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Part 2:

It was 7 in the evening!! zoya was pacing around in the guest room worried, she wanted to meet asad... she felt sad... she just wanted to see him.. she kept praying allah to keep him safe and give him strength!! she knew he was broken, she was broken too but deep down she knew that things would get well soon, she had her two best friends with her, her raburt and humera... they were her only support.. she was so worried for asad that she decided to sneakout and pray at the durgah... she left a note in her room for ayan and humera saying she'll be back in sometime and sneaked out of her room...

At khan mansion:

asad was shattered.. he needed to get strong atleast for him ammi and little sister, her wedding was stopped too, he decided not to push his pain on them.. she decided to carryon with najma's wedding within a few days, he spoke to imran's family that they will get them married in 3 days... he dint want najma to face any problems... he consoled her and his ammi assuring that he was fine but he actually wasent.. he decided to go to the durgah and pray for his family and to give him strength!! sometimes tough times make a person even stronger!! he came to his normal self, the same akdu.. he was no more zoya's mr khan... he reverted to his older self, the stone hearted...

At the durgah:


Both asad and zoya reach the durgah, they sat opposite to each other, it was the same durgah where asad spotted zoya for the very first time, but this time both were unaware of each others presence...

zoya: allah.. mr khan, phupi aur najma ko takat dena!! unhe sahi salamat rakhna allah... main mr khan se bohot mohabbat karti hoon aur ye bhi jaanti hoon ki wo bhi mujhse bohot mohabbat karte hai... aur iss waqt unhe aapki zaroorat hai... please unhe strenght dijiye... wo iss waqt toot chuke honge... aur unke saame sach ka faash kijiye... mujhe mere mr khan se milwadijiye.. main unke bina nahi jee paungi...

asad: allah taala... meri ammi aur najma ko humesha khush rakhiye... mujhe himmat dijiye... main zoya se bohot mohabbat karta tha.. lekin wo mujhe chodke chali gayi.. wo jaha kahi bhi ho unhe humesha khush rakhiye aur unka hifazat kijiye.. lekin mere saamne khade mat hone dijiye.. mujhe unka saamna nahi karna hai... mera mohabbat unke liye mar chuka hai... (tears flow from his eyes) ur mere chote bhai ayan ko humesha khush rakhiye...

both light the candles and move out unaware of each other... both walk parallel on the road... dont know where they were heading to.. they were so lost in thoughts that they dint realise how far they had been walking, they were still not aware of each other, they were simply lost in thoughts, they reached a place where there was no single soul, it started raining heavily, they came into their senses and both were confused as to where they had reached, they could not spot the place, both ran towards the tree for shelter, both were on the other side.. they knew someone's presence...

zoya:
suniye...

asad: ji...

both look at each other with a shocked expression..

both: AAP!!!!

zoya: mr khan... (she goes towards him to hug him but asad moves backwards avoiding zoya, she felt like a needle poke into her heart, her asad was avoiding her...)

asad: aap yahan kya kar rahi hai..

zoya: wo... main... aur aap...

There was a slope just behind the tree leading towards the jungle... zoya by mistake slipped and she started rolling on the slope... asad's heart skipped... he screamed

asad
: zoya...

he was tensed... he immediatly jumped on the slope, hurting himself, he never cared about his life.. though he composed himself saying he dosent love zoya, deep down he still loved her and will love her forever... she was his life...

zoya and asad both land in to the jungle... zoya was lucky enough that she was covered by her clothes so she just got some small wounds and she hurt her leg.. as soon as asad landed all he did was run around and look for zoya.. he kept screaming her name.. zoya could hear him.. she was so shocked with the sudden fall that she dint get the voice to call out for him... but asad kept running and looking for her and he finally spot her.. he ran towards her and hugged her tight and started weeping...

