ll Asya FF ll Hum Aur Tum ll Part 6 Updt [25 oct]

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Part 1

Asad and Zoya -

They stopped their pretence of intimacy yesterday that was just for the sake of their families. They were in their complete senses while doing so and while appyling color on each other's face and felt the shock waves of their 'First Touch by their beloved'!

Today saw more ...

After zoya insisted that asad drinks bhang for her sake, it did not take much for him to go for it. Once under the influence of bhang, the inhibitions of AAK were gone and emerged the real, soft hearted, very much in love Asad who is crazy after Zoya . His love for zoya was sooo evident in his twinking eyes, soft and admiring gaze, as if implying, 'She is mine' with pride and happiness when he was standing with ammi and abbu. It is the first time ever that Asad verbalized his admiration for zoya as a person in love - 'She is beautiful!' 'Thodi pagal hai par cute hai!' 'Her hair...Her eyes...Her smile...'all the right emotions were there brimming to the fullest...

Then came the blush - asad actually blushed

He blushed, looked down as would suit a first time lover - then his bold footsteps - they took charge, started marching towards zoya , asad's zoya , with pride, a right stride with a twinkle of mischeif in his eyes - as he strode by, he gulped down another 'bhang ka pyala' - for the first time he willingly let go of his inhibitions, but still in control of his actions he went straight to zoya and for the first time willingly he let the 'mitwaa ishq pe zoor nahi ' happen - it was no accident no coincidence - it was an action taken by asad willingly in that direction for the first time...

Then he pulled zoya ...The rush of emotions and the gush of action - the admiration, the realization, the desire and the love - the sea of emotions brought back their best moments of untold passion - a consequence of desired action of love this time.

When they realized the presence of others around them - they let go of each other but, lovingly, with an untold message of coming back to each other - asad gave a gentle swirl to zoya for the first time that was no act, no pretence...

Then came the most beautiful first moment - Asad and zoya smiled at each other - two lovers looked deep in each others' eyes and smiled at each other - Asad's smile was gentle and affectionate- also was happy - zoya i's smile turned from question to hesitation and then into a happy accepting smile - here zoya 's first affectionate smile for Asad looking directly into his eyes is yet to come...She just has not realized her love for Asad yet...Asad had smirks before but never smiled affectionately and admiringly at zoya looking deep down in her eyes till today...

The untold emotions of asad here: he feels free, he wants to get away from this feeling of having the snakewa around prying on his zoya - his happiness- he wants to enjoy this feeling of happiness, admire his zoya , get close to zoya and feel her - emotionally and intimately...

By this time his smirk while telling zoya to keep quiet and not to blurt out what they do when they are alone; his finger touching zoya's lips to quiet her but in turn make her 'feel' him ---are blending the required acts from pretence to genuine and leading them along the path of their First Love further...


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Edited by ....Asya.... - 12 years ago
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Part 2

Asad and Zoya
Their bhang is wearing off and the senses are coming back...
Yesterday saw Asad's first blush ❤️ , and many more Asad-Zoya firsts in this journey of their first love...
Today saw many more ...
Zoya rinsed her face with the rose water and her eyes opened up ...For the first time, Zoya realized Asad's love for her... she can now see how Asad's eyes always reflected his deep love for her --- something that she failed to see before now became very clear to her. How did she not realize what his actions meant? What his eyes were saying? Actions - sometimes rough, sometimes tender but his eyes always had 'that' feeling - a feeling of heartache - a feeling of deep love that touches your soul - now that same heartache starts taking over her mind and her heart -
And just then her beloved walks in - unaware of Asad's realization, Asad calls for her in a gentle voice - all he can see is his Zoya in discomfort - he, once again, sweeps off the hair lock from her face, blows air in her eye gently bringing back old memories...those memories were full of innocence and hesitation - this time the actions are more tender, more mature, even more meaningful..Zoya's heart cannot take so much - But that flicker of realization - 'that' feeling, that love - Asad has been always searching for in Zoya's eyes does not go unnoticed by Asad - but before he can see it covincingly, Zoya removes his hand from her face. Asad's eyes reflect a silent rejection - this first time lover quietly accepts the silent rejection and he tries to move away...
Just then, just when asad thought it was over the most beautiful moment came - 'zoya ne asad ka hath puri tarah se tham liya!' Till this day, it was always Asad holding zoya's hand and dragging her after him - but today - the intense hand lock of zoya and Asad, initiated by zoya, showed Asad that zoya was 'with' him - willingly - The handlock also depicted the strong support that zoya is going to be for Asad...And Asad gingerly, with almost disblief and then with a sweet relief accepted this silent izhaar.
For the very first time, zoya took steps forward, came close to Asad and caressed his face. Asad's face just melted with a surge of emotions...While the eyes spoke volumes to each other, she also took his hand to her heart and asked a question that would ultimately lead to the first time revelation of their love for each other. Asad did not resist any of these actions and he let Zoya do whatever she wanted to do, let zoya say whatever she wanted to say ---The lovers found each other... Asad also finally caressed Zoya's face with a gentle touch of love...And when he carried his love inside the house, Asad was a softer person. That teardrop from Asad's eye - it was a relief felt by his poor soul - that was searching for his true love and to finally realize that it was his and only his - It's Asad's Zoya!❤️
Next to pool side, asad was only a lover - full of compassion, love and admiration of the purity he had just witnessed in zoya's eyes, and through the innocence in her questions. When zoya came back to her senses again and asked the same question - for the first time, Asad did not leave saying that he did not have to answer any of her questions! For the first time, he offered to answer her question - the tone, the emotions, the expressions and their touch to each other - everything was perfect! For the first time, Asad took zoya's hand with love ❤️and placed it on his heart - the words that were spoken after that - the revelation of a deep and true love - soft voices, blended together, they complimented each other's words in this ultimate emotional union of these true soul mates - the first revelation of their heartfelt love for each other could not have been any better - their hearts are aching for each other and their hearts are beating for each other...
Pyaar ka isse pyaara izhaar toh ho hi nahi sakta! ❤️❤️❤️
Jab pyaar dil ko choo jata hai tab dil ko bada hi dard mehsoos hota hai -
Unsaid thoughts: asad had thought till now that he had lost his love, then he just found out that he misunderstood his love and he always had it. zoya just realized asad's love for her and she now probably regrets putting him through her own string of misunderstandings - That's why the heartache...
Here they come - in their supposedly half-full senses walking down the path of their first love - this time together...
ASAD and Zoyai - Zoya and Asad❤️

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Edited by ....Asya.... - 12 years ago
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beautiful update... continue soooner plzzz
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Love it,,,
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Awesome update!!
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a superb update...
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