Originally posted by: Rarepearl
Yayyy me first for the first time.
You really are spoiling us with the regular updates, hopefully you're not gonna make us crave for them later.I have to comment about the 14th chap too, so yeah.It was really nice. Asad is all over the place, I mean he is so distracted just by the thought of Zoe being in the same building as him. even if he doesn't acknowledge to himself, we know he has started to care for her & that 's why he doesn't like her dragging herself into the mouth of death. by now he has understood that troubles visits wherever Zoe does, so in his pea brain & huge ego, he could only manage to yell out at her, hoping to scare her off to change her decision, Mr. Khan, you're in for a surprise then.well but still you really can't direct all your frustration at Zoe. Asad really needs to learn to behave himself & his big mouth. Humi was right, how much does he know about her to form opinions. Poor Zoe, I felt bad for her. she can't share her pain or loneliness with anyone.Chap 15:I thought Arjun was a young officer but no he's old. glad he has a good team to work with, but this Haroon guy is weird. I mean why would he be so excited at the thought of Asad knowing Zoe from before. I hope he doesn't use her to irritate Asad or hurt her feelings.For Asad, all I can say is that, even thinking of Zoya being in other men's company makes him uncomfortable & a bit jealous.I really appreciate Humi's mom at showering love on Zoya. So are Ayaan-Humi trying to play cupid? I hope Asad really loosens a bit after seeing Zoe in the rain. is she going to dance or twirl or what?Continue soon.Love.