apologise..

Zoya-Najma she doesn't need to appologise,I have no hard feelings for her..please take care of her and I will come see her soon.

Najma-Theek hai..waise bhaijaan kahan hai??

Zoya- Umm idhar hi to the..Mango bhi unhi ke saath thi..

Najma- O Mango is here too..I wanna see her...hamesha uske baare mein suna tha..now I finally get a chance to meet her..you know what let me call him, as is I am running late, bas unse ek cheque lena tha. He is funding an awareness day at our school.

Just as Najma took out her phone Asad and Mango, made their way towards the girls.

Asad- Sorry got a call..so u girls met already?? Ho gaya all the rona dhona huh?? He took Najma in for a side hug and looked at Zoya.

Najma- Jee bhaijaan we met..and thank u for not telling me...mein aapse bahut naraaz hu..

Asad- Tamatar stop being a drama queen..mil liya na tumne so chill..

Najma- Fine...btw bhaijaan ab pata chala ki aap itne..umm u know...happy happy kyun the wen we came..its all because of Zoya huh...she laughed...

Zoya turned to look at Asad, who seemed to be almost blushing, a rare sight indeed.

Asad- shut up..and jo kaam karne aayi ho get that over with...here yeh raha cheque..he reached into his pocket and handed her the cheque, making Mango more restless..

Asad- Ok ok...I'll introduce you to my sis..just calm girl..

Woof..

Najma-Meet Mango..Mango this is Najma..

Najma patted a very excited Mango, happy to have finally met her..

Najma- Aww she is so adorable..she looks just like her pictures..sach mein bhaijaan..I have been in love with her ever since you showed me the picture.when you were planning to gift her to Zoya..for her first birthday a.. she stopped...sensing where she was going

Najma- Umm achaa to mein chalet hu..my friend is waiting outside in the car, bhaijaan ghar pe milte hai..and Zoya..we need to plan something..

Zoya- For sure tamatar..cu soon... byeee..

Asad-Bye tamatar..and they both headed back to the party.

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Zoya and Asad were waiting for their dance instructor. They were meeting after 2 days to reharse for a dance sequence for the movie. Dressed in loose pajaamas and a button down vest, Asad looked the most casual he had ever looked. Zoya was dressed in a thin strapped dress and heals ready to Tango. After the instructors arrival they got busy with their practice.. While dancing came easy for Zoya, what came to be a welcome surprise was Asad. He moved with a grace of a true ballroom dancer, smooth, easy and dominating. He was in every sense a lion,looking majestic, with his moves, a sight making Zoya swoon. She had never seen him dance, and today it was all but a vision she wanted to savour. She wanted to drink him in, drool at his male rawness, how he looked so handsome without an effort. She just couldn't keep her thoughts on a leash,and she didn't care..she was getting hot looking at him, building up fantasies in her head of what she could do to him.

Done..spoke the instructor, breaking Zoya out of her fantasies.

Instructor-So I am gonna leave you two to practice and then we'll reharse on the day of the shoot, you guys were really good, and the best thing was your chemistry...you both did and awesome job..so ya just practice for a lil bit and hand over the keys to the guard when you leave.K bye and Cya at the shoot'.

She walked out leaving the two alone.

Asad- So lets start..he offered his hand,and Zoya took it readily..and the started to tango..a dance very raw and sensual..

While Asad was completely focused on the work at hand, Zoya was busy day dreaming about him,but somehow that didn't affect her dancing, with Asad swaying her and leading her. Finally after an hour, they called it a night and waited to catch their breath.

Zoya couldn't tear her eyes away from Asad, who was lazily leaning on the wall with his eyes shut..looking like the reason for Zoya's breathlessness...She felt herself falling...falling for him..falling for his presence, falling for him to catch her. Standing up from her spot, she slowly made her way to him, stopping when she was just an inch away from touching him. Her presence popped his eyes open, confusion surfacing in them. He wasn't sure how Zoya was suddenly standing in front of him, that too this close. As if on cue, Zoya filled in that inch, invading his personal space, her form, gently filling in the space, merging with his.

Asad frowned in confusion and looked into her eyes.

