ll Asya FF ll Hum Aur Tum ll Part 6 Updt [25 oct] - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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pls update soon...😃
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nce update...pls cntnue soon...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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. Very different
from what we get to read
otherwise on the forum.
Please do continue soon. Please
pm me for the next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 5


Without any realization these two first time lovers are moving from pretence to comfort - a comfort zone of being together with their individual personalities still intact. asad and zoya have left the awkwardness of being together as an employer-employee, or a namesake married couple and actually have moved into a zone of coexistence! Such a transformation! This may not even have happened as fast had they been traditionally married. 😳

This comfort zone now provides asad and zoya a beautiful opportunity to get to know each other intimately as individuals and to learn to coexist. No better opportunity for the first time lovers to fall in love all over again - but this go around, it will happen consciously...❤️
Today saw some beautiful moments of these two first time lovers...
When Asad walked in after his morning jog and headed towards the bathroom, zoya , the prankster, starts implementing her mission 'Driving AAK Crazy' in full force. Asad has started turning into a cute lover boy now every time zoya confronts him with her immature tactics. Asad has become a real first time lover subconsciously - he puts up with zoya 's each and every prank, immature but funny tactics with immense tolerance.
For the first time we saw a boyish Asad who can play zoya's game as well as she can. As zoya keeps talking about being fair in the challange, he grabs the opportunity to sneak into the bathroom. However, when he hears zoya 's singing, he comes out with curiosity.
This is new Asad emerging, the one who does not neglect what zoya says, what she does and what she is upto - the old Asad would have roughly pushed zoya aside even before she could start her sentence and would not have given a damn to her singing at poolside just name a few. Earlier he would have ordered her to stay put and quiet so roughly that zoya would have never dared to be a prankster in his own room and in his presence. The contrast between the old snob Asad under a shell of 'don't give a damn' attitude and the new Asad with soft hearted 'will put up with your silly tactics' attitude is striking!
zoya continues with her silly tactics and asad continus the play the game with her with all his patience put to test. Khushi does not realize but she is stepping into a dangerous territory now - every cute smile she gives asad, every free style silly act she is putting up is bringing out her REAL personality in front of asad. While dealing with her foolish tactics, asad is showing the ultimate patience, no anger has surfaced - multiple times Zoya sneezes directly on him, he knows she is playing the game and still instead of getting angry with her he continues to give stern but gentle warnings with his husky 'Zoya ...' every signle time.
As I watched them with Zoya fooling around Asad when they were alone and even in presence of the family, I saw an Asad who was putting up with her actions with a lover's reaction - self restrained, 'Yeh ladki toh mujhe paagal kar degi' but 'she is so adorable' attitude. Flickers of his worry about Zoya did not go unnoticed when he asked her to refrain from having yogurt due to cold and asking her to sleep inside the room for the same reason. However, immature Zoya did not notice his tenderness at this time...
Every cute smile she gave him, every witty remark she passed on him in Tanveer's presence made this game of falling in love again more dangerous. The lover in Asad is going to fall for this chulbully ladki - jo aadhi pagal hai aur aadhi sayani...Every step Zoya took today in playing with Asad's psyche is going to bring both of them few more steps closer.
The tender moment of "Mitwa...' in the middle of a silly argument with Asad's hair flying for the first time created a perfect moment where Zoya ke dil main bhi iss cute se Asad ki tasveer chapp hi jayegi...Asad was just mesmerised to see his Zoya as an angelic beauty once again!
In the game of sharing his room, his house, his pool, his closet...Zoya keeps claiming "Aadhe saal ke liye yeh sab aadha aadha humara hai" - that she has a 50 % right on evrything of Asad's What Zoya has not realized is that in other words she is asking Asad, 'Hum Aapke Hai Kaun?"

Untold thoughts: Asad knows that Zoya is playing silly to drive him crazy. Somewhere he is enjoying his freedom as a person instead of being someone with a mask all the time. Asad is getting to know Zoya as a person much better and only DM can help him from losing self-retrain when he has this mesmerising but childish, immature beauty with him ALL the time now...Every bit of patience, tolerance and care Asad is demonstrating at this time is getting imprinted on Zoya 's mind and heart without any realization of Asad's emotions at this time... These images will come back to make Zoya restless later...

Jab karti ho sharaarat

toh aakein chamkati hai

dabi dabi muskan

in hothon main kheel uthati hai

kya kare is dil ka

jisme ek kasak si uthati hai

ek tamanna aap ko

bahoan main bhar leni ki umadati hai...❤️❤️❤️
Here come the first time lovers, walking down the path of their very first love, falling in love all over again, now with all their senses intact...

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ty for ready but guys why dont i gete nough results on this ff?
is this cuz of the ff's name?
can anyone suggest my a nice name
it a romantic story full of romance😊
for next update i need 100 comments
Edited by ....Asya.... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Awesome dear..
Pls contunue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Nice update.
Enjoyed.
Plz continue ASAP.
And thnx 4 the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
You have always written so well and there is no way i would want to miss this FF of yours.😉 Pls pm for updates.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome... amazing... super... please do continue soon... thanks for PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsum.. Zoya is soo funny.. Carry on asap. Thnx for the pm😊😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey it amazing...
do continue soon n do pm me...
thx fr the pm...

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