At the SM:


humera and ayan went to the guest room to meet zoya... they found the note she left for them... at was 9 pm... she had left at 7... they got worried... both were in her room waiting for her... she dint turn up, they started to get tensed.. it was high time they go and look for her but by then shireen came in and humera had to hide, she went under the blanket and shireen assumed her as zoya, ayan suppoted the fact and somehow managed shireen to go away... she went

humera
: ayan ab hum kya karen... pata nahi zoya paji kaha hai.. unhe kuch hua toh nahi...

ayan: nahi humera... tum ek kaam karo, yahi raho.. main bahar chalke unhe dhoondtha hoon, zoya toh unka phone bhi chodkar gayi hai... agay wo yaha aayegi toh mujhe call karle na.. main chalta hoon...

humera:
theek hai... kuch pata chala toh mujhe call karo ayan... theek hai..

ayan goes out looking for zoya and humera sits in the room waiting for zoya and ayan's call, she kept praying allah to keep zoya safe...

In the jungle...


asad realised the proximity towards zoya and immediatly parted away from her... zoya was surprised with his sudden change of actions..

zoya: allah miya whats wrong with you mr khan...

asad: im sorry.. wo.. actually(started stammering)

zoya: ya allah!! please help this man!!(to herself: ek pal pyar dikhata hai, dusre pal ajeeb behave karta hai...)

asad: are you okay ms faa.. i mean Mrs ayan ahmed khan..

zoya: ji...

asad: chaliye... raat bohot hochuki hai... we need to get out of here... aapke ghar waale intezar kar rahe honge(says with a teary eyes)

zoya notices his face and feels sad, she cant tell him the truth either, she needed to collect proofs, both were walking and zoya's heg was hurt badly... she was unable to walk, asad noticed it and he carried her... zoya kept staring at him with teary eyes, but asad refused to meet her eyes, he kept walking...

zoya:
mr khan...

he never replies, zoya agail calls him..

asad:
ji miss... mrs ayan..(zoya cut him off)

zoya: im sorry mr khan...

asad: dekhiye.. mujhe aapke baat karna ka koi shauk nahi hai... ab filhaal hum dono yaha phas gaye hai.. ab yaha se bahar jaane ka raasta dhoondna hoga.. itni raat main kuch pata nahi chal raha hai...

zoya: mr khan... main jaanti hoon aap...abhi mujhse mohabbat karte hai.. lekin jataate nahi..

asad: (anger)chup rahiye ms faru,,, sorry mrs ayan ahmed khan... waise aapko chot lagi hai isiliye main aapko utha rahi hoon

zoya: mr khan baar baar mrs ayan ahmed khan, mrs ayan ahmed khan bolna bandh kijiye.. sun sun ke thak gayi hoon... agar aapko itni pareshani hai toh mujhe akela chodke chale kyun nahi jaate, kyun bachaya mujhe.. huh.. ab boliye..

asad
: aap thodi der chup rahegi toh bahar nikalne ka raasta soch sakta hoon main...

zoya: sadu!!! huh

asad: kuch kaha aapne??

zoya: kuch nahi... lekin main bhi dekhti hoon kab tak aap yuhi chup rahenge...aapko admit karna hi hoga ki aap mujhse mohabbat karte hai...

asad: dont talk nonsense...

he had enough, he put her down and held her shoulder and pulled her close..

asad: haan mohabbat karta tha.. lekin ab nahi.. aapne mohabbat ka mazak kiya hai.. meri mazak udaya hai.. mere hi bhai se nikah karke... aapko main kabhi maaf nahi karunga...

zoya: (crying) aapko galat faymi hua hai mr khan.. trust me..

asad: kaise yakeen karun aapke, aap ghar se bahar gayi kyun, aur ayan ke saath masjid main kya kar rahi thi jahan community nikah ho raha tha... ye sab dekne ke baad main aur kya sochu, isse saaf pata chalta hai ki aap aur ayaan shayad pehle se hi...

zoya cut him off...

zoya: aap aise kaise soch sakte hai mr khan... aapko mujhpe bharosa nahi hai

asad: tha.. aap pe bharosa tha., lekin ab aap us layak bhi nahi rahi...

both were in tears, the just turned away from each other, it started raining again... asad ran towards the shelter, he saw zoya struggling to walk, he lifted her and started walking looking for some shelter, he finally found a hut, he ran inside and then he put her down... she simply sat in one corner crying remembering his harsh words,,, asad to sat on the other corner... both fell asleep... on the other hand ayan kept searching for zoya... his phone was dead, he thought may be zoya had reached home, since his phone was dead, humera could not reach his phone, with that hope he reached home but was dissapointed to not find her back, humera and ayan were up whole night all tensed and worried...

