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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

RES!

I hate you. You made me cry. 😭😭😭

This was so beautifully written. His inner turmoil, his guilt, his hate for that house, and now himself.

You are truly gifted my dear. The way Zoya was banging on the closed doors, it broke my heart. I could imagine KSG playing out all the emotions you so beautifully portrayed in your writing.

As much as I hated him dragging her like that. The way you described it made it a poignant and heart wrenchingly beautiful scene. (I could imagine Karan and Surbhi acting this all out.)

Just wow.

👏

Edited by mochhug - 11 years ago

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rads73937

@rads73937

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

AWESOME.

THANX FOR THE PM. TAKE CARE.

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

brilliant sadie ...
it is way too emotional ...

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aashiqua

@aashiqua

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

I'm first
emotional..
And heartbreaking..
Sadie it's so beautifully written

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

very very emotional

can't u continue it?

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SANYA

@cutiesanya

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Correctly said" everything will not be the same",
And the damage done by so called muqadar
Couldn't be corrected, A emotional os
The feelings of asad are shown with
pain and sepration.. Awesome

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Hey ...

It was just heartbreaking !!! </3

And you've portrayed their emos so well ... :('

Thanks for the pm :)

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Lolly

@KaSufan2013rox

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Amazing 😊 I shed tears while reading this 😭

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jasmine

@Reyansh23

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Dis z what zoyaan need to understand...dat...
"How do I explain to her that no matter if their nikaah was a mistake, everyone had to pay it's price."

N d most heart breaking part ws
"And for that I will never be able to forgive my brother, I will never forgive Ayaan for snatching away the only woman I love and no matter how temporary this separation might be, no matter if I keep telling myself this was just a test of our love and it will get over soon, deep inside I knew that everything will not be normal again, everything won't be the same anymore."
Itz true yr...EVERYTHING WON'T B SAME ANYMORE...

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Archana

@mysticlover

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Asad asked a question that has always eaten away my mind... why does people in SM always steal away Asad's happiness??
He lost his Abbu to that house n now his love, his Zoya...
How is it that the happiness of those people comes always at the cost of Asad's happiness? N how can Gul show such a thing as one set of people's happiness coming at the cost of another's? So disturbing!!
Sorry... I rambled on about the show... the os was amazing... reflecting the mental turmoil of Asad n Zoya... all their happiness, their promises, their dreams n their beliefs are being broken into pieces n yet they're asked to say Qubool Hai to all that... if this is what is accepting one's fate I would rather have them fighting n resisting the fate n either win or lose... but no passive acceptance...