One More Day Without You! Asya Three Shot - Page 11

Sorry for late comment. Much much better than current track of qubool hai. Love that zoya give a hard time to asad. I want asad work hard to convinced zoya. Hope when u reunite asya asad give his piece of mind to this SM people. Hope he give some bad language and sautela words to ayan. Razia going to be more evil. That means another mangalpur is coming.Pls try to reunite ASYA soon. Please

Beautifully written dea!!
Lovddd it!
Esp d sentences in blue..
Omg..u write so perfectly..
Eagerly waiting fo d nxt part..
Continue soon!!

Originally posted by: mysticlover

I would want Asad to be more daring... Zoya to be more stubborn... their love to be bolder... bolder enough to be proclaimed in front of the so called rigid society n selfish people... I would want Razia to be more evil so that Asad can whisk Zoya away...
I loved the update... I loved Zoya's determination to not forgive Asad easily... n I loved Asad's desire to be with Zoya... his longing for her... his impatience for her...

I guess Gul wouldn't dare to do any of these things,, she has totally spoilt the chemical nature of each character,, its time fah them to give best of their traits,,,
he should be impatient to hav one glimpse of her,, buh he's just siting in Khan villa to make few lame calls to Zoya,, he should go to her,, to SM by any way,, window, backdoors anything would work,,, buh he is't trying the way ASAD AHMED KHAN should do...

Originally posted by: Maheerah

😭😭😭...still crying...😆

I really like oops correction love this story to such an extent that i was eager for its 2nd part...😳

Awesome chappy👏...its actually way much better than Gul's crap...😡

Thanxalooot Maheerah!!
Gul has totally spoilt the main plot,,, brother's clash doesn't necessarily means construction of a love triangle or some crap like that,,,

Originally posted by: madhvi4gurti

its awesome!!!👏

im liking ur version way better...coz i doubt shireen gonna invite asad to nikhat's engagement!!!..she is such a selfish person...

continue soon!👍🏼

Yup shireen is sucha psychic person or b****,,, she wouldn't ever acknowledge asad's n dilshaad's sacrifices,, buh i thought its time to bang her head to floor,, she worth it

Originally posted by: tsering2013

ah!!! it was emotional...

Asad went to SM for NiKhat engagement just to have a glimse of his ZOYA...

Just to see her and talk to her.. I feel like crying for both of them...😭😭😭

when will this end????😕

IT was nice update...

Thanks for PM

I guess Gul wouldn't dare to do any of these things,, she wouldn't take asad to SM as soon,,
she has totally spoilt the chemical nature of each character,, its time fah them to give best of their traits,,, stubbornness, determination, boldness...
he should be impatient to hav one glimpse of her,, buh he's just siting in Khan villa to make few lame calls to Zoya,, he should go to her,, to SM by any way,, window, backdoors anything would work,,, buh he is't trying the way ASAD AHMED KHAN should do...
I can just hope that this track should end in 2-3 weeks,, buh it seems to be dragging,, once nikhat's prob is over then gafoor would throw his cards to stop asya wedding,,, totally Rubbish track,,,

Originally posted by: cutiesanya

I find.the concept very nice . That mixes the orignal
Epi with some change. Further update will be.interesting
To read . Nice.Banner

thanxalllooot
Yup Gul isn't adding required spices in the show... so we fans have their own fics to make it spicier n delicious😉😉

Originally posted by: snehalparab

😭 he is in so much pain she is in so much pain and this distance which had ripped their heart made me all sad but now I am happy that you have decided to move ahead and the story will go your way and that's sure it will go ASYA way . love you for the pm and sweet updates keep the work going on

thanxalooot due to shortage of time, i couldn't update earlier and build the story my own way,,, buh now am not going to follow Gul mata anymore...
this pain would definately end sooon,,

Originally posted by: AAK0007

Sorry for late comment. Much much better than current track of qubool hai. Love that zoya give a hard time to asad. I want asad work hard to convinced zoya. Hope when u reunite asya asad give his piece of mind to this SM people. Hope he give some bad language and sautela words to ayan. Razia going to be more evil. That means another mangalpur is coming.Pls try to reunite ASYA soon. Please

I guess Gul wouldn't dare to do any of these things,, she has totally spoilt the chemical nature of each character,, its time fah them to give best of their traits,,, their Love, Hatred, Determination, Eagerness, Stubbornness,
he would definately do "GIN GIN K BADLA LENA" thing,,,
Reunion is just 2-3 parts away,,,...
and would try to update asap so that we can unite them earlier,, am also waiting to write up the make-up scene,,,