Asad-Umm Zo..

But before he could, his lips were taken over by a pair of soft supple lips, Zoya's lips.

She had given herself to the moment, not willing to hold on any more, tip toeing her way up, and sliding her hands in his hair, claiming his lips with hers. She kissed him with a carnal urgency, pouring every bit of her being in that kiss. She wanted to feel him ,wanted to touch him, wanted to relive the passion they once shared. Today she wouldn't stop, her desire getting stronger than her rationality. She deepend the kiss with every breath, her hands frantically moving through his hair, pulling him closer,squeezing herself in his body.

Asad who was thunderstruck by the turn of events, gradually caught on to this assault, his senses going on an override. His hands swiftly made his way around her waist, and pulled her in, slowly gliding up, but Zoya shoved them off. She wouldn't let him touch her any further.

Asad- Zoya..he protested..

But Zoya wouldnt budge.

Zoya-Shhh.. and she reclaimed his lips, his hands balling into fists of frustrations, not being allowed to explore.

Zoya owned Asad, the way she touched him, her hands moving seductively from his hair to his hands. Her kissese conquered his jaw,nibbling their way to his neck, making him grunt in pleasure, ending up biting his collar bone. She inhaled his scent and moaned, her hands massaged his arms, toying with his ripped muscles, leaving feathery touches, making him stir.She moved with the grace of a nymph, kissing him with each button she snapped, pushing down his vest with the last snap. Savoring his body with her eyes was not enough, she wanted to touch him,taste him, every bit of him. Her hands and her mouth assaulted every inch of Asad's bareness, awakening his virility. He grabbed her by her shoulders and nailed her to the wall, asking her with his eyes, the reason behind her bout.

Asad-Zoya what are you doing?? What are you doing to me...He closed his eyes and leaned his forehead on hers trying to contain himself.

Zoya just looked at him and smiled, she was a sight to see, her hair in a disarray, her cheeks flushed red, and her eyes dancing with passionate mischief. She didn't respond to Asad's question, instead pulled his pants a little lower on his waist, exposing his well toned V.Genlty her hands glided around it, making Asad react as if he was zapped.

Asad-Zoya stop with this...warna...Aaaghh..warna I'll lose myself and claim you here and now.

Zoya flipped around, their postions changing and Asad pinned to the wall.Her hands gently made way lower, to his peak,and a satisfactory smile adorned her face.She tip toed again and kissed him on his cheek and walked away, frustrating Asad to a point of no return.

Asad- What the hell Zoya, what's all this about??

Zoya turned around and smirked, revealing her dimples.

Zoya- Well now that's what you call a sweet revenge...She winked and made her way out of the studio to go change. Asad just stood their stumped. Slowly his smile returned and shaking his head he made his way in Zoya's direction.

Zoya who couldn't help but gloat about her victory was suddenly grabbed by her arms and pushed again to the wall, Asad's lips taking over her lips in a ravaging kiss, lasting for what seemed like an eternity.he stopped when he was satisfied with what he saw and leaned in and looked at her.

Asad-Aise revenge pe to hum qurbaan meri jaan..u can win over me anytime..so now be ready tomorrow at 7..I am taking u out for a valentines/victory dinner'...and just about to leave,he took her lip between his and bit it..Leaving her happy and as hot and bothered as him..

so..😆..did the temperature go up??? was I true to my word..was it worth the wait..comeon tell me tell me tell me...not gonna say much...just hope you enjoyed it..aage wala chapter will be a dhamaka...so stay tuned...and COMMENTS..are required.. so comment all u peeps..even the silent readers..ek 2 sentences likhne mein kya jaata hai yaar..yahan mera morale boost ho jaate hai😃

Until later...enjoy the weekend...🥳
Edited by starslinedup - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: starslinedup

Ch 13..Updating in 10mins..🥳

YEAAA🥳 HURRY UP 10 MINUTES PLEASEEE
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: starslinedup

Ch 13..Updating in 10mins..🥳


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princess101

YEAAA🥳 HURRY UP 10 MINUTES PLEASEEE

updated..chk it out..n dont forget to comment!!!😃

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