ll Asya FF ll Hum Aur Tum ll Part 6 Updt [25 oct] - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I loved it thanx for the PM and update soon :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Asya...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Excellent
very interesting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Just read both updates, 👏This is awesome!
Love the way you write, you actually make AsYa's relationship sound beautiful 😳

Very nice start, please continue soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Part 3
Pyaar ke dard main doobey huye do dil
jab mil rahein thein aakhon ke raaste,
phasle jab mitt rahein thein bahon ke raaste
aakhon ki nami mein jab dil khulkar aaya
toh pyaar ka mano samaan hi bandh gaya...👏
When Two hearts, drenched in heartache of love
were meeting through the eyes
the distance between them was being closed in
by arms around each other
the softness in the eyes was showcasing the love
the atmosphere then just filled with love...
Asad offered to answer Zoya's question for the first time...😳😳😳
The soft tone, the aching heart twinkiling through the eyes,
the affection being showered by eyes, words, tone of voice, touch and just the feel of it all was enormous to drown anyone in the deep sea of true love...
No words can compare what Asad and Zoya felt at that time - that magical moment of completing each other's sentence while talking about blending together of their heartbeats, Asad and Zoya got lost in each other's eyes. Asad did not have to search in Zoya's eyes and Zoya was not stoppped from reading into his eyes...The expression of love had taken over their gaze at each other. ❤️
Now Asad holding Zoya's hand and placing it on his heart to express his love for Zoya was the first direct confession of his love. The gentle innocence of the declaration of first love to his beloved was as magical as and reminiscent of the many moments of their unspoken love at the very poolside...
The same poolside that had witnessed many moments of these two first time lovers in different shades of walk of their first love! This same poolside is now the witness of their first confession...
Asad's gentle but strong hold onn Zoya 's hand and Zoya's willingness to let him hold her hand...Asad pulls Zoya closer to him and Zoya bashfully tries to move away only to get pulled back even closer by Asad. The next beautiful moment is the lover in Asad pleading with his eyes to Zoya to stay close to him...
And Asad's Zoya willingly gives in and moves even more close to Asad

Them comes the most magical first moment... Zoya puts her head on Asad's shoulder but lands on his chest...Hand in hand, their hearts so close to each other, almost beating in unison - Zoya gently places her other hand on Asad's and Asad and completes their first hug by wrapping his other arm around Zoya ...The hug, the cuddle...their faces oozing the feeling of immense happiness, relief and completeness - they savor the feeling of that moment...as if Zoya's melting in Asad's arms and Asad's savoring every feel of Zoya next to him - they feel complete with each other and that feeling takes over the emotions on their faces...❤️❤️❤️
This magical moment...no matter what, will always be remembered by their souls...
Only to be disturbed by the reality surrounding them and Asad's unwillingness to give into the situation...these two first time lovers could stay in each others arms holding hands till eternity but, reality knocks...
Still, the same Asad who always leaves first, insists to wait for Zoya to go downstairs to have some pickles.😳
And then...when they come back to their senses - the first time lovers know...they know in their heart what happened but bashfully they play ignorance. Their stolen gazes at each other prove that they know what beautiful guilt they are carrying in their hearts...😳❤️
'Jaan ke bhi anjaana, aisa mera yaar hai'
(Even knowing about my feelings, how ignorant my beloved is)
Untold feelings: Asad knows how much he loves Zoya, Zoya knows something has drastically changed between her and Asad and both of them know what they felt for each other before the bhang and then the video has the rest of the story...their hearts know the magical moments that they shared and those are bound to surface at the right time...
Here come the first time lovers, walking down the path of their very first love, denying to themselves the existence of the sweet feeling they have in their heart at this time...❤️
For next Part I Need 55 comments and 50 likes in front post Please😭😭😭
Edited by ....Asya.... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pllease CComment😔😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey tis is superb...
luv it...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jazsidhu

hey tis is superb...

luv it...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...


k😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nyc
Pls continue[/QUOTE
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
wow nice part
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon

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