In the morning...

Asad opened his eyes coz of the sunlight falling on his face... he saw zoya lying on the other side... she looked pale, his heart skipped looking at her in that condition... but he controlled his emotions, she was his brother's wife, she accepted the reality, zoya too woke up...

asad
:abhi rashta dhoondne main takleef nahi hogi... hume chalna hoga...

zoya: okay...(says so aoiding his eyes)

asad came over to zoya to help her stand but zoya refused...

zoya:
main chal sakti hoon mr khan...

asad: accha hua, i dont have to carry you...

zoya gets hurt listening to him, so does asad, he dint want to say that... they both walk into the jungle finding way... again zoya slippen and fell down, she was unable to walk, asad lifted her...

zoya: chodiye mr khan.. main khud chal sakti hoon...

asad: wo toh dikh raha hai,,,

zoya: mujhe aapki ehsaan nahi chahiye, aapki sympathy nahi chahiye.. please let me down...

asad ignore's her... he peeks walking and finally they reach the road, there was a bustop, asad placed zoya on the chair..

asad: aap yahi baitiye main apna gaadi lekar aata hoon, yahi durga ke paas rokha tha...

zoya dosent answer and turns away.. asad holds his eyebrows in frustation and walks off... he gets his car... the drove off to SM, they never spoke... and ayan and humera were worried, ayan told humera to lock the guest room until he returned back with zoya... he went to look for for..he came out of the house and just when he was about to take out the car he saw asad's car near the gate and ran towards it, he saw zoya and was happy...

ayan: bhaijaan mona ke saath... lagta hai sab theek hogaya...

asad walked out and opened the door for zoya... he lifted her, and turned around to drop her upto the entrance.. as soon as he saw ayan he put zoya down... zoya looked at asad with a surprise and then she saw at the sight he was lookin and spotted ayan... she felt bad.. both felt akward especially asad...

asad: aapka shauhar aagaya.. ab meri koi zaroorat nahi hai.. wo aapka khyaal rakhega,
with that he left even before ayan came closer... asad was in tears, he c**t see zoya with ayan, with a heavy heart and being strong he drove off to his house...

ayan: zoya... aap aur bhaijaan... kaha thi aap...

zoya: ayan main sab bataungi... pehle andhar chalo, kisine dekhliya toh.. abhi sabka uthne ka waqt hogaya hai..

ayan holds zoya's hand and helps her walk, both go into the guest room...

humera hugs zoya with tears...

humera: allah ka laakh shukr hai ki aap theek ho... kaha thi aap

zoya explains everythin to them...

ayan: bhaijaan toh kitne gusse main hai... unka dil pigalne wala nahi... lagta hai directly saboot ke saath hi unke dil par attack karna hoga mona!!

zoya: theek kehrahe ho ayaan...

Precap:
asad and zoya's misunderstandings are Over!! they reunite!!

zoya:
mr khan, main aapki baat zaroor sunungi lekin meri ek shart hai... main aapka wish poora karna chati hoon...

asad: zoya.. aapko pata hai...(she cuts him)

zoya: jaanti hoon... aapka ek hi wish hai... jo main abhi isi waqt poora karna chati hoon bas!!

asad: lekin zoya... ye kaise hoga...

zoya: dekhiye mr khan main aapki baat maan rahi hoon na... ab aapko bhi maana hoga... please mr khan (with tears flowing from her eyes, asad wipes her tears)

asad:
theek hai...

End of part 2... this was suppose to be an OS but this jungle scene was not planned, i just wrote it now, im planning to give few more parts so this addition!! so how did you guys like it?? Do comment!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Asad is angry and broken but he should give them a chance to explain themselves. Although, I don't blame him for not being in the mood to listen. And I liked that he kept his distance from Zoya.
Awesome. I loved it! Thanks a lot for the pm! Continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was amazing
jst brilliant
Loved it 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice continue soon plz 😊
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Fantastic update! Keep me utterly entertained!
Edited by Surish - 11 years ago
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Wow gr8
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Amazing
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it was awesome please do continue soon and thanks ton for pm
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Loved it!❤️ Thanks for the pm.😊

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