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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Sadie its emotional...

WRt it sooo beautifully. .hw much pain asad n zoya going thru...

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Khan Sadaf

@_Sadaf_

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Extremely emotional Sadie but written beautifully!! 😊

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: raj_tanha_fan
sadie!! you had me in tears girl!!!
so heart wrenching and emotional!!
beautiful writing!!!!!
the pain was described exceptionally well!!
lovely!!
ty for the pm.

aww thank you so much hun 🤗

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chicksoup

@chicksoup

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

*thud* baap re such a big comment 😆😆😆

haha noodle dadi i'm glad you liked it! Whatever points you mentioned maybe correct but for me Ayaan and Shireen have always been selfish and they'll forever remain one! and nothing and no one can change my judgement about them!

My main problem is why the hell are zoya's feelings not taken into consideration? who is she? asad and ayaan's personal property? who the hell are they to decide on her behalf! asad dragged her out of the house, FINE but he has no goddamn right to force his sacrifice on her. he can sacrifice because he loves her sister but why should zoya do sumthn like that for someone she hardly interacts with? Whether or not zoya wants to stay in the SM should be solely her decision because she is not anyone's property she is a human and is entitled to doing what she wants. No one can force her into doing something she dsnt wanna do!

Sadie,

Don't see it as a SACRIFICE...

IT IS A MISTAKE SHE COMMITTED...which has far reaching consequences which caused a girl to make an attempt on her life...any girl actually, not just his sister...

Zoya and Ayan admit to the galti...they agree they made a mistake...now he is trying to make her face the consequences...handling it in the neatest way possible, considering the galti has already reached such a magnitude as to cause Hasena Bee to break the nikah..means it is not within the family any more...

And he was right...he reached just in time to save the situation before the bunch of idiot qasis worsened it...😊

Like someone else pointed out, he had awarded her freedom after the Rajveer episode but had warned her SHE CANNOT BE IRRESPONSIBLE...and she had been just that...irresponsible in getting accidentally married and honest in accepting it, and fearful about facing it...😊

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-khaleesi-

@-khaleesi-

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

OMG! So intense! My poor eyes! Have been crying off and on since Thursday. 😭

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SOWMYA

@sowmy18

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Tht was freaking awesome and emotional!

i just loved this piece of work!

your point of view in describing asad is just awesome!

can i say tht i just got more angrier on him after reading ur os?

he,knowing everything and killing himself up, is doing this!

is it really necessary

is there no other way i=out of all this!

and the worst part is tht zoya is the worst affected victim of all this!

i just hope she says "qubool nahi hai" and run away!

sorry for all this blabbering!

but ur os provoked me to spill all this out!

i never commented on anything and was just silent in hopes tht smthng will change positive and hen i can again open mouth but...

okay now im seriously blabbering!

sorry!😳

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madhvi4gurti

@madhvi4gurti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

that was heartbreaking!!!

bt u wrote it beautifully!!!😭

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Rupali

@HamariAduriKahn

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

res

unres
I cried.

now that may not seem to be a lot but I NEVER cry after reading stories or watch tv/movie (ok maybe once in a rare while). I'm just not the crying type and today ur story managed to do the impossible. I just loved it! it was heartbreakingly beautiful

Edited by Love-AsYa-4ever - 11 years ago

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Priyanka

@Prizi

Achiever

+ 29

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Brilliant.
Asad's pov made me cry

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Sadieee...That was BEAUTIFUL...Like, beautiful,BEAUTIFUL...!!! 😭

I loved the end...This is what I want...Asad to NEVER forgive Ayaan...Haad hoti hai, he always does selfish things like this...its HIGH time for him to start knowing that YES, Asad Ahmed Khan can love passionately...but he can also HATE passionately...!!!