One More Day Without You! Asya Three Shot - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rajnid68

ok..did you visualise yourself in asad and zoyas place. .

you brought out their thoughts beautifully. .
infact much better than Gul is trying..
she has muddled up their thoughts and feelings. .
yours was bang on ...
speechless and dumbfold. .
thanks for the pm


Gul has totally spoilt the chemical nature of each character,, its time fah them to give best of their traits,,, Asad and Zoya have always remained emotional yet maintaining their own traits, like asad wouldn't fall easily, if falls then don't accept and if accept then wouldn't step back easily,,
zoya would make asad to walk on his head to be convinced
all characters in orig show are just thinking according to track,, with short term memory loss...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Aneezarp27

Beautifully written dea!!
Lovddd it!
Esp d sentences in blue..
Omg..u write so perfectly..
Eagerly waiting fo d nxt part..
Continue soon!!



thanxalllooot...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome job... :)


Great work... :)

seriously,,,,, luvng ur ss...

update soon... desperatly w8ng for that.. :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
Emotional roller coaster ...asya moments well said 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice chapter. Was written beautifully. Please update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update😊😊..loved it❤️..soo beautifully written..waiting eagerly for the next update..continue soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Maliaa



Thanxalooot Maheerah!!
Gul has totally spoilt the main plot,,, brother's clash doesn't necessarily means construction of a love triangle or some crap like that,,,

Soo true..May guls mind rest in peace...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Maheerah

Soo true..May guls mind rest in peace...😆


it's already resting,,, 😉😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it😊
pls continue
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nice banner
and do update soon!!!

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